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(Superior) Orange LV8, 40 points/50 points First impression 150%: Sense of substitution 4, Attractiveness 5 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 3, setting 4 Content 125%: Writing 4, Creativity 4 Structure 75%: Rhythm 4, Main Line 3 Details 75%: Character 4, Logic 4 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: Brainy and creative Poison point: none Feelings: The design is perfect, the theme is novel RPG + cards, so far, this is the highest-scoring book I have seen [like]. Calculation process: 1.5×9+1.25×8+0.75×22=40 Points ───────────────────

It's quite fun. The card invasion reality is pretty well written. It's too weird. The male protagonist rejected the female partner who liked him, but the female partner sealed part of her memory and turned into a card elf to fight side by side with the male protagonist🥰Knowing that the female partner sealed up the memory of liking him, she still worked hard to awaken the card elf😄It's so unreasonable.

Is the author a fisherman? The air force has too much space and it is just a fantasy [laughter][laughter]

It's a pretty good setting, and the heroine isn't annoying. She's capable of not being a vassal, but I've only watched the anime and never played the game, so I'm not used to it. It's normal to have a low score in the beginning, but it will gradually get higher in the future.

Five stars is to let you see the actual three stars. This book is still very good in terms of setting, giving me a freshness that I haven't seen in previous books. The plot is also very good and makes people want to read on. It is refreshing, natural and not too cliche. It can be said to be one of the top ones on Tomato. To be honest, this book is actually really good. I was reading it every day for a while. Now that I have finished talking about the good points, let's talk about the reasons why I gave this book three stars. The portrayal of the male protagonist was a complete failure. He was extremely selfish, and he was mindless and selfish without any purpose. No one can compare to him, even the heroine whom he has identified as his soul mate. And this kind of selfishness is not the kind of dark protagonist, but the pure selfishness. For example, I remember that the protagonist found an NPC about a deck in a dungeon and was on his ship at the time, but he was afraid that the heroine would steal it from him, so he hid it from the heroine. And it was almost impossible to hide it, but he did it anyway. Another thing is that if the auction price is more useful to the heroine, I will immediately abandon it, and I will get the premium price if it has a small effect on me. When I saw this, I really couldn't stand it and sincerely felt that it was not worth it for the heroine. And the emotional intelligence of the male protagonist is also ridiculously low. Even a card guy can't be so outrageous, right? The same goes for the emotional line. With a single female protagonist and a bunch of side plots, is there any need for Shi Yurou to exist? Does her existence have any other purpose besides disgusting the heroine? In the later stage, I stopped acting and just called the male lead brother. If such a character is designed to make me happy when I kill it later, then the author has succeeded. Also, the pressure was too harsh. Summary: If you don't care about the emotional line and the male protagonist, then this book is definitely worth reading.

This is a really good book, completely put off by the title. This book is mainly centered on extraordinary battles and card duels. Most of the materials are Yu-Gi-Oh, anime, Internet memes, etc. The stitching of each anime and game is just right. The protagonist is the black energy system from Jackie Chan's Adventures and is currently trying to collect the twelve talismans.

It is very novel and belongs to the card world of Yu-Gi-Oh battle. Personally enjoyable articles + articles with good-looking battle scenes. The relationship development between the male and female protagonists is a bit awkward, and the description of the guild development is sparse. The game copy is not interesting enough, so some assembly line copies can be omitted. It's a bit unreasonable. The world's masters are all concentrated among old players. Some new players can be added among the masters. After all, there are so many high IQs in the world. It's a bit of a torture to keep up with the updates. The daily updates have little content, no substantive highlights, and a lot of nonsense in one chapter.

Hurry up and update it. The protagonist's characteristics are average and the theme is good. The main line is a bit unclear at the moment. The protagonist's corresponding deck seems to be chasing the protagonist. I can understand Shuangwen's writing ideas but don't be too outrageous. For example, five dragon scales are equivalent to a pure gift. I look forward to the follow-up...

It's good to watch, I love watching it, I like the heroine very much, I hope the hero will get a role soon The more I look, the more disappointed I become

Beautiful, highly recommended! It's what I like [Destroy Monsters and Explode Cards] + [Series Collection] + [Group Portraits]! After reading it so far, there are no surprises. The plot is a bit mediocre but innocuous and the logic is reasonable. Most of the cards need to be [dropped by killing monsters], which is unknown + surprise. Seeing the best cards dropped from the possession of the European Emperor will also make you feel happy! Happy! The current protagonist's Tiger's Yin and Yang, as well as the Dragon's Explosive Flame that may be obtained in the future, and the Rooster's Levitation feel like the twelve zodiac talismans! Something new! I'm really looking forward to the plot development in the follow-up [Collection]! And for the rest of the protagonist group, the heroine has a clear card collection plan, with ok personality and ok combat power. The other lucky male partner also has his own preset development route, which makes me very curious about the subsequent development of their respective plots. I look forward to seeing the growth of the protagonist group [group portrait] in the future, passionate~ All in all, the setting and plot are very attractive, and I will keep reading it! Best wishes for a long life! Wish you a big bang!

There's nothing to say, let's not talk about the heroine or anything like that. Overall, there is nothing wrong with giving it about 4 stars, except for a few points that I think are not good. First of all, the part where the protagonist is reluctant to part with Lingqiu is a bit ambiguous. It would be better to write that the protagonist feels a little uneasy in his heart. Because as far as the protagonist's character is concerned, he is straight, chaotic and kind, which means that the protagonist's feelings for Ling Qiu will not heat up quickly. It's not that the protagonist has no feelings for Lingqiu. According to the setting, the protagonist's feelings for Lingqiu are more of a relationship between friends and brothers. Moreover, the protagonist's time schedule is very tight, so the feelings for Lingqiu will be warmed up even more slowly. If you want to speed up the progress of your relationship, you should start from Lingqiu. Moreover, the protagonist's personality towards outsiders should be strong yet gentle, with a smile hidden behind a knife. Another big problem is that the protagonist trusts the NPC too much. The protagonist is a very suspicious person, so the protagonist's trust in the NPC will never be too high. However, in the tent and fishing scenes, the protagonist trusts the NPC too much. Secondly, the portrayal of Ling Qiu is not perfect. According to the setting in the novel, Ling Qiu is confident, has a strong desire for control, is hot on the outside and cold on the inside, is chaotic and is particularly tolerant of people he trusts. Therefore, Lingqiu should be more bold in expressing her love for the protagonist. Lingqiu is a very strong person, so she will be more aggressive in expressing her love for the protagonist. To speed up the progress of the relationship, it would be more reasonable from this aspect. For example, a person with this kind of character can definitely do something like the Overlord's bow. To be honest, people with this attribute are similar to yandere. I won't comment on the other supporting characters who don't appear much. The author's other issues are minor. (I don't have high requirements for other aspects) For other information, you can read other people's comments. Come on, author.

After the ambiguity in the early stage, the female supporting role was directly hidden. There was no single heroine label before, but now it has been added. Everyone knows what it means. The author must not have been to Jimei from the Little Sweet Potato, WB, and Douban Life Groups, right? [Laughing] Testing, even if it is blocked, I will change it to two stars.

I read it in one sitting, a very good card story. The lag game that has been in closed beta for three years has invaded reality, and the real world has turned into a big lag game. The player on the inside can bring out a card, but everyone starts from scratch. The real world is covered, and everyone can only open cards, kill monsters, and download dungeons to get cards. The cards are the author's fusion of settings from various animations, games, etc., Such as the protagonist's core card, the twelve talismans. The cards can be directly equipped on the body to fight, or they can start the card duel mode, and then the protagonist and the top three female protagonists will build a guild together. The setting is novel, the system is interesting, and the male and female protagonists are powerful. Highly recommended!

It is a rare card that combines real-world themes, and the author has given it a very appropriate benefit. There is both the gradual progress of the horizon and the excitement of card collection and battle. Although the emotional description is too timid, the character portrayal is very appropriate. What surprises me even more is that I can see that there is no combat power collapse now. Moreover, the protagonist's strengths are focused on card battles and collection, which will not alienate people. Although some people also like the protagonist to kill all the way to the top of the world, but as far as my senses are concerned, the author's rhythm control in this aspect is also very perfect. However, there are indeed some flaws, but it is still an excellent book. I sincerely recommend it to book friends who like small copies, cards, and Duel King themes.

There are some minefields and poisonous spots, but they are within the acceptable range. It is really a waste of books. You can read it. It's getting more and more boring, and it keeps suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and the children run away.

Not bad, the setting is novel (maybe it's because I haven't found any other of this type, I haven't played Yu-Gi-Oh but I'm still interested), the writing style is a bit good, so that the content doesn't seem childish and brainless; the characters are not normal and don't make people uncomfortable; suitable for killing time when bored or reading (the above is purely a personal opinion)

I want it to be a good book. If the cards were not too niche, the number of readers would be higher. The writing style and plot are reasonable, and there are some interesting points. The only shortcoming is that there are few contradictions and no explosive points. Because the proportion of cards suddenly increased, I could only jump in large sections for a long time, which made the reading experience not good.

It has great potential, the subject matter is novel, the plot is not procrastinating, and there are no poisonous points in front of it. But there is a problem. The basic size of the earth is too small. Although there are dungeons, the population density is still relatively high. Maybe we can create a second stage of the game, expand the map or something, and then create a different world map. Finally, I hope that I can see the cards in Yu-Gi-Oh, card spirits and so on, and can also do linkage. I hope the author will continue to update, please don't 🕊️ anymore. Come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Tell me your evaluation of this book objectively. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. First of all, let me talk about what attracted me to this book. The first is the card background. Although I don't play Yu-Gi-Oh, I have watched some anime. I think the innovation of the cards in it is very interesting, and the ever-expanding world view of the game is also good. The second is that the settings for top players will not become a completely brainless cool article. [Understood] Then there are areas where I think the author can still improve, mainly the emotional lines between the characters. How should I put it, my subjective feeling is that the author's portrayal of the characters is a bit stiff. Although I can understand the meaning, it does affect the subjective reading experience. For example, I feel that the author may want to describe the ambiguous plot of the male and female protagonists, but it is very simple and direct, a bit stiff. The same goes for the exchanges between the male protagonist and other characters. Maybe I am a bit picky and it always feels unnatural. For example, the portrayal of the relationship between the male protagonist and his brothers feels a bit too deliberately emphasized. In fact, it can be replaced by other hilarious details. Then there is the same mistake in the emotional transformation of his brothers. In other words, the personalities and images of these characters are not outstanding enough. I think this is one of the reasons why the rating is not high. [Laughs] To sum up, if you just like this world view and don't look closely at the emotional and daily lines, I totally think it is a good book, and I would like to give five stars to the author. My suggestion is that I hope the author's characterization can be more profound, and that I can watch more female videos to learn from it. [Hold face][Hold face]Finally, the author, come on, let me see how far you can go [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

A very good book, better than the current drama gods... (I take leave from time to time, Kawen, Shui [Jianzhu Changqing wrote 4 chapters and just started the conversation, but I don't know how many chapters it will take to finish]), the writing is similar to that of the great monk, I think it's good after seeing the book

In fact, there is no big problem. First of all, let me say that the content concept is quite interesting. I don't understand the duel mode without playing cards, but at least I can see that the plot concept is really thought out with my heart and brain. It is interesting to watch and the pace is fast and slow. The time in the plot actually passes very slowly and the development is very fast. However, the writing is a bit delayed, but overall it is good. But the only shortcoming that made me run away is that the author's emotional line of this book can make it uncomfortable for people who can read it without a single heroine and multiple heroines. You can write the order. I have also written several female characters with a tendency to be more. Xi Ling has become an elf and has to save up slowly to come out. Moreover, Lingqiu's character design is destined to be unwilling to be shared. If you don't write none, it is obviously necessary to have a heroine. The author himself also said that he wanted to use tide Ling to enlighten the protagonist, but how should I put it, the writing was a bit too dull. This may just be because I have an early emotional experience. That is, it is difficult for me to imagine that in today's social environment, a person can be dull about emotions, even to this extent. I feel that the protagonist's emotional slowness is a bit too deliberate, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. The book is still okay. If you don't care about the emotional line, it is definitely worth reading on Tomato, especially the poker player. Although I don't understand it even though I don't play it. The author's writing technique is a bit inexperienced, but I think the plot is still acceptable.

The creativity of this book is quite good, but the author sometimes swallows the settings. For example, the settings of daily tasks are a bit unclear, although there are certain patches later. There is also the mask of the Shadow Corps obtained by the protagonist. The setting is that wearing it will cause erosion and control if the spirit is insufficient. The protagonist is useless, but later he obtained the title of immunity to mental control. The mask was not used and he was directly invisible.

The writing is good, there is nothing too toxic so far, and the stitching is good. It has the feeling of an online game novel from the past. The supporting character (maybe the heroine, I'm not sure, she is a card player after all) is not a vase. I look forward to the follow-up.

When I saw more than 2,000 people urging me to update it, I knew that the potential of this book is still there, considering that only a few pictures have been published now.

It's the first time I've seen this type of movie and it's quite interesting. The plot design is very reasonable and the setting of the 12 spells is also very attractive. There are a few things that I feel are bad. The first one is that the protagonist's system is not clear, whether it is long-range or melee. The protagonist seems to be using which card is stronger. The female protagonist is on the contrary. She knows that she is following the mecha style. I still feel that the male protagonist is a jerk. Apart from Dragon Explosion, there are no usable skills. The role of the clone is a bomb, which is no different from the role of a card. It gives people a very weak feeling. There is nothing special about the protagonist, they are also red cards. The heroine's path feels no worse than that of the male protagonist, which is not very satisfying.

Personal opinion, don't spray By the time I reach 100 chapters, it's about three and a half stars. There are a lot of stitches, so those who have dabbled more can match the frequency band. For the remaining points, I personally feel that some are good and some are uncomfortable. 1. Combat strength: I feel okay. I can accept it as long as it's not too harsh. 2: Emotional line: At present, it seems that except for a few more deliberate and ambiguous ambiguous interactions, it feels a bit like the old Sword, Grandpa Tong and Mr. Asia. 3: Plot writing: I personally feel uncomfortable with this. There are some plot arrangements. I don't deny that the protagonist needs to grow up, and it is not a witty novel. Some visible hints are enough. There is no need to write them out. For example, "the plot of setting up a rule auction" and then the protagonist said that there are several layers of meaning. This kind of plot has been considered as the heroine's "assessment" several times. It's a bit awkward. I didn't hold it tight. Big points will be deducted. 4. Discussion: Some people say that it is more like a Holy Mother. It feels okay. They also give reasons for saving people and so on. It is not a Holy Mother in the broad sense. However, there are also plots such as "it feels like it has potential" and "it will be useful in the future." Different people have different opinions. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more and have long tentacles.

The setting and overall plot arrangement are good, and the combat power system is stable. However, it is not recommended to read the comment section. It is full of people who can't figure out the setting and rules and think they are very capable and invincible.

The novel is good and the subject matter is very novel. Big cheers for the author!

It's good to read, I guess it's written by a brand guy. The writing is good, the plot is good, and there are many jokes [laughing evilly] [like]

It's pretty good. It's probably because the card game world is loaded with reality. As far as I've seen, there are no brainless characters that make me sick. The portrayal of some other characters is more or less pretty good. It's generally in line with the brief introduction of a brain setting for everyone. As for the duel, although I'm not a poker player, it looks okay, it's Yu-Gi-Oh style. Sometimes other cards like Hearthstone and Summon of the Seven Saints will sometimes produce cards. The jokes are moderate. There are jokes but it's a small taste. It's good, it's enough. It's recommended. The latest tower climbing plot left me confused...