Reborn as a Little Girl, but Starting as a Slave?

The changes are simple, the writing is average, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. The daily adventures of a fugitive aristocratic lolita in another world. The heroine has the fighting skills of a superhuman in her previous life, and travels into the Western fantasy world with white hair. It is okay. The description of the battle scenes is average and needs to be improved. The other plots are not bad. Worth a look.

They are all reborn, and it's still a parallel world. The protagonist still misses his Highness and wants to repay His Highness's kindness. Is it really necessary? He died once and it's not over yet, and he's reborn again and again. When the protagonist is reborn as Charlotte, she feels that her mind has also deteriorated, and many things come up one after another. The protagonist doesn't want to think of ways to become stronger and improve his abilities, and has been doing commissions to make money. If Goldfinger is ridiculously strong, just find a gangster and get some money. Don't be too relaxed. The author is just for the word count. There are problems but they are not major and can still be seen.

After some inspection, it feels pretty good? It does look interesting, and I have the desire to continue reading. The writing is of average quality, but the branch line seems a bit too long. I don't know if the author has an outline. Maybe the author can speed up the progress a little, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers, and there are very few comments.

The subject matter written in big letters is very good (after all, I still like the theme of lolita with white fur and golden eyes + the magical world, awa), and the writing style is also good from the beginning to the end. At least it is relatively comfortable to read. The main reason is that there is a problem with the plot. For example, there is a plot in the middle where Shasti is looking for Kesha. I personally feel that too much pen and ink was spent on writing an uncomfortable plot. After all, Shasti is a human being in two generations. It is okay to find treasures to get close to His Highness, but for this reason, chasing Kesha and going against him I feel that the writing is a bit inadequate, and it also seems that the protagonist may have no IQ. (Of course the plot of interacting with the elves is pretty good) Let me tell you, if the purpose of this plot is to introduce Kesha, strengthen the relationship with the elves, and improve Shasti's strength, you can use finding treasures as a side mission, with Shasti improving his magic power as the main line, and "happening" to meet him during the intermediate mission (designed by the protagonist) Kesha, while improving his magic, brought together a (distraught?) Elf to form a three-person team. In the end, the three of them cooperated with Dreadhun and were still defeated. Shas upgraded to a higher level and turned the tide. While bringing the three people closer, it also paved the way for Kesha to share the treasure with his friends later. I think this kind of plot is quite good. (Of course, if the author has an ulterior motive for writing like this, just pretend I didn't say it😘) All in all, the subject matter is good, the writing is comfortable, and the plot is still lacking. This is the overall impression this novel gave me. I will continue to read it, and I wish the author good luck and write better and better. 😆 (This is my rough evaluation, please add if there are any shortcomings, please feel free to scold me if you are not satisfied😢)

I came across a new book called Change Singles during the summer vacation. I found it very good after reading it and decided to read it to the end😋

Hao Kan Di Nie [Bookshelf plus one]

The writing is okay, but it's too slow to push the story, and it's easy to scare away readers by changing the order and having so much ambiguity between men and women.

All in all, it's a very enjoyable Western fantasy novel.

It's hard to remember Western names originally, but the main character also had two names, and I was really impressed.

Seedlings, four stars for encouragement