I'll Give You Two Punches

It's a good book. The protagonist has a bit of arrogance, but the opening is a bit uncomfortable when the protagonist's weakness is directly handed to him, as if it was forced.

It's not exciting enough, the pace is too slow, but the plot and characters are pretty good

I seem to have read this book somewhere, and it's basically the same. And that one seems to be finished

Enjoy the bean dip! Able to do things without being rude, men and women are equal, they look good and love to watch [laughs]

It's okay, it's quite enjoyable to read, and the continuous and stable updates don't guarantee that this book will be popular, but it can still attract a lot of traffic. According to the rating standard of Tomato, it is definitely 8 points. 8.5 Is not a big problem. Above 9 points, it depends on the quality of updates.

Three or four years ago, I read a book with basically the same setting as this book, but it was discontinued. In the magical world, the male protagonist was betrayed by the two sisters, and was debt-collected by the female at the beginning. After awakening the system, the first skill is the strong hand to crack the skull. Is it the author of your previous book?

It's a good book. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas for the article. Although the writing style seems to be somewhat assisted by AI, in Tomato, this is already the smallest problem. The first is the male protagonist. The male protagonist has no so-called pulling and pulling, no so-called one-to-one thinking, but only the determination to use his fists to violently destroy all monsters and monsters after gaining the aggrieved memory of the original owner. The three views are quite normal, because the world set in the book is a very bad dark magical world, so that even if violence is used casually, it doesn't matter. And the emotional line has not emerged much at the moment. Maybe the adopted sister has a one-sided tendency, but the male protagonist currently only wants to become stronger, and he should be a more traditional kingly male protagonist. Then there are the various events. In fact, the setting process is still in the past. There is no special demotion plot that people can spot at a glance. Generally speaking, it is adequate. It can be seen that the author wants to slowly expand the world from small to large through events one after another. Finally, there are shortcomings. The first is that the description of foreshadowing needs to be strengthened. Sometimes a scene is described too deliberately, so that people know in advance that there is foreshadowing, and then when it is recycled later, it does not have the feeling of sudden realization, which is a pity; secondly, the character Gao Yao, we can see that the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing in her, but unfortunately it is not reflected. If you want to use her as a powerful character in the later stage, maybe you shouldn't set up the foreshadowing so early? I don't understand it very well, but I hope that all the foreshadowing can be recycled when I actually write the high key later. Overall, it's still great. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

Praise the author. At least it looks very smooth so far. Small problems such as typos and word order can be corrected to improve the look and feel. The rhythm is almost there and it makes people want to read on. The combat power system expands faster. The combat power system is not clearly expressed in the article, but it is not used. In short, fighting is fun.

The writing style is quite unique. The protagonist is invincible, will be injured but will win in the end, and is decisive and ruthless. Of course, there must be certain trade-offs for the sake of the plot. You can't just destroy the enemy right away, which is unrealistic. The daily part is also good, with some tension and relaxation. At first, she felt that she shouldn't involve her former neighbor, but later she discovered that she had been targeted for a long time, and her parents were high-level officials and would not be easily implicated by the protagonist. Overall, it suits my personal taste. It's a pity that the author is a scumbag. I don't know how long I have to wait to see the follow-up, so I can only meet again by chance.

This book is worthy of this rating, but it is not very popular and no one has read it, so the rating cannot go up. In this way, I can only say that it is rare for a book that uses this kind of Marriott template content to be well written and has its own style. Tomato has many books of this type before. They are all the same, carved out of the same mold, and they are often discontinued and unfinished. The author of this book is one of those rare people who keeps improving. Although he disappeared for a while, he came back and continued writing. I hope the author can continue writing. It is very interesting. Although the update speed is slow, it is being updated anyway. I think the author is a more responsible author. If you are rich, please give me some money. If you are not rich, just give me some free gifts. Authors also need to eat. I don't want to feed myself with books😭😭

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There are too few, not enough to watch, and some enemies have been laid out for a long time and can be killed with just one click without even feeling the pain. This is not very good.

Deflated? Don't look at the author's nonsense, the whole book is just one sentence, fight! Cool! Have you eaten yet? Punch me first. If you are not gentle or ink-stained, the villain will be killed without leaving any trouble. If the good guy comes around, you will be punched by me. The Riddler will enjoy the simple bad breath and the ultimate enjoyment.

The whole crowd is wailing

I'll give you one punch. If that's not enough, I'll punch you again.

Write a good farewell eunuch

Support and look forward to the follow-up

Baby, what you wrote seems to be a group portrait article The bedding is too long, it would be better if it was a little shorter

Great novel, it refreshed my brain

The content of the book shows the character of Wanhao appropriately. It is much better than other Seti prototype books I have seen so far. Brothers can eat it and it is very palatable.

Good looking Really beautiful

The man with strong magnetic field and strong teeth

It's a great battle, cheers for the author!

It's so cool, so cool to watch

Super cool, I like Wanhao

I think it just looks good [laughing]

I want to watch boxing

I like it very much, very beautiful

It's very cool, I'm just looking forward to it

Cool, have you seen the numerical value?