A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Growing Spirit Rice from the Start

So far it looks pretty good There isn't much of a classic plot. It's just that the number of words is too few The back part is too classic Just feel good Not to mention the two great pretense tools of holding your breath and disguise yourself. It would be too embarrassing to show off in front of Foundation Establishment when you are at the peak of your Qi training. Still unable to fly It's really embarrassing to watch

It's not bad. I personally don't like time travel. Adding it will affect the feeling a bit.

The rhythm is neither too fast nor too slow, and it suits my heart very well. Since no one has commented on it, I will be the first one to try it! Five-star praise! Quick update, old thief! Can't sleep at night! !

Good. So far, the plot and characterization seem reasonable.

Very nice, I like it.

Why did it stop? It was very well written.

Okay, okay, I get it.

It's pretty well written, so far it's okay

At first, it looked pretty good, but I don't know what will happen next.

What a great book. He is decisive in killing and has the energy of Old Demon Han.