Give the Other World a Little Golden Shock

The new book is very interesting to read, and the character design of the cat is well done. Compared with the previous book, the protagonist never entered the state at the beginning. Generally speaking, the author's narrative ability has been enhanced and the story structure has been improved. At least this time the protagonist does not have the official brain shutdown that the protagonist suffered at the beginning. (Speaking of which, can we make up for the regret that the last book didn't have a chapter on Feixiao? We can also open a few extra chapters in the old book.) Also Praise~! [Like][Like][Like]

Wan En also has a charming personality, and I hope to see more appearances. Besides, as a Ben Tie player, not everyone wants to see Lily. Each character has his or her own highlight. I hope the author can improve it. After all, this is a Ben Tie fanfic. Overall, great looking! ! ! In fact, I want to see Xiaobai, see Xiaobai shine in the fan fiction, show his brilliance, and don't have to be bound by salvation, and don't have to be sad, because Xiaobai, Xiaobai, we like you! Xiaobai… I've finally waited for you, Xiaobai [crying] [crying] Just let the world be as you wish. You won't be alone this time. Move forward.

Among the better works on Tomato, the plot is a little simple, and the author often explains and supplements the plot. It is easy to read, with the feeling of a light novel, and there are no loopholes that particularly affect the viewing experience. The characteristic of this book is that the vest of the golden descendant is not a body snatching. It can be understood as the main character having multiple souls controlling the duplicate of the golden descendant. His original body is alive and well in Ompharos... No, he is dead and well. Awesome, Volume 3 God of Gods

It's more comfortable to read than the previous one, and I still like the background setting of this book better. Of course, that's not to say that the previous one was not good-looking. The writing on Stealing the Toilet is really good. It's really great.

This book is plain, but interesting, and not very toxic. It can be seen that the author has a very clear positioning of himself, and knows what he can and wants to write. On the contrary, it is like a breath of fresh air among the many online articles, and it is very comfortable to read.

Alien World (Western Fantasy) + Benttie Vest (mainly golden descendants, mainly female vests, occasionally male vests to show off) Currently taking the route of the brave team, Sai Feier in vest The text is quite relaxed, in the style of a light novel, without too many plots that are too crude. Pure coolness, the protagonist's strength is basically crushed It's just that the number of words is too short. I really want to read Ten Thousand Enemies and Nakesia Vest

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking. It's very good-looking, very good-looking. Well, how the protagonist should act is probably my favorite part in the next chapter. I like it the most. Watching this kind of plot, I make up an example, an organization, a background, and then one after another characters appear to complete the story and complete the background. But these characters are essentially the same person. The first vest of the protagonist is a cat, and the second one is Wan Enemy. The next chapter should be Wan Enemy's appearance. To kill all the imperial troops, this should be the way to kill them all, or talk to the protagonist. Reveal some information, but don't reveal it completely. After all, if all the vests are stripped off, it will be boring. Only reveal a little, the enemy will reveal a little, and the protagonist will reveal a little. Looking at this posture, the author should create the eternal land Ompharos. Just saying it verbally is useless. Someone must go there in the later stage. My suggestion is to get Ompharos out and create some original characters, because 13 people are not enough for him. It is a bit difficult to create a system with 13 people. Therefore, we need some original supporting characters to complete the story and the background of the protagonist. I am looking forward to how the protagonist will act and speak, and it will definitely be very exciting. The information revealed cannot be too much or too little, otherwise the impact will be too small. Or directly announce the identity of the protagonist as a demigod. This will also work. It will be the appearance of Ten Thousand Enemies. He clapped his hands and said, "It really surprises me that a dignified demigod appears in a place like this. Although this should not be in line with the character, I quit the game a bit early and stopped playing, so I didn't play Ompharos. But the identity of the protagonist demigod can also be avoided." But I just feel that 13 vests are not enough. How many chapters did the author write in the previous book, 300 or 400? This book should be similar, but 13 people are too few, and it is impossible to write that long, so I can only use supporting actors and bring others to Ompharos.

It's pretty good-looking. I've seen one before, but it's really boring. To say it's well-written, I think it's a fusion of Western Fantasy and Bengtie. Although Onfalus should also have a Western Fantasy world view? But does this count as taking the overly cautious script of the top thief?

The quality is acceptable, keep updating. Come on, you can post it, you don't need a male protagonist, you don't have to post it, you can also be beautiful alone, it depends on how you write it, come on, I can only say that this book is honest, the quality is really acceptable

This book is really good. Although it describes some welfare scenes from time to time, I was a little disappointed and almost gave up the book several times. But I really like the plot and plot. It is very daily and easy to read. The author's writing is very good. By the second volume, I really liked the Brave Squad. I thought the Demon King was bad. When I saw the Cat Ranger and the White Dragon King Druid, I felt really sad. I am still thinking about it. Later, Xiadie resurrected them all to fight together, but when I read the third volume, I really wanted to put the druid back. Although they didn't know the whole story, they went for the so-called crusade without understanding the whole thing. They were also arrogant and arrogant. The entire team of warriors had a good impression of druids and poets, and especially disliked warriors and warlocks. In the beginning, they were indifferent to the third volume and the first two volumes. It's the same, it's just time-consuming, but after reading the third volume, I don't think so anymore. It's connected with the foreshadowing of the first two. I really like Olivia, Jay and Ted. The highlights in the back really give them a strong personality charm. They are obviously three geniuses who may become gods in the future. One mastered the flow and defeated seven brave men holding artifacts. One of them killed one, and one of them will kill one of them. They have studied ring magic to the extreme and created nine-ring magic. A coalition army that returned to its ancestors with one person worth tens of thousands, but because of those greedy countries, they were all killed. They were obviously a group of people who just wanted to protect their country. In order for them to successfully evacuate, they used their lives to delay time. You must know that they did not know that they would be reincarnated. They were obviously a group of civilians who just wanted to live a good life, but they were burdened with three hundred years of infamy. Will they regain their memories later? I think Olivia and Da Tibao are together, and Maomao and Aya are together. Although they are the same person, Narcissus looks disdainful, but the relationship between Da Tibao and Olivia described in the third volume is too good. After that, I should tell the world the truth about the Demon King, and then kill the descendants of those nobles [laugh][laugh] Yes, this book is a masterpiece, especially the third volume, which is a masterpiece among gods.

I've seen the Caesar chapter and I'm not sure if I want to read it in the future, so I'll leave a comment first. The summary of the plot is that the protagonist travels to an ordinary Western fantasy world and gains the ability to transform into a golden descendant, and then transforms into each golden descendant to start different adventures. It is divided into several very independent stories, such as the cat adventure, the professor in the college, and the construction and management of the city of Datibao. The styles are quite different. The protagonist can be understood as cosplaying. She has been imitating the characteristics of the golden descendant in her actions, but there are still some differences (the author probably knows that his writing is not like it, so he made a patch to make it appear that he is a cosplayer and not himself) First of all, it must be explained that this is a very simple novel. The writing style is just average on Tomato level, and there is nothing outstanding about it. Basically, the protagonist uses the power of the golden descendants to appear as a saint. But then again, although I am a novice, the impression is good. The author is very serious in writing. The overall style is relatively relaxed and pleasant. It is really fun when the golden descendants give their names and pretend to be demigods, and there are no poisonous points. It seems more enjoyable. Overall, it's very good. It's very suitable for Bengtie players who want to relax. It's quite stress-relieving. I would like to give you a five-star review to encourage you.

Saphire is a scheming demigod. She is very smart and has a variety of abilities. Not only is she super fast, the protagonist plays a completely self-created character except for her appearance. Basically just use a template to create your own

I picked it up from the old book, but the style is still the same as before. There is no dead rule that forces the protagonist to faithfully reproduce the character, so the protagonist does not have to force himself to act in a non-OOC way. By the way, the solution to the problem of one soul and multiple bodies is to let Maomao fool the fool into thinking that Maomao can control multiple bodies at the same time. I want to laugh when I think about how Hanhan's lies could be exposed and paralyzed two-digit demigods later.

It is a Western fantasy novel of great quality, starting from the brave team where the demon king is dead, to explaining various different world cultures or DND culture and spell systems, and then to the true braves born of lies. The entire plot unfolds very smoothly and meticulously, and everyone feels comfortable communicating according to their cultural thinking logic, just like playing a running team. I like the False Demon King chapter very much. As one of the few swords in the whole text, the quality is very good. It catches the numerous statues and the disappearing Demon King's Castle mentioned above. It not only writes about people's pursuit of life, but also reflects the sacrifice spirit of the trio who have greater power and greater responsibility. As for the final "Deus Ex Machina", at least the combat power is reasonable under the Star Iron worldview, but maybe it settles a little too quickly? I also said that maybe the Sun God died and Maomao deceived people to show his power of trickery, but this is also good, HE ending.

There are different vests, different interactions, and the characters are very distinct. In short, it is fun, sweet, and refreshing. It's really super, super, super good-looking, and it perfectly matches all the novels I love to read. The author will update it soon! ! !

I really liked it in the early and middle stages, but later on I didn't quite understand why there was so much space to describe it. It felt like my favorite character was being written down. Even though I tried to ignore it, I still found it uncomfortable and tiring to read.

In the field of fan fiction, the level is very high. The character's own setting and the local background are very well integrated. The third volume has a lot of foreshadowing in its highlight moments. It can be said that it is difficult to find such excellent fan fiction. There is no ending to this author's classic. Both books end with the force of the bricks flying. It feels like there is still a lot more to unfold, but the author can't continue writing.

This book is one of the better-looking among the Bengtie fanfics I have read. The plot is lively and interesting, with daily life and battles, and the description of the characters is also very attractive to me [laughing evilly], I highly recommend it. If you want to read Bengtie fanfic, trust me, you can read it. Then the author [please update]

The author is very good at writing why heroes are heroes, and the reasons why heroes are heroes. Many of the characters who don't appear much are well written. But this book also has bad shortcomings. The first is the cliché ending problem. Well, it can be considered rushed. In fact, it is the real shortcoming. After the power rises in the mid-term, the pretense of power is different from the general pretense of invincibility. It's the kind of thing where I'm very advanced and you're very backward, a bunch of ridiculous country bumpkins who set themselves off by despising each other. At least in my opinion, this method doesn't look very good. But luckily, there isn't much to this part. Overall it's a good book.

It was good to read it in one go. Among the strongest Bengtie role-playing novels, it is a bit more interesting than the previous one. Of course, it may also be because of the feeling that the regrets about the journey of chasing fire have been made up. The character description is very good, but the update is too slow, there is only one chapter a day.

This novel is very good, and it deserves to be number one among Star Railway. Although there may be some backlash in the future, of course, in my heart, it deserves to be number one. It is also the only five-star novel among the 100 or so novels that I personally disliked. Good luck to the author!

Old friends, believe me, this book is really good. Although Maomao was stabbed in the back by the official uniform at the beginning, the author also came back, and every subsequent identity has highlights. It can be regarded as a good article. Anyway, up to Chapter 257, I didn't see any poisonous points. Summary: You can watch it, the content is light.

I am a long-time fan of the author, come on ＿＿＿＿＿ ||| ||! Come on! | ||| ||￣￣￣￣ ∧_∧|| (`･ω･|| (つ||0 Uｰu

The plot of the team in the early stage is not complicated, but it is interesting, and the characters are vivid. In the later stage, there are too many demigods, and there are no enemies with matching strength. The outside gods can't threaten them even if they are locked outside. It is the same as turning on the creative mode. Moreover, because all the demigods are actually one person, they only talk to each other. Watching the second creation itself is to chase your favorite characters or compete with CP. Being controlled by a soul feels like watching a puppet show. Although it has shortcomings, it's pretty good among second creations.

I finished reading it in one go. It was particularly interesting to write about the female characters, interspersed with the invincibility and strength of the male characters, and the beauty and cuteness of the female characters. It was really interesting to rebuild Ohma in the new world and add foreshadowing one by one to let people know the greatness of the Golden Descent.

Nice! So when will the protagonist group know Saphire's demigod identity and Sefaria's real name? It doesn't need to be too detailed, just the middle or late stage. [Laughs crookedly] I want to see the protagonist group being shocked, I get so excited just thinking about it!

It's an excellent book. You have to read it patiently. It becomes very interesting after the second character appears. Moreover, the author has his own plan. After reading it, the foreshadowing and each character are handled very well.

Great book! Logic and imagination can be connected together. I can only say that there is a difference between having an outline and not having an outline. Unfortunately, the author said there is no cp, but it looks like a narcissus? Ontology and one's own avatar

It's a very nice fanfic. The setting background and world view are very complete. It can be seen that the author's plot is supported by the outline. Each golden descendant also fits the character very well and is not OOC. I have a small suggestion. It can be improved later and some welfare pictures can be deleted (not all of them are just some places that have such welfare. It is not good. The welfare pictures from Xia Die You don't need to move the face, after all, it fits the character of the high priest) There are no other big problems, but you may have some big psychological ups and downs when watching it, because "City of Hope" is so exciting, and the subsequent plot is quite satisfactory, but this book is definitely a good book, it is a novel fan fiction, and it is highly recommended. Although it is a Western fantasy, because the world view is complete, it will not affect the viewing experience. Each character is also well integrated into this world, and there will be no sense of dissonance.

The BOSS names of Omphalos are very cool. The two characters of the Spear of Divine Punishment are [Barbarian God, Mad King, Incarnation of Strife], [Giver, Leader of Thousands of Armies, Spear of Divine Punishment] and the Eye of Dawn and Dusk are [Supreme, Supreme Sun, Incarnation of the Sky], [The Exterminator, the Karmic Fruit of Yang Lei, Eye of Dawn and Dusk]. The first three paragraphs of the two of them should first be their impressions in people's minds (adjectives such as Barbarian God, Mad King, Supreme Yang, etc.) And then the incarnation of the priesthood they perform. The second three-part section should be the player's understanding of their actions after the plot (Nicardi's Bestower, Aigler or Seneos's Exterminator), then their connotation and essence, which I can't describe (Nicardi's Chief of Thousands of Arms, Seneos's Yang Lei's Karma), and finally their divine names (Spear of Divine Punishment and Eye of Dawn and Dusk). So based on the above two formats, we can make up a [the incarnation of lies, deceit, and trickery] for Zagres, [the deceiver, the embers of trickery, and the flying coins] [sneaky smile]