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When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's very good, but that chapter really lost my IQ, and the rest is not bad. The name can be like this, Contra Lu family..., Wuhun Qingzhu The rise of the Lu family, the Lu family, etc. The content can be added like this. According to the world of immortality, Nanhai, Donghuang, Central Plains, Western Desert, etc. Even if you don't follow this, you can Come to the empire, add the Shenglang Empire, you can have a few, or the mainland can have a few, so that they may not be removed from the shelves, and then the first one will compete with each other for resources. For example, if someone encounters the resources and is discovered by others, tell the empire, sect, family power, or the protagonist's family can find out and tell the king, etc., The second one is like other The world attacks the current world, the demon world attacks the martial soul world, and then all the protagonist worlds join forces to counterattack, but someone rebels. The third one, Soul World, is particularly good. Writing a family novel, with titles, seniors, and seniority, these three are already half the battle, but this one is good. It seems like Soul World is written like this, as if the author is the third one. One, fourth, second uncle, third uncle, fifth uncle, seventh uncle, great grandfather, second grandfather, third grandfather, seventh grandfather, ninth grandfather, uncle, second uncle and third uncle, fifth uncle, sixth aunt, eighth uncle, ninth aunt, eldest brother, fifth brother, sixth sister, ninth sister, eleventh sister, fifteenth brother, etc. For the fifth one, it would be better if there is a grandfather above the protagonist's grandfather. , Or two or three, Grandpa Soul King, Great Grandpa (great-grandfather, great-grandfather) Soul Emperor or Soul Sage. The sixth one thought that the soul bone was for the protagonist, but it turned out that it was useless for the protagonist. In this case, it can only be used by the strongest person. Yes, the seventh one cannot only be the protagonist who has a chance, grandpa and the others must also have it, or the protagonist has something. Then give it to Grandpa and the others, so as to better protect the family. The eighth hope is that the heroine is not Ling Qin, because she said something, Brother Changsheng, what kind of cultivation level should I wait to find you? I am disgusted. She has no background. She can also find a casual cultivator, but two wives are needed, one is a casual cultivator, and the other is from a family like Shengwan. The protagonist is looking for his master uncle. They help. When the family is in trouble, they will definitely find allies. The ninth one has no problem for the time being, but he must not find someone like Ling Qin, otherwise he will only get a bad review. Be careful when writing feelings, otherwise all your previous efforts will be wasted. The tenth one should accompany them. If they are tested together, they can train and study together, but the protagonist has already After studying and practicing for several years, isn't it a waste of time? In the end, I read the comments that the female protagonist is not the granddaughter of the master and she is too weak. Is the protagonist very strong? Can the protagonist be too strong to handle it? Simply put, the Jindan period family looks for the Huashen period family. I think this is okay. It's okay to find someone who is not the granddaughter of the master. It's okay to find someone like that, but it's not like that. That's it. If you write it like this, I don't believe it and it will be removed from the shelves. That's it. My personal suggestion is that I hope the author will continue to work hard. One thing he writes well is the title of seniority, senior.

It's okay, not too bad, and I haven't found any good Douluo fan books at the moment.

It's very interesting, and the perspective is also very unique. It can be regarded as a companion chapter to Douluo Dalu I, or I think it's quite interesting. The plot is very reasonable, the characters have normal emotional intelligence and IQ, and the writing is very engaging and passionate.

The author's writing is very good. I hope it won't stop updating. This book is very interesting and I highly recommend it to everyone!

Looks good

Looks good, new direction, come on

It's very nice and fast-paced. Is it a single female protagonist? And who is the heroine? Is she Mo Waner?

Good, good, good

Not bad, you can take a look

It looks okay, and the plot flows smoothly.

Good, good, good, good, look good

I'm a native dog and I like to watch

Very nice looking

It's perfect and the content is great.

After reading it, there are no fatal poisonous points so far. It's just that the third chapter of the original book is set around 1700. Why are there more than 2000 here, but it doesn't affect the reading very much.

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? I just found it.

Very interesting, good luck to the author