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To be honest, I feel that the Jinling area no longer looks like a simple game. I suggest that it be changed directly to the fourth natural disaster player's time travel [Cool][Cool][Cool]

Give me a five-star rating. Meow Meow is a relatively common game planning genre, but it is different from others. War Game, Begging for Peace, is relatively novel in design, and the resonance caused by the core of the game is quite shocking. Although there are game anchors, it is not old-fashioned. Everyone has their own advantages and strengths, and there is no The so-called brainless vase (sorry Sister Rabbit, I really scolded you before you woke up), whether it is our licking but calm big head, the rich second-generation Lao Yu with commanding talents, the real cheating Brother Jun, the alien leader Xiaotu, all have their own unique insights and ideas, as well as our protagonist Chun Shengha, who has long hair The abstract sunny male college student has his own bottom line and code of conduct. Although he has some shortcomings as a planner (Chunsheng's online name comes to mind for some reason, which fits the title), but only attractive games can make the creator's work more popular (that's why there is such a title as "dog planner"), meow Everything written by Meow is in line with reality. It can be seen that I have put a lot of effort into this aspect and checked a lot of information. I must have done enough homework. At the same time, Meow has many years of writing experience (although I am still a newcomer after writing articles), the writing is online, and the logic and plot are also online. So in general, I recommend it, and it will not be a loss to invest~[Note]

Meow meow, this book is not cool, it's super good. Meow meow, if you're tired of writing, just write some articles and take a break. After Qiu Sheng Chun Sheng, Zhu Bo will start a new book. Is the protagonist named Lin Xiasheng or Lin Dongsheng?🤓🤓👆👆

It feels like a group portrait. This is the only good-looking book in this genre that I've found, and it doesn't have awkward writing or bad jokes throughout. It still feels refreshing and closely adheres to the theme of "anti-war". Everyone in it has written their own personality and characteristics. There is always a setting that can impress people. But it's not fun to enter the dark room.

It's so beautiful, it always makes me cry in the little details. "Leave me alone", "I can still save you", "Let's all come together" and "Little Rabbit Don't Say Good Night" are a bit like a group portrait. The last book was so regretful, eh, eh, this book must be finished. Don't be tired, teacher, but don't take a break either [laughs] It's no surprise that the rating is high. In fact, it has improved a lot in the two hours I watched it. Finally, hello teacher, are you there? It's time to update

I read all the book reviews before grading. The good reasons are different, but the bad reasons are concentrated on: 1. The early pace is too fast and many people say it is like an outline (I don't care about this, after all, it is difficult to agree with others. I heard that the pace also slows down later, and people say it is fast in the front and slow in the back) 2. The plot is relatively dense (this also depends on the individual, I think it is quite interesting) 3. It is easy to be blocked if it involves writing about domestic war games (this reason may be to protect the book score) 4. I feel that writing about anti-war games is monotonous (this is the first time I have seen this kind of subject matter, and the author's writing skills are not bad so far I don't feel bored) 5. I can't simply empathize and just feel embarrassed (it depends purely on the individual) I think it's worth a look. Damn Neil, how dare you make me laugh and cry at the same time, I really have to punish you with five stars✋😭🤚

I haven't read much of this type of writing, and I feel that it can be rated at a medium level among the same type of writing. The story has the core but the author's writing power seems to be difficult to support. I think this book is okay. Generally speaking, it has some bad points, and it has a slight impact on reading. It has clear advantages and disadvantages. Readers can choose to take a look Poison Point 1: The writing is average. The climax is really well written and the emotional rendering is just right. However, other parts are more average. Some descriptions make people feel boring, confusing and meaningless. All in all, I have no desire to read. Poison Point 2: The rhythm control is average. In fact, I think the first and second games can be discussed in detail, for example, the character Doss in the second game has background quests and branch lines. The previous chapters were too fast and too little. As a result, in the early stage, the meaning of the running accounts was very strong and it was difficult to retain readers. Now it seems to have recovered. But I hope the author can edit it if he has time. Needless to say the advantages, the core of the anti-war story has always been reflected, and the intention of the full text itself is the biggest advantage. By the way, I would like to praise the opening introduction and final settlement of many games. They are very interesting. I personally like the settlement of the final ending played by Big Head in the new game. I hope to write more such humane and warm endings in the future. PS: Has the author ever thought that it would be interesting to try to write a game from the perspective of medical staff? Finally, I would like to extend my most sincere blessings to the author. Thank you for your hard work. As long as I can maintain the current situation and don't go into abstract expansions such as cultivating an interstellar game and becoming a Yu-Gi-Oh, I will continue to support this book.

It looks good. The early pace is a bit too fast. I feel like the ending of Jinling is a bit too refreshing As a cheating sharpshooter, I think the best ending is to guard a fortress, and his comrades around him die one by one. Only he was left to shoot down the last bomber, but he was also injured by shrapnel. At the last moment of victory, he raised the flag. The best ending for Yu is to let those female students and Yu Mo get on the cruise ship, slowly come to this side, and die at the last moment . . . . . . And so on, and finally cut the game process and highlights into a movie I feel that the Jinling sequence is not tragic enough, but it is very enjoyable.

There is nothing to say about the author's level, but this book is really not as interesting as the previous one that was cut off. That one was more like telling a story, and this one has too many of the same type of tomatoes, and it makes me feel numb while reading. It is all because of the author's excellent writing skills that I can continue reading.

Plot aspect There are almost no instances of big companies jumping around, and the senior executives are instigated to rebel. Both the game production side and the author update very quickly, but it's still understandable. There were a lot of jokes and fun when the protagonist interacted with people in the studio, which made me laugh uncontrollably. The plot also gave me goosebumps... Summary: Highly recommended!

It is a game maker with rich connotations and extremely enjoyable to watch. Even if you know that this is just a novel and the scenes in it are just games, you can't help but get emotional! The sand sculpture is interesting, and the following content includes the player's fourth natural disaster, so no matter how deeply shocked we are by the cruel history, we can still find laughs in it, and the exciting points depicted from the third-person NPC perspective are completely unstoppable! To be honest, my eyes suddenly peed when I read a certain paragraph. Author, do you have any clues? Don't give up on this book just because of the low rating. I highly recommend it (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ Although the content of the game is relatively short, what is coming to you now is the "Jinling" chapter! ! ! The author finally got rid of the habit of not writing about half of the super cool games, and began to describe the interesting stories in detail. For those who gave up because the plot written earlier was too fast, take a look here! ! ! I have only read the Jinling chapter now, but I finally took up writing a book review to bring you the wonderful current situation! ! ! [This is a good novel, don't miss it! Second editor: WOC, I have finished reading Big Head's 731... Thinking about it, the perspective of the NPC is very scary, and the Big Head's perspective is scary and exciting, and also very touching...

Re-evaluate: four stars Bad points: The first plot is too fast, and there is too little feedback on the game content; the later plot of Jinling is very long, and it feels a little top-heavy. However, the author makes up for this in the fifth update. Good points: The writing is adequate, and the rhythm of the plot gradually becomes comfortable.

Good-looking, good-looking The plot is compact and not procrastinating The process is lively and not boring Wonderful writing, not boring Happiness comes from it and people are at ease Once there is talk of a nuclear parallelist coming out, I have to give you five stars. If you didn't say it, I would have forgotten it. This is cheating, and everyone is doing it with knowledge [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] The group portraits are excellent. It's really not boring (>ω<) and the connection is okay. Keep it well Update, see again

In my mind, this book is close to a masterpiece on the subject of war. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I haven't seen such a good war-themed book for a long time. The story is very eye-catching and makes people want to read it. The writing is really good. I hope the author will read more. Good looking👀 Little Rabbit is great, no need to say more

I loved the last book so much when I read it, but I ended up losing it! Take a look at the author's new book. You will be attracted at first glance. Keep reading. You will almost be stabbed to death. No, be nice to me, author! How long have I been looking at you? I cried several times! Having a strong sense of empathy doesn't make you so ruthless. (Ｔ▽Ｔ)Show me too! Can't stop keeping it

The only shortcoming is that there are too few descriptions of the game, but this can be regarded as another advantage. After all, the lack of descriptions can leave a certain amount of imagination space for readers, at least it will not over-describe like other books, resulting in writing and cognitive problems [face covering]

I like it very much, and the pace is fast. Although there are many protagonists, they are also the finishing touch. The idea of ​​the game is also very good, it is different from other drawing games. That is, you can write longer, although the pace can be fast, but not so fast. The game in the novel not only touched the hearts of gamers out there but it also touched my heart. As a person who was born in a peaceful era, I was really deeply touched. But the touching points are very good, but the writing is too short. Before you have time to get rid of the emotion, you will go directly to the next game. I really like the main character and it's so fun. There is no messy emotional drama, no procrastination. The idea of ​​the game is really great. The content is also very interesting. Everyone is real. I really have to give a thumbs up to the game idea. Every character is the finishing touch. The game is just too short. The game can be updated quickly. But the game content can be longer. In addition to the big players, you can also update the passerby players. Idea. Among the big players, they haven't even finished their shot yet, so they move on to the next one. Based on the above, I finished reading it in one sitting. I thought it was necessary to pass the time with an interesting, fast-paced novel. Both sad and happy. [Blowing kiss]

I was super surprised. When I read the latest chapter, I found out that the author is actually the author of a novel that I liked very much before, and he stopped updating it. It feels like my wife secretly moved away and then changed her identity and continued to live with me.

It's been a long time since I've reviewed a book. I started reading Tomato in 2017, and there aren't many books that I find to my liking. But this book is okay, and the overall pace is really fast. It's very suitable for the fast-paced and refreshing market of Tomato software. Come on.

It looks good, and at the end you can add a timeline or make a world network. Connect all the wars in another world.

I'll go, I'll go! The author of Li Si is resurrected! ! ! Welcome back, this author's previous writing was great! The madness ends here. This book is also well written. The author describes the plot of the game played by the protagonist to a great extent (that is, those famous battles), weakening the real-life plot of the protagonist. The perspective is very novel and you can read it.

From the previous book, I read it immediately when I saw the author's new book. It's very, very good. Except for the fast pace in the early stage, everything else is very good, and the gameplay is also very novel. (Has the author's health gotten better?) I hope this book will stick! Come on!

The book is very good to read, but it has several shortcomings. One is that the progress is too fast. However, although the author has obviously slowed down later, it is still obvious that except for a small part of the plot, the rest is the anchor experiencing the game and then moving on to the next one. It is still too fast. The second is that there are some places that cannot be thought about carefully. You can feel that you want to write this way, but you have not thought about how to round it out, such as the part behind Jinling. NPCs have their own feelings. This may be just a small episode. The writing is very good and touching, but will this happen again in the future? The author has not written it. There is also the 731 game that follows. I feel a little awkward. Maybe it is a little awkward to write with fruits. Overall, it is pretty good-looking. There are almost no poisonous points. It can be said that there is no poison. It is recommended.

It's so good. It's the first book I've read in the past two months. It's great. The front is a bit simple, but the back looks better. There is currently no female lead, feel free to enter

Just keep it under control and worry about it disappearing one day. It looks great! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a magnificent article. The author's writing rhythm is getting better and better, and it's a rhythm that wants to open up and go high! ! ! [Sending Hearts] At first, I just clicked in because it was the first time I saw an anti-war game and thought the subject matter was novel. At the beginning, I really felt that the pacing was not well controlled, it was a bit too fast, and I almost abandoned the article. But fortunately, the author listened to the advice and slowed down the pace later and was more detailed. Like opening up the two channels of Ren and Du, he really wrote about the greatness of ordinary people in the war. At first, I was worried that it would be sensational, but in the end, the article didn't make any real sense, but it had the power to shock people's hearts, thanks to the narrative (and the bosses in the comment section). Although the historical events themselves have buff blessings, there are really not many authors who can write about them. And it has gradually separated from the real game and has originality. When I saw "The End of the World" here, I couldn't help but comment in advance. I usually only comment after I finish the book because I'm always worried about it not finishing. But this time I really couldn't help it. Only people who write articles know how difficult it is to make people feel grand in small scenes. The teacher always teaches you how to use small things to see big things, but I can't find the feeling when I implement them myself. The author is very good, and he wrote the feeling I wanted. The author must also be a broad-minded and generous person. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] In addition, it is rare to find supporting characters with distinctive personalities in this kind of article. I haven't read it for 2 months and I can immediately think of typical examples of characters in the comment section. It is really good. There are also many great people in the comment area, and there are many good comments. My writing style is too poor, and I may not be able to express my feelings, so I will quietly leave a long comment to support the author~[shy][shy][shy]

Nice! The game can also bring tears to the eyes. A good book not to be missed

So pretty! My favorite chapter is the hero. It is so well written. It is obvious that the progress from the beginning to now is very good. The narrative has slowed down very well. I hope there will still be no cp in the end. Come on! ! ! ! ! Like it very much

I'll go, I'll go, I'll enjoy this! ! Anti-war is a lifelong theme of mankind

Super good! ! I just hope that I can write more about the game process and other things that I would like to read (forget it if it is easy to be blocked), it will not be boring!

Very good article, easy to empathize with, but my eyes just want to pee