Disciple Prolongs Life and Masters Master's Exquisite Beauty

The author is here to paint the pie. The pace is slow in the early stage, but the emotional line will be pushed a little faster. The world view will be grander in the later stage. The male and female protagonists will travel through different worlds and meet all kinds of people. Later, they will give birth to a lot of babies to increase the population [laughing] In terms of plot, sugar is sufficient, a little abuser does not carry a knife, pure love has no ambiguous partner, but there will definitely be other female characters appearing, and the male and female protagonists will quickly establish a relationship, without any delay, get married and have children in one go [shy] Everyone is welcome to discuss the plot and post it in the comment area

The writing is quite good, but the talent of the male protagonist feels a bit too mediocre. When should I give him a few highlights to make him look worthy of the female protagonist? Otherwise, he has to let the female protagonist protect him. After living two lives, he must have some trump cards. Also, I have wanted to complain for a long time. The title of the author is too casual. At least remove the title of apprentice and master, otherwise it will feel strange, but the writing is very good. I hope the author will get better and better.

The relationship develops quickly and is really sweet. The setting of the two magic weapons as a pair is very interesting. The settings are not fully explained, and I don't know the level of the god-level weapons. The world level is relatively low, so I look forward to the follow-up plot.

So far it looks okay, it has a single heroine, the sweetness is acceptable, and she's not having an affair with anyone else.

It's so good. I hope it will always be a single female protagonist. The author will work hard to write it, preferably to over 1 million words. [Sinister smile]

It's getting better and better [laughing]

Looks ok

It's okay. If I just write it down like this, I should be able to get to 9.

Not bad, not bad, quite sweet

The emotional line is well written, I hope I don't become a eunuch

It's so sweet that my teeth are sore, woo woo woo, I'm going to find my master, woo woo woo woo woo

It's very well written, hehe. I can only say that the flowers have never stopped blooming.

The author did not deliberately feed poison, but the characters in the book have more or less problems with their dual quotient. I can only say that they are worthy of a rating of six or so.

Very good. It will be ok if you control the speed after the rating comes out [Thinking]

Very beautiful, very sweet, and the single female protagonist suits my taste I think it's great. Some people say that it's annoying to have to kiss hands all the time. What I want to say is that there shouldn't be any emotional foreshadowing at the beginning. You can't just kiss directly. Moreover, this hand-to-hand story didn't have many chapters, and soon it was about kissing on the face and lips. I can only say that the person didn't read many chapters before jumping to random conclusions. Some people may say that the heroine kisses others in order to live, but this is his apprentice. With such a high cultivation level, he definitely wants to live, and it doesn't have to pay a big price. For example, if the boy you play well with is from your next door, if he kisses your wrist, you can get 10,000 yuan in exchange for it. Do you want to kiss it? You don't need to give it to him. C. The heroine needs to be in love for a long time, and feelings will be born after kissing. I don't understand why this book is very good and has no bad points, and most of the reasons are very far-fetched. Just like the one mentioned above, it is always about kissing, and I just randomly give this book bad reviews without reading many chapters.

Really good

Come on, try your best to write a million words

The pure love warrior is resurrected with full blood

Good, good, good, good

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

You said you ate the meat, but you ate it, but it was vegetarian chicken [laughing][laughing][laughing]

A wave of support, the emotions are well written, and it would be better to further improve and expand the world view.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's very, very beautiful. I've already given it a five-star review. I hope the author can finish it.

It looks good so far, thanks to the author for his hard work!

It's so good. This book is so boring. Ruthless So beautiful, so beautiful

This book is quite well written sweet enough

Personally, I feel it is very good. The author should not stop updating suddenly. It is very scary. I hope the author can work hard.

It's well written, the setting is reasonable, and it looks quite comfortable.

Oh my god, it smells so good