[Urban high martial arts + group portraits + dragon-like/spell battle]
Not a cool article, even a bit slow
After Shang Ziyan left "that place", he tried to hide his past and lived a peaceful life in Japan as a transfer student.
But where is Tokyo in a safe place?
The Kansai girl with unknown origins, the gentle gangster daughter, and the school bully thug who has been targeting him since he arrived.
Shang Ziyan sighed as internal and external troubles continued.
"Please lift the taboo, I'm going to summon the Azure Dragon."
"Didn't you live a leisurely life?"
"If I don't take action, the whole of Tokyo will fall."
Reader comments
Overall, it's not bad. The male protagonist's character is very decisive and full of grievances. The character's ability setting and world view are also quite interesting, but it's a little bit toxic at the moment. The following contains spoilers:
1. The character of Nozomi Kamiya is really confusing. During the reality competition, her brother's friends came to school to kill people, including people from the protagonist group (and Chiyuki Manatsu, who is very likely to be the heroine). As a member of the protagonist group, she was just worried in place? If someone treats you as a friend, why should you treat them as a friend? However, it was good for the male protagonist to decisively deal with this little friend and not let him go.
2. Secondly, the second point about the character of Kamiya Nozomi is that her emotional line is too weird, and it feels like it is purely forced. Although the author writes about Fang Ziju's first encounter with her at the beginning, but the subsequent events including the previous events are all about the male protagonist having a heart-to-heart relationship with her (especially the conversation about catching Akai, which really feels related and further), (there is also the lucky pervert scene where Kamiya Nozomi is taken care of by Fang Ziju), but the result is that it was suddenly forced on Fang Ziju. .
3. When it comes to Fang Ziju, I feel that his status is almost the same as that of the male protagonist, but later on in the school board meeting, he clearly needs his order to stop the murder. As a night cutter, he has been training for so many years and has done so many tasks, but he has been delayed in dating Nozomi Kamiya. Well, even though he is 17 years old, his professionalism is still there, and the male protagonist, who is a senior, also warned him several times to apply for an arrest warrant. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that it was just for the side story of the love relationship between Fang Ziju and Kamiya Nozomi.
4. The writing of the male protagonist and Manatsu Chiyuki is still very good, although I don't know if there will be a female protagonist. The original two protagonists, Michelle and Shu, were well written, but the other supporting characters were not well written. For example, why the president of the Shouchun Club inexplicably went to protect Aoi (Manatsu Chiyuki's best friend) for some whitewashing.
I have thought of so much for the time being, but there is still a lot that can be written later. There are many worldviews and pitfalls. I hope it will get better and better in the future. Come on, author.
The world view is well created, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and maybe because Tokyo is the first dungeon, I feel that the BOSS is a bit unworthy of the force laid out earlier, but in any case, the author's data is not good and he is willing to continue to update, which deserves a five-star rating from me.
It's quite pretty, I say.
Strong recommendation, not brainless, genius flow
I just remembered that I haven't reviewed it yet [face covering], I offer five stars [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart], the author must not be like this [crying][crying][crying]
The writing style and character creation are very good. I just wish there was a single female protagonist or no female protagonist, otherwise it would not match the image of the protagonist (actually, I am a pure lover).
The writing is quite good. I hope I can continue to read more. The character of the protagonist, the creation of the characters, the way of writing and the language used are quite in line with my taste.
Very good! Why isn't it popular?
Really good and beautiful
So far it looks pretty good
Good book, but a platform like Tomato, which is all about chasing cool articles, may not be suitable. It relies too much on luck and promotion. It's a pity [full] Come on, author.
One of the few good books that can be read
You've found fine chaff for me. Come on, brother who writes novels.
It's very good-looking, with a lot of group portraits, and the protagonist has a sense of happiness that comes with being saved at critical moments.
The obvious dragon flavor is one of the best in my mind among works of the same type. Watching it made me feel relaxed physically and mentally, and it was transparent inside and out. Come on, author
Brother, you have a lot of poison in front of you. Can you change it? The setting is good and the flavor is good. Once the poison is eliminated, it may be much better. The poison in front of it can easily persuade people to quit.
It's ok, but it's not very refreshing. I hope it won't stop updating.
Overall, it's not bad. The male protagonist's character is very decisive and full of grievances. The character's ability setting and world view are also quite interesting, but it's a little bit toxic at the moment. The following contains spoilers: 1. The character of Nozomi Kamiya is really confusing. During the reality competition, her brother's friends came to school to kill people, including people from the protagonist group (and Chiyuki Manatsu, who is very likely to be the heroine). As a member of the protagonist group, she was just worried in place? If someone treats you as a friend, why should you treat them as a friend? However, it was good for the male protagonist to decisively deal with this little friend and not let him go. 2. Secondly, the second point about the character of Kamiya Nozomi is that her emotional line is too weird, and it feels like it is purely forced. Although the author writes about Fang Ziju's first encounter with her at the beginning, but the subsequent events including the previous events are all about the male protagonist having a heart-to-heart relationship with her (especially the conversation about catching Akai, which really feels related and further), (there is also the lucky pervert scene where Kamiya Nozomi is taken care of by Fang Ziju), but the result is that it was suddenly forced on Fang Ziju. . 3. When it comes to Fang Ziju, I feel that his status is almost the same as that of the male protagonist, but later on in the school board meeting, he clearly needs his order to stop the murder. As a night cutter, he has been training for so many years and has done so many tasks, but he has been delayed in dating Nozomi Kamiya. Well, even though he is 17 years old, his professionalism is still there, and the male protagonist, who is a senior, also warned him several times to apply for an arrest warrant. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that it was just for the side story of the love relationship between Fang Ziju and Kamiya Nozomi. 4. The writing of the male protagonist and Manatsu Chiyuki is still very good, although I don't know if there will be a female protagonist. The original two protagonists, Michelle and Shu, were well written, but the other supporting characters were not well written. For example, why the president of the Shouchun Club inexplicably went to protect Aoi (Manatsu Chiyuki's best friend) for some whitewashing. I have thought of so much for the time being, but there is still a lot that can be written later. There are many worldviews and pitfalls. I hope it will get better and better in the future. Come on, author.
The world view is well created, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and maybe because Tokyo is the first dungeon, I feel that the BOSS is a bit unworthy of the force laid out earlier, but in any case, the author's data is not good and he is willing to continue to update, which deserves a five-star rating from me.
It's quite pretty, I say.
Strong recommendation, not brainless, genius flow
I just remembered that I haven't reviewed it yet [face covering], I offer five stars [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart], the author must not be like this [crying][crying][crying]
The writing style and character creation are very good. I just wish there was a single female protagonist or no female protagonist, otherwise it would not match the image of the protagonist (actually, I am a pure lover).
The writing is quite good. I hope I can continue to read more. The character of the protagonist, the creation of the characters, the way of writing and the language used are quite in line with my taste.
Very good! Why isn't it popular?
Really good and beautiful
So far it looks pretty good
Good book, but a platform like Tomato, which is all about chasing cool articles, may not be suitable. It relies too much on luck and promotion. It's a pity [full] Come on, author.
One of the few good books that can be read
You've found fine chaff for me. Come on, brother who writes novels.
It's very good-looking, with a lot of group portraits, and the protagonist has a sense of happiness that comes with being saved at critical moments.
The obvious dragon flavor is one of the best in my mind among works of the same type. Watching it made me feel relaxed physically and mentally, and it was transparent inside and out. Come on, author
Brother, you have a lot of poison in front of you. Can you change it? The setting is good and the flavor is good. Once the poison is eliminated, it may be much better. The poison in front of it can easily persuade people to quit.
It's ok, but it's not very refreshing. I hope it won't stop updating.