I Become the King of Elden and Kill Through the World of High Martial Arts.

Read at least 100,000 words so far. The quality is truly top of the line. The dharma ring and the world of high martial arts are integrated very well. And if Lani and Xiaomei don't come, there is a high probability that there will be no heroine. I still want to see some more stuff from the Ring of Magic, but I guess it will be in the middle to late stages. After all, connecting two worlds is not easy.

So far, it seems pretty good. I can compete with Zhan Shen. I have some flaws and suddenly behaves uncharacteristically. The first part has the flavor of an old man's headband. After the twist, the plot slowly goes towards Bai Shuang Zhan Shen. It loses the epic charm. I don't like it personally, but the quality is okay.

I can guarantee that this thing will definitely score above 9 points. The plot is smooth and you can hardly find any flaws while watching it. The depiction of the battle scenes directly defeats most high-level martial artists. The world view is vast, with human beings, extraordinary beings, and gods intertwined The plot is bloody, but not rigid. The portrayal of the feelings between relatives is refreshing, with an overlapping of indifference and warmth. The former King of Elden returned from another world, created the Law of Destiny and became stronger again from scratch, compounding his strength and growth. The biggest difference from rubbish is that they don't pretend to be slapping them in the face. Their authors don't seem to know that these things were outdated 800 years ago. People who read them only think about things with cerebral hemorrhage, and they still regard them as treasures, as if they don't know how to write without these things. This thing is bound to become popular, it's just a matter of time. I'll put a plug here first. When it becomes popular in the future, call me.

5 Points are given to the Dharma Ring. To be honest, the Chinese translation of law means the power of rules. It is a definition that belongs to an individual alone. To integrate the Golden Law is to incorporate your own rules. But the concept of destiny is somewhat secondary, and it has nothing to do with the law, so it is a bit mechanical. Secondly, the soul system and Gaowu are somewhat incompatible. The level of power is not too clear. After all, gods are also afraid of justice, and a shield poke can kill the one at the gate of god. Of course, this just feels out of character, and it does not prevent us from seeing the protagonist hunting giants and releasing the Esti meteorite in the world of high martial arts. It's okay if you watch it for fun.

It's so cool, so cool. I hope the author can keep it this way. Don't be like other authors who dwell on sissy emotional problems for dozens of chapters and only fall in love.

I'll give it 4 stars first. Generally speaking, it's okay. Big Poison doesn't have it. Little Poison appears in front of him from time to time and accepts the first believer. It's too awkward, although I know it's to avoid ambiguity. Then it's a little awkward to teach people. As a referee, the purpose of pretending is too strong. The content after that looks okay

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, urban imagination + Elden's magic ring + Western fantasy powers + cool routines. (Rebirth of King Elden in the City) Wouldn't this routine be easier to understand if the title of the book were changed? The ideas are there, the writing is passable, but the plot is far from satisfactory. The book wasteland is reluctant and looking forward to growth. Xiao Langjun has something to say: "There are too many famous scenes in "The Little Soldiers of the Qing Dynasty", "The Protagonist's Aura Without Asking" and "The Unexpected Plot Development", so I can't complain."

Although I have never played Elden, the writing is really good. I even went to read the plot of the game. I wonder if I will write about those demigods in the future. The author should update it soon [please update]

It looks good, update quickly. Even with such a bad subject matter, can you write to such an extent, Hajizu?

So far it's quite interesting, I can keep reading without getting bored.

So far it seems to be quite good, there are no poisonous points, and some jokes from the game can be incorporated into it. I hope the author will not run away. Novels with the background of magic circles (or souls) are quite rare in Tomato. I really hope the author can write better and better [Sending my heart]. Hehe, I must read the whole novel.

I think this book is very interesting and the plot setting is very interesting. As the second creation of Laotou Huan, it has traveled back to reality, so relatively speaking, the concentration of Dharma Huan in the early stage is not high, which is interesting. The protagonist creates his own laws and becomes his own god. There are also various gods in this world. However, the novel should be labeled as a group portrait. There are many words in the book describing the experiences of the believers, and they are also given CPs (probably). There is currently no clear heroine.

I am very tolerant, but I have been beaten and killed all the way from the beginning of my guidance. In the end, it is fate. How about you change it to self-reliance and struggle?

The author is very thoughtful. The characters in the book are not black and white. Some of the plot and foreshadowing settings are natural. The world view is also very interesting. Overall, it's very good, and I look forward to the author's subsequent expansion.

It has a future, but it still lacks the feel of the Dharma Ring.

Good book, although I haven't played much of Lao Denghuan, but the strong character of the king is reflected very well in the male protagonist, the plot is very interesting, and the writing is good, but it's a pity that there are still too few.

No, not enough, not enough, not enough, not enough. Look at the mouth and teeth.

It gives me an aesthetic feeling. They all say "Zhan Shen Huo", but neither the fanfic nor the original work "Zhan Shen Huo" is as beautiful and beautiful as this novel.

The friendliness of the Soul players, and it all impressed me! I will burn whoever burns wood.

The writing is very good, and the style of the novel is also very novel. The story of Blue Star as the next "junction" and the King of Elden mastering new laws and fighting the gods again is really touching.

There is no invincibility frame for rolling in the real world, there is no execution, and shield rubbing is useless.

The plot is okay, but the gap between ranks is not very obvious.

It looks good, I just want to see Meimei's shadow hanging around the hero's neck from behind

It's so cute and I love watching it. If a good-looking old man's ring broke off before, please don't break it [I'm about to cry]

In general, it is a group portrait article, but it cannot be written well, and some of the characters are not very good. The protagonist's role is a bit too little. Come on, author

This book is one of the best in Elden's Ring written by Tomato (so far). In terms of rating, it should actually be higher. It should be about 8.2. I don't know why it is so low. Out of 5, I can give it about 3.5.

One of the few good ones in the Dharma Ring book, keep this rhythm, no routines, no heroine or Meimei and Lara, just keep the logic, come on!

It's a very good subject, the world view at least hasn't collapsed, and it's very comfortable to watch, but why is the rating so low? 🤔

How can you sleep with only one update a day? [Smile][smile][smile]

Update, can you do the wave scene, Elden's Circle, King of Promises carrying a Rani, or Melina?