Battle Maiden World: Building an SSS-Rank Angel Corps

Yes, the short length of each event is both an advantage and a disadvantage. I feel good about briefly describing the character development process. After all, the plot can be said to be boring, but the description of the battle and the emotional description between the protagonist and the various warriors are not suitable for the short length. Different from other people's opinions, I think the author's writing is good (especially the plot of Icarus's solo battle). Although the opponent is instantly killed in many games, the sense of immersion is still good. Come on, author, it is a very good article, and I will continue to write 500+ chapters.

The setting of this book is pretty good, but unfortunately the writing power needs to be improved. Generally speaking, the pace is too fast, and the conflicts in the plot come one after another, which makes it easy to get tired. There is no time to arrange the daily life of each war queen, which makes the character image of the character not full enough. Except for the name and ability, there is basically no image, and there is a lack of flesh and blood soul. In short, readers also pursue emotional value

The author is really good at writing! The plot direction and setting combination made me very sure of it. I've plunged into this wonderful world and can't get out. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope you can continue to write more and write more. Don't stop updating. I'm ready to start a long road of catching up! In this world where the war queen competition is surging, Lin Feng leads the angel battle group to write legends, and each unique war queen is like a bright star. The super grand world view, the charm of multiple female protagonists and innovative settings are intertwined, lighting up the reading journey like bright fireworks. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to write and keep the excitement going! If it could be adapted into an anime, the visuals would be absolutely stunning and it would definitely shine with a different kind of brilliance on the screen!

Look, look, look! There are no shortcomings except that the plot connection is a bit abrupt. Someone suggested that the author should increase the amount of daily interactions between the main plots 😘

A good book, worth reading, with few poisonous points, acceptable

If it were changed to anime, it would definitely look great

It's really cool, but the pace is too fast, I'm a bit confused, and it lacks excessiveness.

Lula, lulu, it's so beautiful

OK OK! Very exciting

Overall it's good, but I was confused by the name. 😵‍💫😵‍💫