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Xianpin Xianpin Xianpin, the author's description is really good. I always feel that writing a vicious heroine is definitely a test of writing skills. If the writing skills are not good, it will be easy to make people hate. Although the heroine is really bad, at least she will not make me feel disgusted. She is a very flexible and flexible little girl who is good at face. It's really normal. Staying true to one's roots and not forgetting one's roots are also characteristics of our Xiao Yao. Some of the descriptions of psychological activities are really cute. At present, it seems that Yao is a little tempted but doesn't know it. And she still doesn't know the price of becoming a mother (let's call it this way for now). I think it will be a cruel point in the future. In addition, the story as a whole is like a small copy, but the whole is connected in reality. The main line is clear. The current villain BOSS is the Taoist priest hahaha. The author's description is also very scary. Xiao Su is not a heroine in the traditional sense. Hehe, he is very good at scolding his wife. Let's just say. As for many readers who are worried about the ending, I can only say that I believe in the author. Please give us a lot of support for our little couple who hates each other! Also, please give a lot of support to our author Da Da! In addition, our Xiaoyao also has a soft place in her heart. The scene when Xiao Su came out of the river and taught her sister a lesson was really touching, and her sister was also really cute: "Ask me again? Come down, please."

It's the first time I've read this kind of yuri story about a female ghost ! !

The subject matter is so new, and I enjoyed watching it. Our Yaoyao is also a villain who can stab Su in the back without mercy [facepalm]. The character design is very good, and Su will be punished when he makes a mistake and will not wait until next time. The biggest attraction at the moment is how to arouse Yaoyao's kindness, how to change her bad nature, and how to make her learn to consider others. I guess it most likely depends on the child. At present, it seems that there is no one except Yaoyao's own parents who she cannot stab in the back, and everything since Yaoyao's pregnancy has always been related to the child. There is a sense of deliberately trying to awaken Yaoyao's maternal love, so it may be the most classic Yaoyao doesn't want to leave her daughter, so she fights for the sake of the child's mother. Neither mother wants to leave the child? Or maybe the child is sensible enough to bring Su and Yaoyao together so that the two mothers can stay together and have a complete family? In short, it seems that the only one who can give Yaoyao selfless love is her own child [face covering]. (Hey, I also want to see blood flowing like a river! Can the author come up with a plot where Su drives Yaoyao away after Yaoyao gives birth and refuses to care for her child, but Yaoyao wants to see the child love her but can't get it!)

It's a delicious, delicious meal [sends my heart]. This kind of double-evil CP is really rare, I hope it can happen, and I look forward to the birth of the child and the changes in the relationship between the two. The mutual hatred relationship between Yao and Su is really good. In some aspects, it is also a pure love that goes both ways, especially since these two are both drama stars, and their acting is so enjoyable [eating melon] [smirking]. Also looking forward to the unfolding of the plot and world view [laughs]

It's quite nice, they both feel like happy enemies [laughing][laughing] Be, I hate Ms. Su so much. Anyone can bully the protagonist. This seems so annoying, and that Su. . . No evaluation. [Laugh]

The subject matter is novel and super good-looking. It feels like it could be in my top 20 favorite Lily novels🥰 Yaoyao, you are a fragrant and soft little cake~ I won't comment too much on Su, Mommy's Girl. Although I have always felt sorry for Yaoyao, I never disliked Su, but Mommy's Girl really made me feel a little depressed. Although I am a staunch female advocate, I really felt sorry for Su in the later period. I couldn't do it any more. I just begged my wife not to kill one of my loyal dogs.

Except for the fact that the segments in some places are too long and tiring to watch, and that Su abuses the scumbag too lightly and feels too sarcastic, everything is pretty good👌

It looks good, especially when the evil girl is punished by the female ghost. I feel that the evil girl is well portrayed. The feeling of being unrepentant and seizing other people's good will towards her is very good)

This novel brought me more surprises than just five stars. To be honest, I really didn't expect that there would be such a good novel with two female protagonists on Tomato. This plot is definitely one of the few novel plots on Tomato in the past two years. I was really attracted by the title when I first saw it. Maybe I wasn't so attracted by the writing when I read the first two chapters. It's just that the writing is not bad, but the further you go, the more you can feel how profound the author's writing skills are. The horrific plots described by the author are so real that I didn't dare to read this book at night. I read it during the day. But then again, I think the friction between the two heroines is really exciting. In particular, I think the emotional line between Su Xinyang and Li Zaiyao is very well written. It does not mean that in the traditional sense, the two female protagonists fall in love at first sight. Of course, it is impossible to fall in love at first sight. After all, Xinxin was killed twice by Yaoyao, haha. However, Yaoyao gave Xinxin two children and died once, which can be regarded as offset. Along the way, they went from disgust, suspicion, and calculation to love, care, and reluctance to give to each other. The description of this process is not a blunt transition, but you can see the delicate emotional changes. Let's just talk about Yaoyao's original intention from the beginning and her desire to take revenge on Xinxin. Later, I care about Xin Yang a little bit in my heart. This change can be seen that the two people have really gone from tit-for-tat at the beginning to their current emotional attitude of loving each other like a treasure. Little Pearl and Little Moon are so cute. Although the relationship between Yaoyao and Su's mother-in-law and daughter-in-law needs to be improved, I believe that it will also improve as they get along with each other day by day. In the end, I hope that Yaoyao, Xinyang, Little Pearl and Little Moon will be happy as a family. Looking forward to the author's new book! [Admiration][Shy][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile]

The heroine is a pure evil girl who is selfish. She has a love-hate relationship with her roommate, but never forgets her original intention. The plot is very good, with supernatural things interspersed from time to time, and even a bit weird. Sometimes it is hard to understand, but it is really good to watch, and it is updated very quickly. There are a few chapters updated at a time. It is not unfinished so far. I recommend it!

Tip: The current villain of the heroine is very bad. This book is overall good. The pure villain is very novel, and the forced childbirth really makes me want to follow it to see how it can be reversed. The story is not scary at the moment. I can only say that it is a bit permeating, but it is still acceptable. The main reason is that the first story makes me feel like Inception. It becomes too fast and leads the way too fast, which makes it difficult for me to react. Fortunately, I went back to read it, otherwise I really don't know when I entered the fantasy world.

I really like Su Xinyang's character design. The heroine is also a character that has never been seen in other novels. I have seen too many male and female protagonists fall in love at first sight. I really like this kind of novel where the story begins step by step from hating each other. The subject matter is very novel, I like the character of the protagonist the most

After reading Chapter 61, it's very interesting and the setting is good. I don't feel that Su is disgusted with Li's actions. I hope it can be maintained in the following chapters. Many people who claim to be female protagonists in the comment area are disgusted with Su and feel that Li is very pitiful.

Although I feel like two evil girls, I feel that Su is not a good person, and I feel that Su's strength is not very stable, he is always failing, and he can't protect Li every time [laughing] But overall it is still very interesting, the author must continue to work hard (=^▽^=)

Looks good! ! ! It's the first time I've seen such a strange Lily article, it's so refreshing! ! ! ! I like it so much! ! ! !

I read Chapter 128 in one go, and from Li Zaiyao's perspective, the current story is pure abuse of the main character, and it's not satisfying at all. Also, the process of Su Yunyang falling in love with Li Zaiyao felt very abrupt, and there was obviously something wrong with the way it was handled. I thought it was still for ulterior motives, but in the end, she really fell in love. Watching it for so long in one go, it is absolutely supportive if you want to see the heroine proud and elated, especially when you see Ms. Li's tongue being cut off and her legs broken, and if you want to see Ms. Li's revenge and recovery, I keep watching. I asked Doubao just now, and there should be no such plot. Objectively speaking, what Li Gan did was excessive, even more serious than Su's. However, when written from Li's perspective, there is no complete side-by-side description after the bad deeds, and it feels like a brief summary, but the plot of Li's abuse is really described in detail, giving people the subjective feeling that Li was miserable. The plot is relatively new, so I'll go to bed first and watch the rest tomorrow.

I have read more than 20 chapters now. Generally speaking, the plot of this book is quite coherent and the writing is also very good. I hope the author will update 10 times a day, and I will support the author very much. The interaction between the two heroines is also super cool. I hope the author can write more. The villainous character is also very touching. Evil Girl×Evil Ghost is really very good-looking. Support the author greatly.

It's super good-looking. It's so good. It touched my heart when I wrote it. I really like this! ! I think the rating shouldn't be so low, it should be above nine points. I hope the author can write more extras [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][Like this post]

It's my first time to write a book review, and I think it's okay now. It's been a long time since I've seen a young couple with such pure hatred. I hope the two of them will have an easier future and don't abuse me. [Sending my heart] I look forward to how the author will bring them back together in the future. Our sister Yao really does not forget her roots, her original intention, and her mission. She is really looking forward to the follow-up development. Can the author write 100 chapters a day? (Bishi) [KISS] It's so refreshing to see two young lovers suspicious of each other and scolding each other. [Shy] I didn't expect that during the bottleneck period, I would see such beautiful articles that I couldn't stop. I hope the rating can increase faster [Eat Melon] Does it really have to be cut open to come out?

Li Zaiyao. Li Zaiyao feels like a wild bird to me. You cannot restrain it with a human frame. It will fly, stop and watch humans, its dark glass beads reflect the novelty, and then fly away mercilessly until it is discovered by sharp people, who catch it, trap it, and howl in the cage. It will understand that it is weak and show weakness, but it will never give up. It is a bird with innate wisdom and pride.

It's pretty good, but some of the turning points are not very clear, such as the change of location, etc., Which makes it a bit blurry (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

Super pretty! There is a plot and emotions, but the only flaw is that the ending feels a bit rushed. Moreover, this book has so many interesting points, but it still attracted me to finish reading. The author's writing skills are really powerful. But due to the character design, neither heroine really said I love you to each other. Although actions are more convincing than words, this kind of thing still needs to be said to make sense. There is also a strange feeling when watching this kind of movie. It is clear that the two people have no relationship at all, but they feel like an old wife. (And the relationship between the two people is still very hazy at the end. Why is it like this? They obviously have two children). Yao's evil female character is really too solid Ｏ(≧口≦)O I still feel very sorry, I really want to see Yao say love to Su

It's very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, this book has no equal (in my opinion), it's super beautiful, I sit in school waiting for updates every day, the characters are vivid, the storyline is compact, it's a double heroine, I like it even more, okay? [Adoration] [Blow kiss]

Supernatural Lily novel. I love reading it! And I like this character design very much. Just don't abuse me [crying]. The two of you must be good friends. The heroine shouldn't like others.

Two evil girls with distinct personalities. It's been a long time since I've seen such a cold and decisive character with a vicious femme fatale. It's such a surprise. I'm waiting for the update every day. It's a good read.

A very special Lily novel. Li Huai has no bottom line at all, but he has a bad side and a cute side, although it is difficult for ordinary people to accept it. The slight transformation from being a bad person at the beginning to becoming a mother and a partner later is quite touching (although not much), and isn't the focus of emotional writing about change? To make changes for the people in your heart, the characters of the two heroines are very full. The only shortcoming may be that there is no major turning point in the whole text. If it is written later that Li is because of Su's distrust, her pregnancy anxiety after pregnancy, and the pressure from her parents and Su's mother After the collapse of the power, the real pursuit of death (when a person who is greedy for life and afraid of death is no longer afraid of death, and a person who is strategizing is no longer calm), it may be better to start to change after resuscitation. I personally feel that it is too unnecessary for Li to fall to death and then live later. Although I personally dislike Dao Ziwen, but if you want more vivid and profound emotions, a breaking point is essential. How can you feel the rainbow more intuitively without going through the wind and rain? What's more, this kind of Li is a bad person. Don't stop writing because he is afraid of knives, but his feelings have to break out. Hebe cannot be determined from the beginning, and the author can only choose which direction to lean on. (I still like him though, after all, who doesn't like a happy ending?

The heroine design is quite novel, and this track should be unique. The plot of the dungeon is a bit formulaic. In the dungeon, Li Meng meets Su Daifei. The villain in the ending comes off a bit quickly, it feels a bit rushed, and there is no sense of oppression.

I finished reading it last year when it was being serialized, but I forgot to rate it, so I simply refreshed it twice to make up for it. It's good-looking, and there's no OOC from beginning to end. Even if the evil girl likes people, she will only focus on herself. The relationship line is also very reasonable. It's not like falling in love suddenly, but gradually. In the early stage, there was a story about how difficult it would be to give birth, and the conflict between the two protagonists caught my attention. I wanted to know the plot behind it, and then suddenly something unexpected happened to me (referring to after giving birth to the child). All in all, I like it! This is also the first novel that I followed every day while it was being serialized.

After reading it, it doesn't matter if the world is smaller or the foreshadowing is simple, all the shortcomings will be covered by one advantage, that is, the characters are really well created, lifelike and too vulgar, but they are so appropriate, as if they are very familiar and good friends, as if I have witnessed their feelings with my own eyes.

To be honest, this novel is not suitable for a place like Tomato, which is seriously under-age. The novel is great, but it feels less cruel. It would be interesting if both parties use a little knife. Come on