My Sister Mocked Me at the Beginning, but I Became Good After I Opened the Divine Path.

The book is a good book. The character of the protagonist and the plot are good. However, the author made the progress bar of this book too slow. More than 50 pictures have passed, and only 5 days have passed. One chapter of 2,000 words has 1,200 words about the psychological activities and dialogue of the protagonist [making faces] [eating melon] [punching]

After reading the first ten chapters, it is a classic martial arts novel, very pure. If it were three years ago, I would have read it with gusto. There are struggles, emotions, ups and downs along the way, a steady increase in strength, foreshadowing and goals. However, it is not suitable for me to watch now. I was fascinated by Tomato's refreshing articles. This is really unpleasant to watch. The pace is not fast. Some of the plots failed to capture my point. But the details are more valuable because the writing is smooth and can be read slowly. Four-star review: You can read it when you are really bored, such as turning on airplane mode on an airplane, disconnecting from the Internet, or after a power outage.

I don't know why a group of people say it's very poisonous. In fact, it seems to be quite good so far. It can be seen that it is of a very high level for a novice author. I can only say that the benevolent sees the benevolence and the wise see the wisdom. It should be more caring and less violent.

I hope the author can make the protagonist a little more pretentious, such as some quotes from Huo Qifei, the genius on our first day, and how every enemy either fled or was completely defeated in front of me. I think these things will work. [Shy][shy]

It's a normal cool story, but the copy is quite extensive. The plot is entirely for the male protagonist, and there isn't even a decent opponent. I guess I don't plan to rewrite the plot of my hometown. There seem to be more characters related to the female protagonist. It looks like there are many female protagonists, but in fact none of them can keep up with the progress. According to this coolness, the male protagonist will set off to the stars in at most five years. Whether these female protagonists are the same, it would be more appropriate to watch it without a female protagonist.

I've watched three-quarters of it, and overall it's pretty good. The plot is well connected, but some of the plot is too deliberate and the characters' speeches are a bit off-putting. People who can't stand embarrassment may find it a bit uncomfortable. I hope it can be better in the future.

My evaluation is self-proof, Park Chang, peak, shackles, answer, dependence, end, interpretation, calm, adversity, self-confidence, infinite, break, dilemma, doubt, reversal, temper, limit, stop, illusion, result, final victory, cold break, limit, field, pinnacle, past, farewell, memory, shackles, broken mirror, fragmentary, inferior, gap, detail, talent, breakthrough, interpretation, talent, focus, quietness, details, technique, escape, mentality, upper limit Break, stop, suppress, break free from calm, escape, see through, reversal, what is destined, break, hope, bear, despair, question, fall, strength, dusk, ultimate state, ask about addiction, hone the cold heart, self-confidence, break, illusion, promise, end, peak, answer, parting, responsibility, maintain, hope, interpretation, afterglow, about, technique, dependence, regain, insomnia, stop, break, emotion, change, honesty, limit, fate, memories, pain. I can kiss the details goodbye, chase, let go, and entangle

It's nice to look at, but the emotional lines are a bit sloppy.

It's well written. Some people's brains are exhausted after reading that kind of invincible novel. The pace of this book is quite good. If there are no big problems in the plot at the end, the finished book will at least be a masterpiece. The world view is quite large, which depends on the author's writing skills.

There are flaws, but explanations are given soon after. The protagonist's character jumps a bit, but the problem is not big. The overall plot is smooth, and the path to becoming a god and the plot settings are also satisfying.

Yes, it's very cool, but the updates are too slow. Also, this book must be about multiple girls. If it doesn't mean it's not about multiple girls, I'll give it up. The author didn't reply when I saw it [Like] [Like] [Like]

This book is really good. I read it in one sitting. Apart from the small amount, there are no other sticking points. The protagonist is really invincible, but his blood is too low. I feel a little hung up. Even though there are explanations, the writing is online and the plot is not vulgar. It is good to read. I will update it soon. I will start reading it now.

Chapter 137 deserves a six-star rating [laughing and crying]

It is recommended to read a few more pictures and burn the whole process. The second level of space is not for the sake of leveling up. After you have passed the first blow of the young god, the young god will personally guide you as a master. How can you be so powerful! This is clearly a spring with a very large k-value. Just press it a little and it will bounce to the edge! ! !

To be honest, I really admire you. Your achievements in writing novels are really amazing. The content is exciting, the subject matter is novel, and the production level is really admirable! In order to express my respect, I gave you a gift of 3000. Although it is not much, it is not real either.

It's very interesting, I love the upgrade part, I like the character of the male protagonist, and there are some parts that are clearly classic, but the author deliberately avoided them. There are just too few updates, and the production team don't dare to rest like this. Let's just say that you really can't update ten chapters in one day.

It's very nice, but the update is a bit slow. I hope the author can update it soon!

Excellent, don't take it too seriously, it looks very cool

It feels good, the logic is self-consistent, the rhythm is relaxed and well-controlled, and there are no pure poisonous points at all. There are only a few pseudo-toxic points that are harmless to benevolent people and wise people. The veteran author is undoubtedly. The only shortcoming is that the royalties may not be satisfactory. The subsequent content is written too casually. It may also be that Kavin has not thought about the follow-up plot, which leads to the plot progressing too slowly, especially the chapters of the Class A game that have been in water.

Seeing that the protagonist is not a murderer, I have read too many "Shuang" novels. This kind of novel is really comfortable, but the audience is definitely not large. Please express your support and hope to continue writing.

It's better than 80% of the same type of articles on Tomato. The writing style is not that important, just logic. It's good to read these articles when you have nothing to do [laughing]

From the front it looks like an upgrade stream, but when there is a god-level master in the back, it becomes a truly invincible stream. It's pretty cool, and I won't change the rating if I don't press it.

It looks okay. For me personally, what you said is that the update is too slow, and the details between the male and female protagonists are completely missing from other novels. It can be a little more detailed, but not too much.

Be polite and easy-going, and do whatever you don't like. It's a bit interesting [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I think the writing is pretty good, but it's just too little. I'll see if I can review it later.

Warriors compete, but not too much. They compete but also unite, and they do not suppress geniuses.

Not bad, but there are so many women, and every one of them is stunning [Thinking][Thinking]

There are not many books that I can read. This one has the lowest rating of 9 or above. It can easily exceed 800,000 words in reading. If I speed up a bit, I will start the 200,000-word book test.

It's really well written and I enjoyed reading it, but the words are a bit short.

The writing is good, although there are some flaws, but the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. Please support me and update it soon.