The System Forces Me to Play Up My Romance

Maybe the gap between the male and female protagonists is a bit big, and the male protagonist is too passive, so the female protagonist needs to take the initiative. In fact, a script like this where a woman pursues a man requires the author to inadvertently describe the male protagonist's heartbeat and preference, but there are really very few. It makes people feel that the heroine is a bit tired, and the heartbeat value is in the 70s or 80s. Maybe the male protagonist's character is too reserved, and it is really difficult to see it. In addition, there are too many female supporting characters recently. Although I know that if the author wants the article to be longer, there must be more conflicts, but too many female supporting characters will make the impression a bit bad. In fact, the writing style is not bad, and the plot is also okay, but some parts are not handled well. Maybe it is still a bit difficult to write a long article. I see that now almost only the female supporting roles have more roles, and the relationship between the characters is too little.

To be honest, I was not optimistic about this novel at first, but after reading it, I found that the plot is still very good, the foreshadowing in the front matches up with the later, and the writing is really delicate. Although the writing is very immature at the beginning, I think the sour emotions at the end are really quite beautiful.