The Fourth Disaster: Shushu, I Am Super Intelligent.

First of all, the background of the story is a game, which makes it easier for the "unreasonable" game to be added later to tell the past details. As a story generator, Ringworld is not as sophisticated as a novel for the time being, but aside from the gameplay, this is a Sims game, and it makes sense to be a character in it. The story tells that the protagonist was tricked into the game world by a cheating friend, and the development of this world is not limited by equipment. The protagonist operates his colony with the original purpose, interspersed with a large number of omissions of time, and selects important events to tell. The story progresses very quickly. I don't know how the author arranged the follow-up. (Currently in more than 30 chapters) To be honest, the author's writing style is not particularly outstanding, because it is unreasonable to use the in-game method to write such a grand construction, so I simply skipped it. Some of the stories and dialogues are very interesting, and the character construction is not very outstanding. There is a feeling of being too rushed. The protagonist The image of the almost obsessive protective mouse is not very profound compared to the image of a person who has traveled to another world. Most of them are issuing instructions, which is too monotonous. The inner monologue of the character is also mostly pessimistic. This makes the most attractive character Xiao Ker, cute and playful, kind but not a virgin, and strong. There are many problems, but it is also a rare article about the world. If you want to write about a life in the world, short stories are the easiest way. If you want to use this to describe a novel, it is very difficult. There are many details that need to be considered, and how to set the ending is very nerve-wracking. This also concerns the length of the article, so the author is already very powerful and guarantees such a high frequency of updates. (But I would like to polish it more) The author's writing feels very suitable for the darkness of the world. No one knows whether they can survive the next day. The rhythm of the story omits the same boring research, construction, and attacks. Although it has become very fast, this article has only been written not long ago. There will be more things that can be added in the future. Sooner or later, we will get rid of the current situation. This article does not have the smoothness of a cool article, the sweetness and touchingness of a campus, the redemption of lost heartache, or the carefreeness of strategizing, but this is the world around the world, everything is daily, and daily is everything.

The protagonist is a bit confused. Genetic ascension is not possible. Even if the combat minion is mass-produced, it still cannot defeat the Miriam cluster... The more serious method should be to use the leg of the Golden Appendicitis Empire to point the technology tree, but the protagonist has been hostile to the Golden Appendicitis before... As for this book, I think it is a novel carefully written by a player who loves Ring World. Although half of the writing has problems with the protagonist's portrayal of the plot, it can be seen that the author loves Ring World. The secondary setting of the game into a novel plot is very clever. Players who have played Ring World will smile after reading it. The masterpieces of those masters are various ice creams, while this book is simple and refreshing sugar popsicles. It can be said to be the "Minecraft Story" of the world, come on

After reading Er Ri Yue Qing's novel about life around the world, my mood was +6 Eating on the ground-3 Whispers of the Mind-6 The mood is broken and the entity is being released. The last straw for Hyacinthus was using foods containing bacon

The part about attracting the caravan into the ruins in the early stage is a bit confusing. You can add some negative things, such as: the caravan has a bad attitude, deliberately lowers the price, speaks rudely to Shushu, etc., To offset the negative effects of the caravan entering the ruins. Of course, this is just a suggestion. The other ones overall seem to be pretty good. There are still quite a lot of surprises. Players in the world can be human and do all kinds of things, but the protagonist cannot.

Haokanヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ The project that the protagonist fights would be like 😭👊🏻Life, can you let me go this time🙏🏻 🪦In my next life, I just want to be a child who won't grow up🤱🏻 🔥Someone to keep warm and rely on🌲 🙅🏻‍♂️You won't have too much to worry about❤️ 🌞Use the most innocent eraser📝 🧻It can erase the conflicts of life😤 😭👊🏻Life, can you let me go this time🙏🏻 🕰️Sometimes I am obviously very tired😫 🤔But I don't know why I insist 🏃🏻‍♂️ 🖤The cruel reality is crushing the inner strong city🏰 😢Wipe away your tears and look at the scrappy days🐔🐶 😆Just laugh it off😋

In fact, it's still very interesting, but after Chapter 40, the author got the golden Rubik's Cube and became obsessed with it. He kept writing about visions. It would have been better if he only used the visions as embellishments. It was also good to write about Shushu's daily life [facepalm], but after that, it was all about visions, and the taste of the book changed [facepalm]. In the end, the author probably cut the book because he knew he couldn't continue writing [facepalm] I hope I can rewrite a World of the Ring book in the future. The author's new book "Stars" is quite interesting now. I hope I won't make this problem again. Keep it up!

Good looking Like a real Ringworld player There is a lot of content in it. , Like expansions in the game, etc., The settings are also very good, and it seems to have a casual feel at the moment. There is also a trace of tension hidden in the leisure. It's a bit wavy and windy. I can't guess what the author wants to do next second. I can only say, well, the more I read, the more I want to read.

It's very strong, okay, I'll give you the heat that the ring deserves (￣▼￣)

Although I have never played a lot of the content in the game, I can understand it easily. The protagonist is recognized by others as Hyacinthus, and his own name, Hu Yingjun, is indeed a bit difficult to bear. Although tragedy is unavoidable, there is always a way to solve it. If it can't be solved... As long as the planet is still around, the story of Ring World will not end completely. Just continue.

Among all Tomato's books about the world, they are considered high-end (although Tomato doesn't have many books about the world), but the author's writing is really good and very distinctive about the world.

It's very good. Anyone who has played Ring World can easily see the fun in the middle. Are there any plans to include the original zombies? And whether all races will be added to the plot in the future.

It's not a big problem, death is also very common in the game world.

My backhand is a five-star. The best world-wide novel on Tomato. (No one wrote it originally)

Can you make fried rice smart for a lifetime [crying] If there is no fried rice smart words, Watasi

This is a rare Ring World fanfic. As a person who can't afford Yuan but is very interested in it, it allowed me to see that Ring World has this kind of gameplay. It also allowed me to see different Ring World stories. I like it.

It's a good book, keep it up

Fried rice smart impact🤤

It's a very good book, even someone like me who doesn't know anything about World World can still understand it.

It's so cool, even those who don't play Rimworld can understand it.

Author, your writing is indeed very good, but the world around is not popular. You can write about the world around the world.

The fringe world, a rare thing

Good looking, Shushu is so cute

Okay, nothing to say.

This one called Fried Rice Smart is really bad [I'm about to cry] Shushu speed update [Adoration]

Support, there are not many good books about rings

Is it possible to write about the world for a lifetime? Onegay, wow darcy!

It's beautiful and well written.

Good-looking. Yuan Shen is so good-looking.

It's okay, you can take a look

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