
RimWorld: Changing a Mouse's Life with Superhuman Intelligence
环世界:用超凡智能改变鼠生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 318k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- 第四天灾:鼠鼠我啊可是超凡智能Alternate title on Fanqie
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Only New Books: Works by Newbie Authors
Writing as a newcomer isn't easy. Please recommend other newcomers to me. I'll read their stories carefully and leave comments. I respect every newcomer who puts in the effort, because I'm a newcomer too. Let's help each other out!
I'm Out of Books.........so Out....please....help.......me.....
I have completely run out of books......... I am out.... of.... books.... please....... save me.....
New Author, New Book (Only Recommend New Books!)
We should show some love to new authors.
Any Books by New Authors? Let's Review Each Other's Books, Give Five Stars, and Add Them to Our Shelves
Looking for books like "The Cannon Fodder Characters' Beloved Little Princess". Something like "The Fool's Reversal" or with a cover like Yuan Dazhuang's. They're so cute.
How Long Does It Take for a New Writer to Make It? I’ve Been Writing for 54 Days
54 days. I finished my first book on day 45: 320,000 words, writing for 8–12 hours a day. I’m now planning my second book, but nobody’s reading the first one anymore. Is it really that bad? Am I just someone with no talent? (sobbing)
Looking for Books by New Authors
Tell me about any good books you've got.
The Lead Creates Their Own Units! Creates Them! Creates Them!
Looking for books like "Genesis: No Land? Ever Heard of Spiritual Qi Revival?" It could be about creating a world, or about everyone building their own troops and battling each other. Thanks, everyone!!!
Everything Feels Formulaic These Days. Can I Get Something with a Fresh Premise?
Territory-Building Novels with Rigorous Stats
Looking for a territory-expansion novel with reasonably rigorous numbers. Don't recommend one if the stats are inconsistent or the protagonist has items they never use.
Novels Set in the Worlds of Paradox Games
Looking for books similar to "1936: The Red Gunslinger of Georgia".
Why Did It Stop Updating?
Have you ever been engrossed in a book, only for it to suddenly go on hiatus? I was angry for ages, then found out why and suddenly felt so sorry for the author! 😭 "Record of the Six Paths’ Flying Birds" is still beautifully written. The author clearly put a lot of care into it, with no typos or awkward sentences. You can tell the author is in poor health, though...
Are There Still Good Books, or Is It All Just Vote and Review Farming?
A few words from the start and there are already 99 comments. Is every sentence and every page going to have 99 comments? Who the hell is so bored that they keep commenting? How can you tell it's good after only a few lines? Make it just a little more genuine, please. These fake accounts are ridiculous.
Novels Based on Steam Games
I'm genuinely puzzled. G Fatty is practically all-powerful in the gaming world, so why has no one really written novels based on Steam or its games?
The Protagonist Thinks They're Playing a Game, but It's Actually Reality
The protagonist is really good at gaming
Any Stories About Founding a Country and Building an Army in a Western Fantasy World?
Looking for books similar to "I Use Firearms to Beat Up the Various Races of Another World." Preferably no System.
RimWorld, or RimWorld?
Oxygen Not Included, RimWorld, Stellaris, Stardew Valley, TerraTech, and Factorio
Even if it's not about transmigrating to another world, something with a System, like a hypoxia game System, would work. Has anyone written anything like that? Please!
Lord-Building, Catgirls, Animal Ears, and a Vast World
Nothing brainless! Western setting! Thanks! Beast girls! Beast girls! Beast girls!
Severe Reading Slump: Are There Really Any Good Books on Fanqie?
Any Genre Is Fine!!! I’m Out of Books to Read
Reader comments 40
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First of all, the background of the story is a game, which makes it easier for the "unreasonable" game to be added later to tell the past details. As a story generator, Ringworld is not as sophisticated as a novel for the time being, but aside from the gameplay, this is a Sims game, and it makes sense to be a character in it. The story tells that the protagonist was tricked into the game world by a cheating friend, and the development of this world is not limited by equipment. The protagonist operates his colony with the original purpose, interspersed with a large number of omissions of time, and selects important events to tell. The story progresses very quickly. I don't know how the author arranged the follow-up. (Currently in more than 30 chapters) To be honest, the author's writing style is not particularly outstanding, because it is unreasonable to use the in-game method to write such a grand construction, so I simply skipped it. Some of the stories and dialogues are very interesting, and the character construction is not very outstanding. There is a feeling of being too rushed. The protagonist The image of the almost obsessive protective mouse is not very profound compared to the image of a person who has traveled to another world. Most of them are issuing instructions, which is too monotonous. The inner monologue of the character is also mostly pessimistic. This makes the most attractive character Xiao Ker, cute and playful, kind but not a virgin, and strong. There are many problems, but it is also a rare article about the world. If you want to write about a life in the world, short stories are the easiest way. If you want to use this to describe a novel, it is very difficult. There are many details that need to be considered, and how to set the ending is very nerve-wracking. This also concerns the length of the article, so the author is already very powerful and guarantees such a high frequency of updates. (But I would like to polish it more) The author's writing feels very suitable for the darkness of the world. No one knows whether they can survive the next day. The rhythm of the story omits the same boring research, construction, and attacks. Although it has become very fast, this article has only been written not long ago. There will be more things that can be added in the future. Sooner or later, we will get rid of the current situation. This article does not have the smoothness of a cool article, the sweetness and touchingness of a campus, the redemption of lost heartache, or the carefreeness of strategizing, but this is the world around the world, everything is daily, and daily is everything.
The protagonist is a bit confused. Genetic ascension is not possible. Even if the combat minion is mass-produced, it still cannot defeat the Miriam cluster... The more serious method should be to use the leg of the Golden Appendicitis Empire to point the technology tree, but the protagonist has been hostile to the Golden Appendicitis before... As for this book, I think it is a novel carefully written by a player who loves Ring World. Although half of the writing has problems with the protagonist's portrayal of the plot, it can be seen that the author loves Ring World. The secondary setting of the game into a novel plot is very clever. Players who have played Ring World will smile after reading it. The masterpieces of those masters are various ice creams, while this book is simple and refreshing sugar popsicles. It can be said to be the "Minecraft Story" of the world, come on
The part about attracting the caravan into the ruins in the early stage is a bit confusing. You can add some negative things, such as: the caravan has a bad attitude, deliberately lowers the price, speaks rudely to Shushu, etc., To offset the negative effects of the caravan entering the ruins. Of course, this is just a suggestion. The other ones overall seem to be pretty good. There are still quite a lot of surprises. Players in the world can be human and do all kinds of things, but the protagonist cannot.
After reading Er Ri Yue Qing's novel about life around the world, my mood was +6 Eating on the ground-3 Whispers of the Mind-6 The mood is broken and the entity is being released. The last straw for Hyacinthus was using foods containing bacon
Haokanヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ The project that the protagonist fights would be like 😭👊🏻Life, can you let me go this time🙏🏻 🪦In my next life, I just want to be a child who won't grow up🤱🏻 🔥Someone to keep warm and rely on🌲 🙅🏻♂️You won't have too much to worry about❤️ 🌞Use the most innocent eraser📝 🧻It can erase the conflicts of life😤 😭👊🏻Life, can you let me go this time🙏🏻 🕰️Sometimes I am obviously very tired😫 🤔But I don't know why I insist 🏃🏻♂️ 🖤The cruel reality is crushing the inner strong city🏰 😢Wipe away your tears and look at the scrappy days🐔🐶 😆Just laugh it off😋
In fact, it's still very interesting, but after Chapter 40, the author got the golden Rubik's Cube and became obsessed with it. He kept writing about visions. It would have been better if he only used the visions as embellishments. It was also good to write about Shushu's daily life 🤦, but after that, it was all about visions, and the taste of the book changed 🤦. In the end, the author probably cut the book because he knew he couldn't continue writing 🤦 I hope I can rewrite a World of the Ring book in the future. The author's new book "Stars" is quite interesting now. I hope I won't make this problem again. Keep it up!
It's very strong, okay, I'll give you the heat that the ring deserves ( ̄▼ ̄)
Good looking Like a real Ringworld player There is a lot of content in it. , Like expansions in the game, etc., The settings are also very good, and it seems to have a casual feel at the moment. There is also a trace of tension hidden in the leisure. It's a bit wavy and windy. I can't guess what the author wants to do next second. I can only say, well, the more I read, the more I want to read.
Among all Tomato's books about the world, they are considered high-end (although Tomato doesn't have many books about the world), but the author's writing is really good and very distinctive about the world.
Although I have never played a lot of the content in the game, I can understand it easily. The protagonist is recognized by others as Hyacinthus, and his own name, Hu Yingjun, is indeed a bit difficult to bear. Although tragedy is unavoidable, there is always a way to solve it. If it can't be solved... As long as the planet is still around, the story of Ring World will not end completely. Just continue.