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Take a rough look at all the updated chapters so far and briefly comment on them. Let's talk about the advantages first: I like the setting in this book of mountains and seas and strange beasts living in modern society, which is a bit like foreign "fairy tales". Secondly, this book takes the form of a unit drama, with some main lines occasionally interspersed in the middle, which is more suitable for reading the previous article when you are bored. The story of each unit drama basically has a twist. The direction of the plot is still very attractive, and the suspense style is also well established. The current content allows me to continue to follow it. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings of this book: The biggest shortcoming is that this book has few violent points and a relatively long pace. One chapter contains the same number of words as two articles, which is definitely not friendly to first-time readers. People often retreat before they get into the atmosphere you have created. I hope the author can think carefully about how to quickly enter the plot in the future. Also, the script of this book has a relatively heavy style, and the plot is mainly driven by dialogue. I feel that the author should add more descriptions of other aspects, otherwise the character creation will be unclear and non-three-dimensional. But in general, after reading it completely, I can see that the author has carefully considered the concept and plot of each story, and indeed expressed some good things. And I like the occasional dry humor interspersed in the dialogue. Seeing that the author is still a new writer, I still hope that the author can keep writing and not waste such a good setting or let the book end unfinished. If the follow-up performance is excellent, it is not impossible for this novel to become an IP, so please keep working hard!

I've read the first few chapters, please update me soon! Please, I really love this setting and world view. Dada's writing style is so delicate, and I feel that Dada's knowledge reserve is very deep. I really like the combination of settings in The Classic of Mountains and Seas.