
The Third Book of Great Love Immortal 1
大爱仙尊1的第3本书
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 33k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
9.3kReads
5.8Score
138Shelves
20Chapters
135Listens
11.4kReads · all time





It's not very friendly to book lovers on both sides. The plot is just sketched, so why skip it? If you skip it, the emotional intertwining between the characters will not be fully reflected. As for Fang Yuan, he wouldn't act so impulsively, just eating noodles and then giving someone a cut. The writing style is a flaw, and it cannot just be a simple narrative. I rarely see scene descriptions, expression descriptions, psychological descriptions, and action descriptions, which are very bland. Please study writing I'm not just here to criticize the author. There are very few novels about Gu and fox monsters. I hope the author can realize this. If he doesn't change it, I think this book will be scolded even if it's not about eunuchs.