Water Margin: Hu Pan Jinlian Dominated the Northern Song Dynasty at the Beginning

Very well written. The plot is not bad. The supporting characters also have their own stories. If the main plot requires time to flow quickly, it is recommended to use scenes between supporting characters to enrich the supporting characters, and to lead out possible dangerous scenes in the main plot in the future to lay the groundwork. It would be even better if it could also connect the main storyline of the future. If there is a plot about the role of the harem, such as whether there will be children later, etc., Whose child will be born first among the first wife, the second wife, and the third wife. The harem characters also have their own character traits and shining moments. The wife of an expert in the field, the wife of an expert in the field, the virtuous wife of a combat assistant, etc. They may be quirky or cute and silly. It is best to give people the impression that women are not NPCs and can protect themselves without men, and can even provide help.

This book is very suitable to my taste and it is very easy to read. I think there will be four female protagonists, Pan Jinlian, Li Ping'er, Li Shishi, and Hu Sanniang who has not appeared. Overall, it is not bad. I give it five stars and hope the author will write more.

I read the latest chapter in one go. I have a few words to say. It's very interesting. I support it with five stars. I hope the author will work hard [like] I saw the latest chapter. I thought I would accept Sun Erniang and his wife, but I didn't expect to kill them. It suits my taste.

If you want the data to be good, you need to update more chapters. If you have six chapters a day, the data will definitely be good.

Author, don't cry, I'll give you five stars [laughing evilly] Don't be heartbroken, author, I'll give you five stars [laughing evilly]

The overall plot is okay, there are no conflicts, the emotional lines are well handled, and the characters have their own characteristics, but the portrayal is not careful enough and has some flaws. I hope that the later plot will reverse the Song Dynasty, because this dynasty cannot be assisted and can only stand on its own.

Although they are all special forces, the protagonist does not forcefully pretend to be cool, and it seems quite enjoyable. Five-star praise. Keep up the good work and quickly take down Hu Sanniang. I am waiting.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing is okay, there are no problems, but why does it feel like the protagonist is a bit of a henpeck?

This book is amazing. From beginning to end, it's not enough. It's suitable for experienced drivers [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very good, keep up the good work

Awesome, keep it up!

Dessert after dinner, very good!

It's very pretty. Come on, don't stop.

Not bad, the plot is good,

It will be good to have a holiday

The writing is quite interesting. I am very curious about how to deal with Gongsun Sheng later. After all, the spell of Ruyunlong is not ordinary powerful.

It's great to time travel, it's great to have fine golden fingers and beauties

It's pretty good, the subject matter is relatively new.

The plot is good, I can't stop watching it