Fight the War and Execute the Deserter King with Your Own Hands

A very good pirate novel The justice of the protagonist is; the justice of killing, giving the killing to the pirates and giving justice to the people And the protagonist said that when he is strong enough, he will definitely change the navy or kill the Celestial Dragons, but he is not strong enough at the moment and has to endure it. It is said that he will become a grandson first and then a master. The most heavenly gift.

Killing in One Piece is so natural, you don't have all kinds of awesome stuff, it feels quite natural, it's really a masterpiece. In terms of justice, except for this one, the others are a bit too exaggerated. I feel that I hope the author will work harder in the future.

Good news, worthy of 5 stars. Unlike other One Pieces, what you do now can really change the pirate world in the future, turning it into an utopia with only smiles and joy. Some small reveries need attention, the author is very listening to opinions cool But the Thunder Fruit was too weak, and it felt one ten thousandth less than Enel. I hope it won't be limited to sniping. The setting of the Thunder Fruit is a large range of AOE damage, high speed, large range and high damage. The upper limit of the Thunder Fruit's performance is higher than that of the Three Great Generals Fruit, but its current form of expression is too weak. Thunder Gatling, to be honest, it's a bit funny. It's clearly a nuclear weapon but it has the Gatling effect.

This book develops towards absolute justice similar to Akainu, but the difference is that the protagonist considers the civilians and will compensate them after the war. Moreover, the protagonist has a very good personality and treats his subordinates very well. Basically, he gets the share and military merit. It is a good book, but it is undeniable that there are some poisonous points like other books. For example, in the Devil's Triangle, the protagonist is actually A few pirates can get in. There is no need to bear the responsibility on your own in order to win people over. I just feel like I am doing this for your own good and you should be grateful to me. It feels a little uncomfortable, but overall it is much better than other books. At least there is no problem with the setting. It is also possible that I didn't notice it. Anyway, the look and feel is quite good, but there are some poisonous points [face covering] Oh, by the way, this book is like a Shuangwen, that is, it is written more tactfully, and the author's writing style is not bad. At least it does not have a big deviation from the original work like other Shuangwen. Although this is a fanfic, you have to create it yourself to change it, rather than changing the original settings beyond recognition. There is also a problem in terms of combat power. Maybe it is too high at the beginning and the author wants to suppress it later, but in fact, this is a Shuangwen [face covering]

The book is quite good. The front part is very exciting, but the back part feels a bit boring. Basically, after reading the table of contents, I don't want to read the content and know the development of the content. But today I watched the translation video of the One Piece manga made by Station B and watched some chapters of the latest Valley of the Gods. I really fell in love with Rocks' character design. He is a member of the D family and knows his mission. He keeps looking for trouble with the Navy and the World Government. Then he uses his identity as a pirate to strengthen his power and aims to overthrow the World Government. He even has a friendship with the king of the Giant Kingdom. This description is exactly the same as the previous One Piece. It makes my blood boil. Then Rocks can still have his real purpose be to save his family when others go to the Valley of Gods to snatch Xia Qi and the treasures [crying] I was totally attracted by this hero-like mission.

The pirate article that's okay is quite good. At least it tells all the plots that need to be said and expresses everything that I want to express. It's much better than most articles. However, I hope that the author can add more emotional expressions in the future, which can be domineering or flammable, but not too much. If several pictures in a row have this domineering plot, it will make people feel awkward. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but there are many high-burning ones, so I think four stars are very good. I hope the author will work harder @Reading

It's so good to read. This is the only One Piece fanfic I like to read. The first one is about summoning League of Legends heroes (unfortunately it's unfinished), and the second one is this one. It's very good to read [Like][Like][Like]

It's pretty good and well written. But a good work needs to be foreshadowed. I feel that the plot is progressing too fast. It might be better if it settles down. There are many things that can be written. Please refer to those of Manslaughter🤔

Not bad, not bad. What attracted me in the early stage of this book was the justice of the protagonist and the title of the book. In the middle and late stages, a series of changes in the naval characters attracted me even more.

This is the authentic system text. As long as you get through the basic period, it will be a snowball mode. You will get faster and stronger on the road to becoming stronger, instead of becoming stronger, it will be the same as not becoming stronger. Although the author later ended it faster to avoid being stabbed in the back by Oda.

According to Tomato, this pirate fanfic is already a masterpiece. The character traits and mentality changes of the protagonist are well described. From the initial desire to "survive" to the subsequent "sincere eradication of evil", the explanation is very clear. The system is also integrated very well, and there is no big collapse of combat power. There is not much space to describe the system, and it is only used for pure cheating. The subsequent changes in Aokiji's "justice", Kizaru's "bond", Zefa's mental change in pure taijutsu and even writing down his experience, as well as the part about Luffy just going to sea and Garp's psychological activities, were very comfortable to watch and well written. But it's still far from what I consider to be a masterpiece. First, the author always likes to use the old trick of "fishing for gold from the bottom of the sea". I have read the author's previous book. Although it is well integrated in this book, writing two books for the same reason is not very good in terms of perception. Because after reading the previous book, you can roughly guess the basic plot of the follow-up. The second is that the pace is too tight, one plot follows another, the mentality changes of many supporting characters are a bit abrupt, and many places are directly "instant kills", which is a bit flat. The original characters and characteristics of One Piece are not displayed. It would be better if more words could be spent on these issues (such as Zoro's one-sword style, Luffy's idea of becoming stronger, Crocodile, Bundywald, Douglas Barrett, and the Red Earl, these are all a bit sloppy.) But considering that the author originally wanted to write a million words and cut out some plots, these shortcomings are actually within the acceptable range. The most important thing is that Momonosuke was not killed [smile][smile]

Most fanfics follow the plot and describe the plot of the anime throughout. Without original plot, it is very boring. The author of this book has his own ideas, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and his writing skills are very good. The characters' personalities are consistent with the settings of the original work, and almost all the main characters appear, but they don't take up too much space. Everything is just right. This book is for the navy, the ultimate justice, and the three views are super correct! The point is! ! ! It has illustrations! Illustrations! If you haven't read the illustrated novel yet, what else do you want to read? Highly recommended! [Laughing out loud]

The author, your five stars are here [Read carefully] Brothers, this book's naval route wipes out all the pirates. The original Luffy crew members Zoro, Sanji, Nami, and Robin have joined the protagonist. There are illustrations at the end of each chapter of the article. The illustrations are very beautiful [Read carefully]

It's quite interesting and unique. The author's thoughts on the enemy and our personnel are a bit too beautiful. The rest is pure fantasy, the kind of dreaming. Although the whole world, even in reality, started with the Caotai team, some have become more sophisticated, and some are still Caotai teams, but the enemy is not stupid. There is also the naturalization of our side. It is really possessed by a succubus. It is difficult to jump. It should still be 4 stars. It's not an 8⭐ positive review, but it made me excited. [Cover face]

The writing is good and the ending is quite satisfactory. Unlike the Dream Destroyer Mentor I read before, who obviously joined the navy ten years in advance and could recruit the protagonist group into the navy, but ended up having to kill them all after they became pirates. They were not real pirates, and they could be recruited into the navy before they became pirates, just like this novel.

A very good One Piece novel, the word count is not very large, but it is very enjoyable to read. There is a system, and you get points by killing pirates. There is no fruit, the male protagonist uses one punch to defeat all methods, domineering and physical. The naval hawks, the Four Emperors, and the Five Old Stars were all killed, and they presided over the war on the top. Blackbeard and Ace were all killed, and the deserter king Kebi was also dead. The protagonist group, Zoro, Sanji, Nami, and Robin were all admitted to the navy. Luffy was knocked unconscious by Garp as soon as he went to sea and was brought back to the navy. In the end, he also became a marine. Chopper, Franky, and Brooke did not appear. Jinbei, Sand Crocodile, and Moria were all dead, and the others including the Empress ended before they had time to clean up, because the author was stabbed in the back by Oda. In the end, the male protagonist was invincible, and he and Im started a one-on-one duel, and then it ended. It was quite enjoyable to read, there is no harem, the whole book is about fighting, and I never had sex with a woman. All the advancing cities were killed.

It is considered top-notch among One Piece fan fiction, and it does justice very well. It looks very comfortable.

Yes, there are too few interesting articles. I suggest that the author be tied up and write hard. Recommended by old bookworms [Learned] I just realized that I have read both of your books and they are on the bookshelf [face covering]

Yes, this is a fan novel with great potential. I hope the author's combat power will not collapse in the later period and he will not enter the palace [smile][smile][smile]

It's really enjoyable to watch. There may be some minor problems in the middle part, but it's okay if you watch it patiently. This is my personal feeling. In short, I experience it for myself. Everyone has different ideas. If you don't feel good about it, just try something else.

Overall, it's a good book on Tomato. The characters are vividly drawn and in line with the original work. But the author's view on fruits is a bit extreme. He could collect more fruits and give them to his subordinates. Also, the plot is far different from the original work. I hope the author can control the logic of the plot in the future [sending my heart]

One of the best One Piece fanfics I have read so far. It carries out the justice of killing to the end. I hope the author can continue to persevere.

Bor allows children in the neighborhood to see the purest naval culture

It's a very interesting pirate article. If you like the navy, you can give it a try. Also, come on, the author, there are too few updates.

Not bad, not bad. I like to read this kind of pirate novels that kill pirates without mercy or destroy humanity.

It is one of the most enjoyable stories among pirate fanfics. Many things were not continued and the author finished them hastily. But I personally think it is pretty good. There are no bad points. You can continue to read it, but the battles in the later stages are a bit boring.

Every time I read a fan work, I feel a sense of excitement about the multiverse. To be honest, the world view of One Piece is very distorted. What attracts people is the characters with distinctive personalities. However, this book is straight to the end and corrects the world! Cool!

It's a refreshing article, although the pace is a bit fast, but as a naval aspect of One Piece, it's very good, and it's also finished. You can read it in one go and it's enjoyable. I recommend it [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

Ended on November 13, 2025 This is a good One Piece fanfic. It took me a day to finish it. The last part is a little quick. I can expand it and write twenty or thirty chapters. Overall, it is good. The whole process is high-energy. I read the series in one go and can give it a score of 4.5 Stars. If you like the One Piece series, you can buy it. Justice throughout the killing, good Navy King story

It's enjoyable to watch, not complicated, has no emotional line, and the ending is neither bad nor good. It's very enjoyable, especially the loyalty scene. But the author was too lazy and cut many branches. I condemn it, but the quality can't be said.