[Sweet country girl vs. calculating CEO from Beijing’s elite circle]
[Love at first sight + years of secret pining + both leads are virgins + the male lead fights tooth and nail for her]
Su Yan has lived in a small town since childhood. Humble, polite, gentle, and quiet, she’s the perfect girl in everyone’s eyes. When her father died suddenly five years ago, she learned just how cruel and fickle the world could be.
He Qing Shi is the heir to a powerful Beijing family, born into privilege and influence. He’s cold and brooding by nature.
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After experiencing the world’s indifference and cruelty, Su Yan decides to find herself someone to rely on. After turning down He Qing Shi’s first confession, she takes the initiative to get close to him and tease him, all to give herself a fallback plan.
A jealous rival claims that the male lead only likes Su Yan because she looks just like the girl he can’t forget. Furious, Su Yan runs away.
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One day, He Qing Shi sees Su Yan at a hotel with another man. They’re laughing and acting intimately. His eyes bloodshot, he strides over, grabs her wrist, and forcibly pulls her into a room.
The man tugs at his tie, his voice hoarse. “Did you run away because of him?”
“Yes.”
“Fine. Very well!”
He loses control completely, caressing her porcelain-pale, rosy cheek as a wicked smile curls across his lips. “You won’t get away tonight.”
The short story is good and interesting. It's just that the ending is a little rushed, and it would have been better with two extra chapters.