Star Railroad: I Became the Black Tower's Doll

Come on, author, you did what I always wanted to do but didn't dare to do. Although the writing style of the novel still needs to be polished, it is enough to be willing to write. Is it possible to use more natural language when describing characters and situations? It seems a bit like human-machine dialogue at the moment.

It looks good, but the plot of the game is too detailed. Just express the general idea.

How can I put this? Not only does he have a bit of Heita's character, but he also has his own personality. I originally disliked his character or felt bad about it. Of course, if you add a little protagonist, I guess there will be different effects. Maybe this article can reach 9 or so

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4s and A1s would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with Huaguoshan A sentence said by 108 Monkeys: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the character description is very good! This book is very well written. Good, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like immersive, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash Q to save Transformer Q, inside Sun Wukong The excitement and fear in the heart are vividly displayed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng Q? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from Q, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone to Siguo Cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting.

Chapter 77 I think is normal. The Black Tower has never cared about the time traveler but the White Tower. This time traveler has never met Changle Tianzun. In the eyes of Changle Tianzun, time travel is no longer fun. In addition, the time traveler basically has no character to become the protagonist, and the collapse of the starry sky railway is like this. Even the protagonist will die. After the heartwarming plot, it is a bloody reality! To put it bluntly, Bengtie is just a gentler version of Warhammer 40k! ! !

I really like watching the interaction between the protagonist and the black tower

"Heita! The antonym of Shirai is Shirai! Because Heita joined the [Despicable Black Tower Slander Association] and became a black man. So he is also called Shirai Kuroko!" "One of the legendary Sannin, with 107 brothers and sisters, all of them are Sani Towers! This is the origin of Yangcun!" "Later, I met an expert named Taikan Shige for guidance, solved the solitary wave algorithm, and finally killed Snow White, and merged with the seven dwarfs to become Taichi Yagami! I wrote the story of "Detective Conan"!" "This story mainly describes the story of Pleasant, the destined man who wanted to become the Pirate King, conquered Minato Uchiha, defeated Pikachu with the help of the S-class Valkyrie Elder Kinchi, and finally became the King of Elden!"

The subject matter is very good, I hope the author will continue writing I personally can't accept it later

This is the most perfect restoration of the original plot among all the fanfics I have read.

The theme and concept are good, but there are too many foreshadowings and unknown words in the early stage, and there is no timely explanation or foreshadowing in advance, so it feels very sudden and confusing.

Although it has reopened, I wish you the best! 👍

Give me five stars first [face covering]

Plain water, no taste... Come on~

How will the Black Tower react when the White Tower creates a monitor? It's so hard to guess!

Very novel book, I support it

Give it a five-star rating, keep up the good work

Good-looking, great-looking

Very good, good luck to the author.

Give me five stars. Come on!

It's okay, but I can't understand it a bit, and the word order feels weird. Come on, author, write more good chapters for us

Very good book with very novel subject matter

The structure is wonderful, the characters are emotional, and it's very interesting to watch! The Black Tower is a witch and a figure from the mysterious era! Improvisation is great! Come on!

Four stars is definitely 😁 Too many, I'm afraid you'll be too proud and won't update🤓👆🏻

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

All I can say is that I love looking good.

Very suitable for my taste

Come on! I think it looks better

Purely five-star praise

Encourage the author

666 I actually finished reading 110 chapters normally!