The Development of a Winery

I don't care what the rating is, but I don't accept the self-righteous misinterpretation and abuse of my characters by some people who don't understand the words. You don't have to read it if you can't stand it. It's okay to give it a low score if you think my writing is not good. I just hope that everyone can judge whether it is bad or not through their own reading. This is a serialized novel. I care about the coherence and rationality of the storyline, and I also want readers to have the same reading experience as my creative ideas. Therefore, a lot of content will only be explained at the appropriate time. It is impossible for me to give out the entire plot outline and all the details of the character settings at the beginning of the story. That would be boring. As for individual reviewers, I don't quite understand how you read the book. You can't see Blanca's mental illness. You can't see him admiring his brother. You can't see him worrying about his brother. You can't see Gin who is about to be beaten to death by his brother. He stopped his brother from saying a few words for Gin and let you see it again. Why does he come here to tell everyone that the protagonist of this book is a love-minded wolf with white eyes? Is this right? Also, Blanca is from the research team. He is just not good at fighting. It's not that he can't do anything. You didn't see his ability, so you just thought of yourself and said he was a waste. Is it reasonable? You didn't read the character's background, nor did you read the subsequent explanations. You output the part where he got sick during the duel, and then you came here to give me a bad review. I think you are really rude and don't understand what respect is. Finally, let me say that Blanca and Finette are the two personalities of Uno Hisao. The protagonist of this article is Uno Hisao, not just one of them. He is the first character I created, and I cherish him very much. Everything about him is carefully thought out, and nothing is a whim. I will not change his settings because of other people's preferences. The timeline of this book is very long. The protagonist and Gin met when they were 10 years old, and it has been 20 years since Conan was released. There is a process of change in both thoughts and emotional cognition. This article is not a purely refreshing article. The protagonist has to go through ups and downs to change his mentality, so he may fly a few knives on the way to growth, but overall, the overall tone is relatively cheerful... I am not a professional writer, and I wrote this article for my own enjoyment. It is easy to share it. I hope everyone can read it and enjoy it [blowing kiss] (Don't spend money, don't spend money, just use persimmon wool |•ω•`) No, I just really like the story I wrote. I'd like to give it a five-point rating [pinch]

It looks good. I really think it looks good. Let me evaluate it objectively. Discuss some issues 1. Blanca's love brain In the early part of this article, Blanca did feel a little enthusiastic about gin and ranked the importance of gin relatively high, but then again, let's look at the settings! This is a fine point, teachers, not to mention that he has depression. I don't think this approach is inconsistent with the character, and Blanca is a growth-oriented person. He and his brother are getting better step by step. We are not a great novel. Please give the protagonists room to grow. If you really can't stand it, you can read it after more than forty chapters. 2. Blanca is too weak It's true that our Blanca is not good at force, but we are not weak in pharmacology. We have researched many products. We have super computing power. He is involved in almost everything related to computing power. We were a social terrorist in the first life, and now we are also an expert in negotiation. He, his brother and Gin have a complementary relationship. I don't think this is a difference. Does it mean that all three of us need to be omnipotent to be the so-called strong script? PS: The writing is really good. Don't doubt yourself. I actually only liked to read the redemption stories of Police Five before. I opened this article purely by accident, but I have to say that I have read this article so far and I think it is very well written. It is worth continuing to accompany it for a while to see its ending. Please keep going, as long as you work hard, you will definitely have a happy ending [Blow kiss] PSS: Friends, if you don't like it, then don't read this book. We can meet again in other books. Don't criticize the author. Some people have criticized him and opened a chapter to explain the writing ideas. I finally found a good article. It even updates 5,000 times a day. Don't criticize such a good author. Where can I read such a good article? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] My opinion is that the author can add HP elements in the introduction, because to be honest, the chapter of HP is not too short, but it is really not friendly to readers who have not read it and do not understand the relevant content. At least for me, I hope to skip reading the content of HP. This is a surprise, but it is not mentioned at all in the introduction, so I suggest that you put the comprehensive HP in the introduction.

Emm... The writing is relatively good and the plot is not monotonous This is also the comment I saw more often, "The protagonist is too licky." Regarding this, the author seems to have said in one of the comments that this is indeed the protagonist's disease, but I did some calculations. Let's not talk about the idea of ​​the integration of primary and secondary personalities. Suppose that in my impression, "my brother" is the brother in my body. Compared with Jitui... Uh... I may be more inclined. Yu recommended to him that in the article, Finette has always treated Jiu Sheng in a protective manner. Maybe my brother has never received such a fully automatic bodyguard, which cannot be converted, but based on what Finet has always said to Jiu Sheng, he was born entirely based on Jiu Sheng's wishes. I can't tilt the balance in the other direction (at most it will be a tie). Let's talk about Gin. I myself can be regarded as a pusher, but more importantly, I am the main pusher. It is indeed a grievance for Finette to substitute it with a subjective thinking, but in general, I am more able to accept the statement that Gin is Jiu Sheng's "spiritual support" than a push. Let's talk about the love line. The introduction clearly states that the love line may be slow, but I really can't tell what kind of "like" in the article is. I personally think that love love can be ruled out first. It may be more like dependence on a savior...? (Including abstract) (The last one is just my personal opinion) I feel like Kusei persuaded Finai to beat Qin-chan a little too many times in the article...? I can understand the feeling of not wanting to hurt Jitui, but for a man who has been a law-abiding young man for more than 20 years in his life, even if he has seen blood in the past ten years, it seems that he has not made it clear whether Kusei actually did it on his own. A person (who should be slightly... At least physically afraid of death) has repeatedly known that Qin-chan wanted to do something to him, and even put a gun to his head. I can't quite understand the push. Of course, I may have some brain problems. If I was really pushing, he would put a gun to my head if I had no desire to live. I would be excited (?) Because I have never been threatened by my life, so I can't experience it exactly. But one thing is certain. There are two reactions, either excitement, fear or even shock. I shouldn't be able to persuade others. All in all, if I hadn't read this book, I might be able to find it in the historical records in who knows how long. Thank you to the author for your support [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I stayed at school for a day and thought about it for a day. If I were the one to push it... I would be almost stupid... Because in most of Jiu Sheng's impressions, Finette is a big boss who can rely on him everywhere. In the current situation where the strength can crush the other party (Gin), he will indeed intercede for the other party. Again, this book is from the main perspective to let readers experience it. In, like a plot in the book, the boss asked Gin to return to Tokyo immediately. From a subjective perspective, it may be that you said you would accompany me for half a year one second, and you will leave the next second. But from a relatively objective point of view, if Gin does not return to Tokyo, how can he fulfill his promise to become the head of the headquarters action team as soon as possible, and Kusei will be very happy (?) To let him go after he figures it out. Maybe the reason why I stayed up late yesterday is not very clear. If you have any opinions, you can also put them forward [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Great support for the author [Like][Like] You don't have to think about things based on other people's comments. I believe that every reader gives suggestions in order to see better works. I thought about this book carefully. The love line is as eye-catching as the love line, and the main line is also very novel. I have never seen any Ke Tong go to South America to develop! This book is the only book review I have written in so many words. The author is really great. [Like] [Like] At least I haven't seen any typos. I hope this book won't be overwhelming [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is very good. Although some people have objections to the main character of the protagonist, I think the writing of the characters is quite good. After all, the main personality has been fond of gin for many years (it's similar to the feeling of chasing stars, even good friends will have disputes because of their fans of different celebrities), and respects the sub-personality more than they like it (of course it was cured later). I hope the author will not be disturbed and just follow his own ideas❤️

The author's writing is very good. The main character is schizophrenic, but it does not affect his daily life. The two personalities can take turns to rest. When I first read it, I did feel that Blanca was a bit licky, but later on when I was drinking gin, the author wrote very well. For Blanca, Gin is the person she wants to be, and the person she has always liked. She is a bit of a spiritual pillar and idol, and Finette was born. Although Blanca licked the Gin, it did not hurt him, whether it was mentally or physically. Giving Gin something was also due to the infinite gold coins or renewable fish roe. Blanca gave Gin some of those things and he might think it was insignificant, just like the Sherlock Holmes book he just got that he could really burn if he didn't like it. Later, after Gin made Blanca sad, he didn't stop Finette from playing Gin. Although Blanca interfered when Finette was playing Gin, I think that was because he knew Finette's strength and Finette would not be hurt. In the end, Blanca stopped him because although he was sad, he still liked Gin. Finette and Blanca also feel that they are the most important. This is what I thought after watching it

This book is really beautiful, the characters are very interesting, the storyline is rich, and every picture is very fat. In addition, I also want to say, don't give up the book just because you have a bad impression of the protagonist in the early stage [crying]. I think you can pretend to be yourself and your own cat. If your cat hurts you for something, your family will want to teach you a lesson. I think it's normal to feel distressed and reluctant to let go [grievance], and after Gin sees the surprise prepared by the protagonist for him, there are almost no plots later, because it can be said that he has enlightened, and I also think the early plot is very reasonable. For details, you can see the author's explanation [blowing kiss] later, and the author is very interactive. And I feel that the character of the boss in this book is also very interesting. It's different from what I've read in other books. All in all, this fanfic is really super, super, super interesting. I'll be scratching my head if I don't read it for a day [shy]. The author, please don't give up on the book, no. But I will really cry to death. I have read several discontinued novels [crying]. The last thing I want to say is, author, your writing is really beautiful. Don't doubt yourself because of some people's comments. I really like this book [shy] [blowing kiss]

I saw chapter forty-six. Briefly comment on your reading experience. In short, just get used to it. The previous plot can be summarized as follows: the protagonist is Gin's dog-licker (inspiring recommendation), the protagonist's sub-personality is the protagonist's dog-licker (no reason), the protagonist does not fight back when Gin is beaten and scolded, and the main focus is pure love. A love that even my own sub-personality doesn't understand. He would be sad if he was treated indifferently by Gin who didn't understand what he was talking about. If the sub-personality stepped in for him, he would kneel down and beg for mercy or act coquettishly and beg for mercy. Because there are a lot of words describing the sub-personality, it often brings people into the sub-personality, which is quite frustrating anyway. But it's quite reasonable. As a social animal, the protagonist has obvious dependence on the sub-personality, and the sub-personality puts his ideas first and supports them unconditionally. This is understandable. The protagonist likes Gin and his mental state is too advanced, so he is completely immune to Gin's behavior. It is understandable for this kind of madman-like behavior. The plot development that the author wants may be that the protagonist who does not understand his own feelings touches Gin with his wholehearted trust and support. In terms of skills, he may impress Gin with his special skills in the future. Love will come when two people are of equal spiritual status. Although from Gin's perspective, it's a bit puzzling. This is easy to understand. But so far, the sub-personality and Gin are more compatible than the main personality... I was born because of you. The substitute and the main character, chasing you as the target, the two strong forces motivating each other to chase each other, and the sympathy for their opponents. I bring my beloved weapon to celebrate you ascending the higher ladder. Reading this article, I had the illusion that I had a big dog. Glazed eyes. JPG

In the early stage, Blanca chased Gin, but Gin ignored and resisted, which made me unable to respond [grieved] [almost cried] in the middle stage, I was caught off guard and was fed a mouthful of Fernet and Gin, which made me burnt on the outside and tender on the inside [Petrified] [Petrified] in the later stage... I haven't finished watching yet. In short, Narcissus is the best. . . The author's writing is really good. [Like] I probably ate too many cookies. A little knife would kill me. And actually, I am a pure lover at heart, and insisting on watching it after reading the introduction is purely for the purpose of being abused. So the author is really good at writing. Even though I knew it was going to hit the point of danger, I still couldn't bear to leave. I felt uncomfortable while reading [crying][crying][crying]

The progress of this book is relatively slow, but the narrative is very detailed. Whether the characters are original or from the original work, the described image is very three-dimensional, giving me a feeling of living in another world. If you can't accept that the protagonist has two souls in one body, you can avoid lightning yourself. Blanca is the cutest cookie! I hope I can have a friend like Finette by my side *^_^* who is reliable and helpful. The pair of deputy CPs, Kasasha and Grappa, are also very easy to get along with! Reunion, two-way running, two-way secret love, two-way strength, mutual favor, it's just full of buffs, okay? OK The most important thing is that the author is very serious, can write and draw, and every reader's comments are carefully read🈶.

I read it for less than an hour, but found that there are no book reviews, so I will review it. This book is very funny and good-looking. As a fan fiction, it ranks among the top five among the dozens of books I have seen. Not to mention other things, the plot, characterization, and logical coherence are all very good. I laughed in my heart from the beginning to the end. Furthermore, I really want to have a sub-personality like this, who is almost omnipotent and loyal to myself. Because it is a new book, the rating is not up, but I believe it will definitely be 9.0 In a short time. I will give this book to everyone. Emm. The next 20 chapters don't quite fit my taste

Hmm... Just seeing it now, I think the author's writing is very good, and I quite like the writing style... The bad thing is that the protagonist's character is so... Good that it makes me feel a little licked Blanca → Gin → Fernet → Blanca But the author said that it will be reversed later This is a relief to me. Can the author or someone give me some insight and let me know a little bit about the follow-up development? To be honest, this article is very slow. I don't know how long I can keep going. I've been waiting for Gin to be better with Bu. At this pace, I don't know if I have to wait for a long time. (Personal opinion, the author said it will be changed later, so let's deduct one star for the early love brain) Actually, what I want to say is, when will Gin fall back in love with Blanca? I'm so impatient that I'm about to cry.

I am also a fan of piano. To be honest, I can't find much that I can read in Tomatoes. If I hadn't been an omnivore, I would have starved to death. However, this book written by you, the author, stands out among many colleagues. The author's writing is very good and very detailed, but the volume is small. Although there are at least four to five thousand words in one page, it is still not enough [crying][crying][crying]. I hope the author will publish an update from time to time.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but some in the comments said the main character is too licky. Let's make it clear that they are the same person, but their personalities have split due to illness, so one is extremely rational and the other is extremely emotional. So they are normal people when they are together

Wow, I just realized that I haven't rated it until now [laughing and crying] I should be one of the first to start reading this book. I started to catch up on it on the second or third day after it started to be updated. When I first read it, Blanca gave me the impression that she was just a cute and coquettish character. Because of the settings of some things such as fish roe, I initially thought it was a cheating type of story. But later, starting from South America, I really got to know Uno Hisao as a person. He is contradictory and strong. It was also at this time that I completely separated Finette and Blanca. As Blanca grows up after coming to South America, he will do things to the best of his ability (although when others tell him that he is doing well, he still feels that Blanca has a little inferiority complex), cares about his family (especially his brother and Gin!), Has a little bit of sinisterness (boss, Sister Bei: this is called following the heart!), And the overall character is becoming more and more full in the following chapters. (It turned into a black-bellied cat.) Finette, I have also thought about whether it would be fused or separated before. At first, I thought of him as Uno's other side (there seems to be nothing wrong with this) or Goldfinger🤣. Later, I also learned that Finette and Blanca are truly inseparable and need each other. Fenet will confirm Blanca's choice, and Blanca will affirm the significance of Fenet's existence. Gin, on the other hand, is no longer cold and strong in the traditional sense, but has watched Gin grow up little by little. From the beginning, he didn't pay special attention to Blanca, but later he was moved but restrained. He would be sad because of the cat's departure and prepare a small blanket for the cat. Let me see a flesh and blood Gin. The most important thing! There is no backstab from the boss or Sister Bei! (Sister Bei: It's too late for me to knock on CP!) Finally, I just want to say that it is more important for you three to live a good life than anything else!

My mother's love exploded when I saw them, they are all super cute babies... [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I have the urge to take Dada and her cub home together [Send heart] [Send heart] The corpse is warm [Send heart] [Send heart]

It's very interesting. The main character is quite deviant in most novels, but he is still better and more powerful than ordinary people. Write according to your own ideas, there is no need to change anything in front of rude people

Blanca the cat is so cute. . . Jazzy cat. . 😄 Finette's little wolf is also so cute. . Good grandma. . 😘 Qin-chan is also so cute. . This wife-chasing crematorium is cool. . 😊 Summary: pure love nb. Double strong nb. Narcissus nb. 😍 My attributes are still too complex. Blanca the cat is very strong. . 😌I feel so desperate every time I see people saying cats are weak. . 😰Cats are very powerful snipers. My IQ talent is at a level that even my eight lifetime IQs cannot reach. . He is very talented in firearms, props and experiments. . 🥰And he is also the leader of the organization. . 🤒 Blanca Cat didn't go to help Qin-chan without any thought😫. . I forgot which one it was from. . Maomao said that Qinjiang couldn't use Finette as a tool to train with him. . 🤧Maomao also likes his brother very much. . 🥺Qin-chan is redemption, and so is Finette. . 😢 It can be seen from the above that I like Blanca the cat the most😋 The author's writing is very good. . People are also very active. I can also draw. . The cover and most of the images are produced by the author. . 🤓 The ones where the future and the present are intertwined may not be very friendly to quick readers. . Reading quickly can be messy. . Overall, I don't have any bad parts. . 🌚🌚

It's not the type that has very obvious characteristics, but the beauty that flows naturally and smoothly. Based on this, this book by the author has become the top one in my heart. So please give more [send heart][send heart][send heart]🥹🥹🥹🥹😭😭 The author's writing style is very good, and she also said that she likes to pursue reasonable logic, Aile Aile, okay [love], and she will also share the travel notes of Xiao Ginjiu, it's so cute, and then almost every chapter has a paragraph of commentary, carefully explaining, oh my god, it's so good (˘ ³˘)♥

It's pretty cool, and the sub-personalities are quite interesting. But although the little biscuit is quite cute, he has almost no role to play. He has been delivering gin and stuff and fighting with his brother. I hope to enrich the characters of Biscuit, give more use to scientific research talents and provide emotional value, and finally reflect the beautiful qualities of Biscuit alone. For example, you can write: My brother is in a special situation and cannot help Biscuit. Biscuit is very strong and can resist it on his own or persists until his brother can come to help him [eating melon]

It's good-looking. It's the first time I've seen Gin in his formative years. TK's image is deeply rooted in people's hearts. When I saw Gin being beaten violently by Finette, I still felt a little distressed. Looking forward to a complete gin, a real Top Killer. I also hope that Blanca will grow up well in so much love and not underestimate herself. It's obviously super~amazing! [Blowing kiss] Also, I would like to ask, are you still far away from being the best player in the century? [Explore]

In fact, I personally was really annoyed by Blanca in the early stage, but I admit that I will also be like this, because I had a person who helped me during my depression. The second chapter is just light, the plot is well written, at least I think so, that's it, I hope the update can be faster, really, please I'm quite confused recently. In fact, I really like the plot of this article and it's very interesting. I'm very excited about Blanca and Gin's relationship. Finette and Gin fall in love and kill each other. The family relationship between Blanca and Finette is really sweet, but I really can't accept impurity at all. In this article I always think that the tropism is very obvious. Buqin is a cp, and Buffy and Feiqin are cbs who are friendship-oriented and family-oriented. And I really don't think Feiqin can sleep with each other. After all, if the mutual attack is not well written, it will really become a big mine point for me. Obviously, I can't accept the mutual attack in this article, especially in When Qin has established a relationship with Boo, I think that even if Boo likes Qin, he will still have an exclusive desire for his lover, even if it is the same body, but it is obvious that he wrote it as if Boo and Fei were different people, and that two consciousnesses with different thoughts are in a relationship with the same person. In my view of the world, it's the same as one attack and two losses, so now I have a big problem with this article, but I can't bear to part with the plot. I think I will most likely abandon the article, but I will still continue to read the part that I can't read. Let's use this to debug the article for those who want to read it. That's it.

Although technically both of them are the protagonists themselves... But I also want a brother like this! Just run the physical test for me! Brother, please!

Anyway, enjoy watching! I'm too lazy to write anything else. If you want to read reviews, just read other book reviews. It is the best book I have read so far. It is also the motivation for going to school every day. I am very happy when I see the updated chapter when I go home every day. Because there is a Blanca written on the exam paper, I am happy for a week. The setting is really delicious and it can kill me!

It's very beautiful, but the magical world is a bit confusing, but it doesn't affect the viewing, especially now that their three relationships are revealed, it's great to see jiojio stamping [like] [like] [like] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Note⚠️Don't get too involved in cp In fact, I came here for cp from the beginning, because it has a strong cp flavor at the beginning, but in fact, the three combinations mentioned in the introduction are not a couple in some respects, but cp can barely count, Qinbu's pure love can be friendship or star chasing, Narcissus is not accurate because it is brotherhood, Feiqin is the brotherhood of two strong men, and there is no love at all, but it is still good👌🏻 I was wrong! ! ! ! ! Living your life well is more important than anything else! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! I! ! ! Knock! ! ! Born! ! ! Knock! ! ! ! Die! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Super beautiful [shy][admiration][sending heart][blowing kiss], the content is very exciting [shy][admiration][sending heart][blowing kiss], the plot is very exciting [shy][admiration][sending heart][blowing kiss], the author greatly cheers up [shy][adoration][sending heart][blowing kiss], love you (●✿∀✿●), oh so [blowing kiss]

Everyone, take a look and see that it's a narcissus. I'm saved. There is also a love triangle, the protagonist's brother is incredibly powerful, and Gin actually still has feelings for him. I can only say that this work is wonderful, it is being appreciated by elegant people.

At first, it was because I, Gin, read the article, and I didn't think there was anything wrong with the protagonist's attitude towards Gin, including Gin, and that's what the single recommender was. ଲଇଉକ Later I found out that the two protagonists are both good babies and have very charming personalities. When I watched it, I didn't have a preference for anyone. I can only say that they are both good babies. The three of you must live a good life (⑉• •⑉)‥♡ (Although I prefer Qin x Fei as a single pusher, I really can't imagine myself falling in love with myself) The deputy CP is also very cute. I only saw more than 140 photos. I hope Kasasha can heal his body and feel sorry for him. The author writes that you are much better than others of the same type, and the characters are not OOC where you can see the growth of the characters. Recommend˗ˋˏ♡ˎˊ˗

It's good to read and I like it. I've read more than 40 chapters now. Personally, Blanca is a giving person to Qin, and Finette is similar to Blanca. They feel like brothers. I love them so much. I love it. I just feel that Finette is too wronged in some aspects. [Crying]

The setting really pokes fun at me. I always feel that Blanc has given too much and I feel sorry for him. He puts himself too low, but Gin and Finaid are also very good to Blanc, and they make up for Blanc's lack of regard for himself (?) (Emm's writing is not good, so I can't explain it clearly ()) In short, the three of us should always be happy [sending my heart]