The System Has Gone Haywire! Did I Become a Freeloader Who Wins by Doing Nothing?

The urban plot is a bit cliche at the beginning, but it gets better and better as it goes on. The more novel double-travel story is worth encouraging! I've finished reading it. I've been a little restless lately and rarely finish a book. This kind of short novel with a million words just suits my current taste. I'm not going to brag about it, the plot of the Immortal World is really well written, the story is novel, and the logic is rigorous. However, the pace of the Immortal World chapter is too fast, and it should be interesting to watch if it is expanded on. If you think the early stages are not good, just skip to the chapters and read the main plot. The flaws do not hide the good points, it is a good novel.

The little author himself should also give it a good review. Because I don't want to follow the ordinary model of killing monsters and upgrading, I have added some of my own ideas. There will be an episode and daily routine. If you have any ideas and suggestions, please point them out. [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Like this post][Like this post][Like this post]

It's not bad. It's boring to watch the invincible character from the beginning, and the development is too slow. I hope the author can write it more happily. After reading it, the story and plot are worthy of five stars. If nothing else, at least it is not the fantasy novel routine I have seen before. The author is a logic freak, and he is able to recycle all the foreshadowing in a reasonable and natural way in the finale, which is already better than most tomato novels. To be honest, I feel that the author, a newcomer, did not take care of the early stage, which delayed this good story. If it were written by another golden novel, it would at least be a hit fantasy worth three to five million yuan. Overall, it gets better as you go further, and it is a good book.

It's a super cool novel to read without using your brain! The master sect is fighting each other, but the scene involves a lot. Blue Star is the place of reincarnation and the place of experience in the world of immortality. The master's power is transformed into a system and uses the power of transcendence to misunderstand each other's items. Weak monsters are misjudged as high-level, and high-level items are dropped, and vice versa! Taking advantage of the time difference between the two places, he grew up quickly and had no worries about training resources. The protagonist (junior brother) finally gained invincibility with three thousand Tao principles and brutally killed the master of the fairy world (elder brother) to avenge his master! Cool literary genre

The writing is good and looks very comfortable. Do you have to write so many words? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

2025.12.09. Finished reading. My admiration for you is like the water of the Yellow River flowing endlessly and out of control! I like the wind in March, the rain in April, the sun that never sets and the best of you the most. You are like a bitter melon, dressed so cool and looking so cool.

Why is the score so low? Although some details are not good, it is better than many novels of the same type. The plot is also quite interesting. It is not a cliché plot, nor is it very mentally retarded. It can get a minimum score of 8. Are people nowadays so demanding?

The protagonist's original intention is to be honest, the protagonist's heart is the Virgin, the protagonist's behavior is crazy to seek death, and finally, the purple gas in the Dantian after the foundation-building period of the protagonist in the author's writing can be destroyed with just a finger. [Please take a closer look]

The plot has ups and downs and is wonderful!

This book is okay, why is it rated so low?