After Rebirth, I Became a Loli, but Starting as a Slave?

After some inspection, it feels pretty good? It does look interesting, and I have the desire to continue reading. The writing is of average quality, but the branch line seems a bit too long. I don't know if the author has an outline. Maybe the author can speed up the progress a little, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers, and there are very few comments.

The subject matter written in big letters is very good (after all, I still like the theme of lolita with white fur and golden eyes + the magical world, awa), and the writing style is also okay from the beginning to the end, and it is at least relatively comfortable to read. The main reason is that there is a problem with the plot. For example, there is a plot in the middle where Shasti is looking for Kesha. I personally think that too much pen and ink was spent on writing an uncomfortable plot. After all, Shasti is a human being in two generations. It is okay to find treasures in order to get close to His Highness, but for this reason, chasing Kesha and going against him I think the writing is a bit inadequate, and it also seems that the protagonist may have no IQ. (Of course the plot of interacting with the elves is pretty good) Let me tell you, if the purpose of this plot is to introduce Kesha, strengthen the relationship with the elves, and improve Shasti's strength, you can use finding treasures as a side mission, with Shasti improving his magic power as the main line, and "happening" to meet him during the indirect mission (designed by the protagonist) Kesha, while improving his magic, brought together a (distraught?) Elf to form a three-person team. In the end, the three of them cooperated with Dreadhun and were still defeated. Shas upgraded to a higher level and turned the tide. While bringing the three people closer, it also paved the way for Kesha to share the treasure with his friends later. I think this kind of plot is quite good. (Of course, if the author has an ulterior motive for writing this way, just pretend I didn't say it [blowing kiss]) All in all, the subject matter is good, the writing is comfortable, but the plot still has some shortcomings. This is the overall impression this novel gave me. I will continue to read it, and I wish the author a big boost and his writing will get better and better. [Laughing] (This is my rough evaluation. If there are any deficiencies, please add them. If you are dissatisfied, please feel free to scold [cry])

I came across a new book called Change Singles during the summer vacation. I found it very good after reading it and decided to read it to the end😋

Seedlings, four stars for encouragement

All in all, it's a very enjoyable Western fantasy novel.

Well written, my favorite type

I have finished reading it so far. It is well written and the character is well portrayed. However, the improvement of the protagonist is a bit slow. It can be speeded up appropriately.

This is beautiful. I love it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's really good, good luck to the author!

Very comfortable writing style, not enough to read

How big is a surface-to-surface missile?

Come on, author, support the author

Not bad, pretty good-looking

It's very beautiful and the characters are well drawn.

Looks good, has a good rhythm

A good book, slow-burning, but the protagonist is not a coward, and it's good to read. It's too short, the author needs to update more