The King of War That Begins with Pirates

The writing is okay, there's nothing toxic about it so far. Will the protagonist eat devil fruits? The biggest feature of One Piece is a must-try!

It's okay. I started fighting with the golden lion and now I feel like this is normal! For the time being, the combat power can be seen, and the krypton gold is not that excessive. According to the author's thinking, when entering the next stage, it is very appropriate and just right to get a golden lion to increase the combat power. The author is also afraid that his combat power will suddenly collapse, so he has restrained himself from hunting pirates with high bounties. After all, if you don't meet them, you can't make money, and if you can't make money, you can't improve your combat power! I still hope the author's transitions (fighting pirates) won't be so long, and I still want to see the plot where the protagonist sells things!

It's very interesting, and it can be regarded as the basis of the Tomato Pirates novel. The author's writing style is concise and the plot is interesting. It's worth mentioning that I generally hate original characters in fan fiction, because they can't get the point right. In order to write an original character, they write dozens of chapters, and then they have to take care of the whole family, squeezing out all the original characters and making it uncomfortable to read. But the writing in this book is very good. For example, the background of the little princess's country's subjugation is very clear. It can be solved in a few chapters, and then it becomes reasonable, concise and natural when you encounter it later. Five stars, I hope I can write it to the end.

The author of One Piece's three views on output

Grandma is a bitch. It's a very good book, but it was raised to death. Come back and take a look suddenly. As a result, it was discontinued. Later, I was even more surprised to discover that the book I am currently reading was also written by this author. This is fucking amazing. This author wrote a good book.

Baby_5 can be accepted, the weapon fruit feels like it can be used as a display of arms

Strokes, all strokes

It's quite enjoyable to read, but the number of words is too few. If you chase it every day, it will make you very painful, so for your own health, it is recommended to raise two to three hundred chapters first.

The writing is very good, especially the plot concept. It's not like a Tomato book, but more like a starting point [laughing]

It's very good. Why don't you write it again? Don't let the author be affected.

So far, so good! Food and grass level one, just saw the archers join.

This probably isn't the first time this author has written a book. Compared with Tomato's other Pirates fics, it's much better.

The writing is very good, why is the rating so low?

The writing is very good, the pace is good, and it doesn't overwhelm the combat power.

This is okay

The plot is pretty good, not nerve-wracking

It looks pretty good for now.

Good-looking, love watching, not enough

It's very well written, this rating [face covering]

Feeling pretty good

Looks good, watch it if you like

It's a nice novel

You can see, there's nothing wrong with it.

Why do you look similar? When will he be resurrected?

Does the author have another account? It's not like writing a book for the first time

White-haired Cage, you did a good job [laughing evilly]

This book shouldn't appear here, it should be at seven o'clock [laughing]

It's still pretty good, but it would be nice if there was a panel

Although, but, okay, come on, author [Like][Like][Like]

It's awesome. I just found this book too early. After reading it for a while, it was gone. More from the author. As for the author, the writing is quite good, why don't you continue?