The Succubus Fell and Became a Saint

Good luck, I feel like the setting borrowed from "I will never give in when I am reincarnated as a saint in a bad world", the six saints, butter, demons, and the transformation between saints and demons. That one felt more like farming, but this one is more interesting. I look forward to updating it.

I originally came in to read Lezi's articles after looking at the introduction and tags, but I struck gold. The psychological journey is probably like this: Transform into a Le Ziwen, just read it to pass the time - um, a decent beginning - hiss, the author has something - fall in love directly [admiration] Advantages: The writing is delicate and beautiful, and the plot logic is smooth. In the chapter I am reading now, the main characters have outstanding image characteristics and the character creation is relatively successful. And the author's intentions can be seen in the logic of the writing and the setting of foreshadowing, from the title of the opening game "Elegy of the Six Saints" to the seven pillars of light seen when the protagonist's consciousness enters the "Kingdom of God", as well as the protagonist's interaction and psychological activities with the supporting characters when being hunted by demons. Disadvantages: The pace is a little slow, and the text creates too much tension in the picture. (But it's free!!!) Summary: I personally think it is a very good Western fantasy. If the author can expand the world settings later, make steady progress, and write an epic feeling, the book rating should be 9.7 Or 9.8 (Don't cut it, don't make it a mess [I'm about to cry] It's not easy to find a good book) Also: Single, married, or married are acceptable to everyone, as long as the author has good writing skills and can control it and write excellent emotional lines. Personally, I think this book may be biased [what] The author please update it quickly, they can do anything [I'm about to cry] Add a comment. Currently reading Chapter 47 of Volume 4. The main line of this article should be almost laid out? There are a lot of parts that can be written, but the bulk of the plot should be the past battle between the demons and the ancient gods. If the author wants to continue to expand the world line, he will probably introduce the line of extraterrestrial demons, but this part may be highly bound to the story line of the God War. It depends on the author's subsequent performance. The second half of the second chapter may be related to the author's status, and of course it may also be related to the readers' voice. The foreshadowing [such as buried] and the ending are hasty, which is not in line with the author's previous standards. The rest can only be said to be in line with the author's usual level. As for the cp line, the orientation must be Bai Bai. As for whether it is possible to be Bai Hou... I don't know ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ It depends on the author, but the Ice Saint probably didn't run away, so she wouldn't have a knife at the end, right? But personally, it doesn't matter whether there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. It depends on the author's ability to control the emotional line. After all, maybe [true love] can exist in multiple parts at the same time? There was some emotion at the end. Internet articles require authors to maintain a high update frequency, and in order to make a living, authors need to consider the opinions of some readers. Perhaps it is for these reasons that this book did not meet my previous expectations. This is an excellent online article that can find its own audience and achieve good results. But I think the author has not made a breakthrough in this book. I hope the author's next book will be even more exciting. I wish the author a happy new year and prosperous literary fortune╰(*´`*)╯

Although I haven't read much, it is definitely a good book so far. The psychological description of the characters is delicate, and their personalities are also very prominent. The characters may overlap a bit with those I've seen before, which makes the image somewhat classic. Although it's not excellent, it's still worth watching. Stack the armor first, just a personal opinion. To sum up, this book is selling itself over someone else's head, and the content does not match the introduction and title. But the author's writing style is very good, the characterization is classic, the character descriptions are detailed and beautiful, and the plot is also very deep. Below is a detailed analysis. What originally made me decide to read this book was the contrast between the demon bloodline and the background of the butter world. That is to say, I simply want to see beautiful girl posts and daily deviant comedy, but it seems that the author is too involved in it, and the protagonist does not look like a protagonist. In most cases, he looks like he has been taken away by the water god. What originally attracted me was the theme of light novels, but who knows, I was tricked into talking about responsibility, reincarnation, and atonement. I don't object to the author talking about this, but if you talk about it in more than half of the 100 chapters, it's too heavy. Also, the forms are too separated. As I said, it's all about contrast. What I want to see is the water god acting coquettishly, rolling around, being cute and confused, then the succubus being horny but self-respecting, and the vampire princess being thirsty for blood and hungry and looking for people to fuck her everywhere. But for now, it seems that there is basically no difference between the protagonist's normal form, succubus form, and vampire form, while the water god form is completely unrelated to the other three forms, and many parts of the article revolve around the water god. But the question is, what I want to see is the protagonist, what does it have to do with the water god? I have read all kinds of dark and dark novels, and I want to find a light novel that is mindless to enjoy. I came in at about the same time according to your settings, and ended up saving this and saving that, atonement and burdened. Oh my God, you have such a good setting and you are telling me this? What's the difference between this and putting a calculus teaching video in the film? The more I think about this, the angrier I get. I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but now I'm going to give it two stars and I'll change it when my anger subsides. Of course, the author's quality is pretty good, and I'm very satisfied with the writing style, otherwise I wouldn't have typed so many words. Oops, I really vomited. In the past, I never gave in to pursuing the reincarnated saint and ended up getting married. But now it's like this again. Such a good setting and such good writing are all written crookedly. I'm so angry. One star. Anger is gone

It's been a while since I've seen such an attractive theme. I suggest you increase your efforts and update it greatly. Comparing the two neighboring games "Saint of the Bad World" and "Saint of the Malicious Master", they do have their own characteristics. At least the gameplay is more interesting on the basis of controllable flow change. The settings of the transformation between saints and demons also have a larger stage performance. The overall plot can be seen to be set through my own hard work and outline. Overall, it's very good, very promising, and very attractive. I don't know how many people still remember my brother's magical girl Ruri. [Understood]

Very nice, very nice. Whether it's writing power, plot construction, environmental rendering, or character construction. All are superior. But from my personal point of view, I hate gender change. I really want to see the male protagonist become a knight to save the female protagonist and save the world. Water can contain everything, but it can also envelop everything and become the source of power that destroys everything. I am very happy and glad that I can find such a good book and plot. But I really can't accept this gender-changing setting. But for other people who can accept it, this is undoubtedly a good book, well worth reading, and very beautiful. [Code to live][code to live][code to live][code to live]

There is no doubt that it is a five-star novel. I have been reading online novels for almost four years, and most of them are of the Beibai genre. Even so, the overall score of this book can be ranked first for me. There are not many emotional lines in this book, but they are few and refined. Even for a reader like me who attaches great importance to emotional lines, it can be read. What is really attractive is the writing and plot, which makes people can read it in one breath. The author is obviously a loyal fan of Baidu and ACG. Some small details can make people in the circle smile knowingly. At the same time, he knows where the red flags are and knows how to avoid them. The plot is also quite novel, mixing various elements while achieving the effect of 1+1>2. However, the interpretation of the issue of fate in the latest plot is not very good. The first half of Mission: Impossible is well written (although it is a bit heart-wrenching), but the second half about planning is relatively ordinary. It may be related to the author being busy revising another book, or there may be more clever writing later. It just depends on how it is written next. The climax later is to determine the woman's body, explode the waistcoat, and three families (Ice Saint, Elf Tribe, and Succubus Tribe) compete for the Water Saint. If you want to push the emotional line, you can push it here. Furthermore, if the identity of the Water God is well written, it would also be an interesting point. In short, this book can be read as a very good Western fantasy. As for the changing of elements... I can look forward to it in the future ([Love]

Yes, there are many people who don't have the patience to see the protagonist transform. Although the transformation part of this book is indeed very late, it is very unique. If it is a general transformation text, it will be an old routine and become boring. The plot of a truly good article needs to be well-founded and foreshadowed, so this is a good book. Please read it carefully. Some people say that the author is weak. Although the author does not update much every day, there is indeed not much water. As the author himself said: "I know that many readers like to watch the kind of protagonist who shouts about bonds and friendship and rushes to blow others up. This kind of plot is indeed easy to combust, but writing too much It's boring and you will think it's the same old routine." Because there are fewer authors, and most of them are writing plots and foreshadowings, so after reading a chapter, they will feel very watery, which leads many people to want to keep the book, but they don't want to abandon the book, because it is indeed a good book. Some people also say that the protagonist of this book is the Virgin. In fact, this is not the case because the protagonist's purpose of rebirth is to atone for sins. Therefore, in some places it looks like the Virgin, but in fact it is not the Virgin. In short, I hope everyone can give more high scores when reviewing books, so that more people can read this good book. Attachment: I hope the author can make a character relationship table. Due to the Westernized names in this book, every time I see a name that has appeared in the past instead of a common name in recent chapters, it takes me a while to remember it. For example, I have already forgotten the name of the Ice Saint. If her name appears in a new chapter, I may have to turn forward to remember that it is her. I am surprised [face covering]

To put it bluntly, the book's preparation and shaping of characters and scenes can rival traditional paper literature. The plot is not sloppy at all, the description of the details is equally vivid, and the author's writing skills are amazing. This book even contains the author's own thoughts on certain philosophical issues, which is very valuable on this platform.

First of all, the western fantasy is well written. At first I thought it was more about daily life and more about comedy, but after reading it, I felt that the battle was still very enjoyable. The writing can support the description of the big scenes of demigod and god-level fights. It is definitely good in Tomato and turned into a hundred words. If you wrap up the foreshadowing later, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

The style of this book is very similar to that of 🍍Bao, and the subject matter is also recently published, which is relatively novel. It is very interesting for book lovers who like this style, and I can give it full marks. The author's writing style is also very good. Although there are not many updates yet, judging from the author's previous book, this one should not be bad either. The disadvantage is that there are too few... The author has worked hard to update (｡ò ∀ ó｡). The low score is only temporary. When the plots that make people mouth-watering are updated later, the score will definitely rise steadily (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)[smile]

Someone's book still follows the same formula as always, and it's still so beautiful. Come on, keep up the good work💪💪 @Shiye [laughs] I really don't like the style of the latest one. But the writing is really good. After I finish writing this book, what next?

Chapter 44: A very good short story (bushi). At first glance, I thought this title was a story about sexual transformation and farming—similar to the kind of story about being reincarnated into a villain. Well, putting aside the buttery background, the first twenty chapters are the male protagonist's self-reflection and struggle, and then the time travel and reincarnation really flashed me. In the end, these almost incomprehensible abilities improved the male (female) protagonist's quality. Very good and worth watching. It's this hit-and-run trap and the interlude at the beginning of the second volume that make me not want to follow it every day, so I'll just keep it for now and wait until I finish the volume before reading it (hehe)

It can barely be counted as the second high opening... The prospect index is about 8 points... Although you have "not married" on the label, but I want to see Lily Tie Tie wwwwww (holding the phone darkly) (grabs the barber next to him and takes a deep breath) Well, back to the topic, to be honest with the current plot... I can't predict the follow-up based on my imagination. After all, all my ideas come from the hundreds of books I read, and I have never written a book. In terms of look and feel, it's a bit... Weird? But I can't tell what's weird about it. I don't know if this book refers to the work of SF author Tang Tang Returns, but judging from the names, it's hard not to compare the two. Your work has the same early start with fewer systems, but Tang's Bad Young Master obviously made me feel more comfortable watching it. First of all, the protagonist in Tang's work obviously intends to be the big boss in the later period rather than the assistant. It is very satisfying to kill him directly when the fire is over. The protagonist of your work seems to be able to c but actually has a self-protection aid, which is quite disappointing. Secondly, Tang's works contain a lot of... Uh... Abstract language and plot, which is very cool. This is considered a software difference. No offense or bad words intended, the above

There is basically no plot in this book. The plot in the later stages is basically in a completely different direction. If you read Baidu, you can just give up. However, if you look at it in a Western fantasy direction, the plot is exciting enough. The plot logic is pretty good, there are basically no poisonous points in the later period, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. On the whole, the protagonist realizes his mistakes and seeks redemption, then encounters various things on the road, gets to know various people, and finally achieves redemption. Generally speaking, the plot in the middle and later stages is very exciting (I watched the early stage a long time ago, so I don't remember). The emotional line is very weak compared to the plot line. If you want to read the relationship, I suggest you change the book. It is very suitable for those who want to read Western fantasy.

The texture of the early stage is indeed very special. A playboy is forced to become a saint after being reborn. He also has to face the succubus, the pursuit of his childhood sweetheart, and the ghosts in the family. The sense of struggle and growth line are very interesting. The intertwined feelings of guilt and obsession between Selenia and Selenian are also very thick. Supporting characters like Anna and Adasi also have their own pain and choices, making people feel that this world is really cruel and real. But things gradually changed later on. There were more and more vests, including saints, mermaids, ancestors of the blood race, elves, dragons... Each time it was a plot that "shocked the audience". It was fresh for the first time, but became numb after watching too much. The combat power is also completely unleashed. In the early stage, you have to fight all the way to defeat a succubus. In the later stage, fighting demigods and alien gods is like drinking water. There is no need to worry about the protagonist losing. I am only curious about what new identity she will use to win this time. The emotional line has also been compressed. Selenia could have been written more delicately, but it quickly jumped to the agreement to have a child, and the tension and hesitation in the middle was omitted. The supporting characters also began to become tools. After Adasi was canonized, she had little role to play. Oresti's naturally stupid jokes were used repeatedly, and she gradually became tired of it. After all, the early stage is about watching how a person struggles to survive, and the later stage is about watching how a god crushes everything. The two stories are inherently different. If you like the texture of the former, you will indeed be a little disappointed when you see the latter. However, no matter what, this is still a rare masterpiece in Tomato

The writing style and pace are comfortable, neither lengthy nor too simplistic. The various conflicts in the plot make people full of expectations. I hope that the follow-up information about the protagonist's life experience and the transformation of the devil will not be too bland, and reasonable arrangements can be given.

The writing style is very good. After all, he is an old author, and the quality is guaranteed. The only drawback is that the current word count cannot keep up, and it is not enough to read [I almost cry]. Now it seems that there should be no problem in writing more than 1 million words. I just hope that the author can take his time and not write half of it.

First of all, I am sure that this book is indeed a good book. Both the saint and the butter elements are very appetizing. Let's talk about the overall pace first. It may be a little slow and dragging for most people, but I think it's okay. It is also because of the slow pace that the rendering is sufficient and the characters are three-dimensional. Then let's talk about a detail issue. It's the part in Volume 1 when Andre becomes Evelin. Evelin dislikes the fact that she is too messy in her male body and does a lot of cleaning. It can be understood that the author's purpose is to show that the male protagonist is affected by female behavior after changing gender, but the lack of foreshadowing seems a bit abrupt. However, there are no similar plots in the future that do not affect the plot, so it can be regarded as the author's writing. I later added another book by the author, maybe because I know too little about this type of writing. Judging from the previous book, this process is gender reassignment, and then due to some factors affecting personality, words and deeds, etc., In the end, the person becomes a woman and cannot change back. The plot of this type of novel is still different from what I expected, but the public likes this kind of plot about changing into a girl and not being able to change back, and I won't deny it. From this point of view, the author deliberately created this plot, so there is no problem in writing it this way.

I quite like the character design of the protagonist, especially the different personalities of different bloodline clones. It can be seen that the author is very sophisticated in portraying the characters. At the same time, the settings of each saint are also refreshing. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. A lot of time was spent on the first volume, which is the beginning of the story. The pen and ink are used to describe the psychological changes of the protagonist, but most of the places are very repetitive. At the beginning of the story, when the reader does not understand the world view, such a description seems very dragging. The author wants to express the separation between the protagonist's identity and the identity of the evil boy. At the same time, the protagonist has a sense of identity with the things he has done as the evil boy, but still Too much writing and ink was spent, and the entire first volume advanced very little plot, and the wisdom of the Wind Saint in the second volume was a bit lacking, because the whole plan almost relied on the protagonist alone, and did not show the Wind Saint's wisdom and years of planning. The twist was also a bit blunt, but as long as you finish reading the first and second volumes, continue reading. As you read on, you can feel the author's dedication to this work, and you can also appreciate the ups and downs of the plot. Although the first two volumes are slightly flawed, you can really feel that the plot is getting better and better, and the image of each bloodline of the protagonist is becoming more and more vivid. Overall, it is great. In my opinion, it can score at least 9.4 Points. I feel that the plot at the end is a bit lengthy, and the wording is too elaborate, which makes it difficult to have the motivation to continue reading. After watching it for a long time, I feel a little bored. Is it better for the author to improve the control of rhythm and wording?

In this book, the author has greatly improved his description and portrayal of battles, and his writing style remains the same. Some people say that the first volume is very slow, but as far as I'm concerned, it still looks good. (Maybe it's also because I watched the remastered version) However, the plot of the second volume is indeed a bit messy, the rhythm also has some problems, and the foreshadowing is a bit blunt, but it is a good attempt. The third volume has stabilized, and I feel very comfortable so far. The rhythm is as smooth as gurgling water, and it is slow and not as stiff as before. It is a masterpiece that does not hide its flaws. I look forward to the follow-up development~

Bai Bi is slightly flawless. Although he can't stand it at first sight when he returns to his male identity, the priest's personality is also very charming. It's not that bad and his character change is quite good, but the pace is a bit slow. What should the two families do if all four books are discontinued? It's been about half a year😅Most of Magical Girl is gone, The Water Saint is almost finished, Merlin has just been released, and the latest one is gone without even acting. Do you like eunuchs?

The plot is very tactful. Judging from the current situation, the first twenty or thirty chapters are the transition to the identity change of the male protagonist, and the following dozens of chapters are a very long main line of killing the boss. This section in particular is very beautiful and highly recommended. The author seems to update every morning [eating melon]. Sometimes it is a little late, and I will be impatient if I can't wait [punch out]

The writing style is very good, and it can be said to be at the level of Kuai Kuai. The pace is relatively slow, and I don't think this pace can retain people in this area. It took a long time to lay the groundwork for the plot and the protagonist's personality, which slowed down the pace. There are still some issues that we won't discuss. No matter how good you are, go for it!

It's okay, great. I won't make any mistakes later on. I should still have 9 or more points. Now it's 900 to remind me. Let's see if we can break through to 3000 in the future. Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง No, I want to turn myself into a super long comment, so I just want to talk nonsense like this, you don't need to read it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, don't open it, you still opened it, right? (๑> <๑) Well, then I wish you happiness today, tomorrow, and every day in the future (✪▽✪Come on!

The plot progress is reasonable, the content is rich and interesting without a sense of fragmentation, the logic is clear, and the complex psychology and multiple identities of the protagonist are described in detail. I hope the author can do it faster. [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

Let's be honest: I don't think there's anything wrong with this book, I just hit some personal points and want to complain. You can just read it for fun. When I was searching for books on the home page, I found this book that I had added to the bookshelf before but hadn't had a chance to read. I thought it was okay and clicked on it. I have to say that the author's portrayal of the scenes and character descriptions are very good, and the handling of details and the foreshadowing are also good. However, I personally (purely personal) still like to watch two heroines with higher sugar content, more exciting plots, and the main characters have brains. Of course, I'm not saying that the author's book has these problems, but I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw that the protagonist has pure blood of the Water Saint and then has to have the contradictory identity of "Succubus". In the second chapter, I also write about a series of things that happened between the protagonist and the Wind Saint. I think there is no problem in describing the Wind Saint to set off the protagonist. However, I feel that most of the text in the second chapter is still describing people other than the protagonist, which feels like it is out of the main line. And what happened between the Lady of the Wind and her Holy Nun (I won't go into details here to avoid spoilers) made me personally feel bad. There is no problem with the author's writing ideas, but when I saw this paragraph, I personally felt that "acting a betrayal is the only way out", which made me, a pure sugar warrior, "cry" a little. I haven't been reading the story about two female protagonists for a long time, only about 700 hours, so in my humble opinion, everyone can enjoy watching it. I accept all your opinions on this paragraph, because this is my personal opinion, but if you have any crazy thoughts, please stay away [smile] Finally, I would like to praise the author for how well written the article is. [Like] I hope there will be more plot in the post [Sending my heart]

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If you want to watch some easy and simple transformation, you can give up. If you want to watch a pull-off drama with a long timeline, you can watch it. The author's writing is good. Personally, I can sum it up in four words: the plot of the second game. There are two main points: He has a great world view and likes to tell you about the world setting in various places. He gives you two out of five sentences in a history lesson. There are many characters, and every once in a while a new character will appear and tell you her story.

It's really good-looking. I thought it was Weibai at the beginning of the article, but after reading it, I found out that it was Chongbai (spoiler, the Ice Saint and the Water Saint have a baby). Overall, it's very good. I have a few suggestions. The plot is indeed a bit slow. I also want to ask where the plot of the Water Saint's baby will appear later [shy]

The psychology and plot characterization are undoubtedly top-notch, and the characters and worldview are also very creative, which is awesome! ! !