My Infinite Cellular Clones

The setting is very good and complete. There is nothing wrong with the world view, background and development. It's a good source of food. Personally, I think the only and biggest improvement is not to explain so much, it's too verbose! The setting should be constantly unfolding in the plot, rather than being shoved at the reader all at once. The core of the novel is the story rather than the setting. This problem not only exists in the description of the training system, the protagonist's abilities, and the world background, but also exists in the story, dialogue, and psychology of the supporting characters. To put it bluntly, it is enough to mention a supporting character's abilities and past history in a few sentences. There is no need to explain it, and there is no need to explain it repeatedly. Otherwise, tell a story and show your abilities, traits, and settings in the story. Rather than approaching a narrator's statement.

The imagination is okay, the plot is quite attractive, but the analysis and description in the middle are too detailed. The name setting of Jinli involves the existing setting. The author intends to re-explain it but there is no specific new explanation. The setting transition is not smooth and unclear. On the whole, it is food and grass, which can be seen.

It looks good. One person is a group, one person is a country, and one person is a civilization. When encountering difficulties, he is unresolved and lets the protagonist develop in the direction of the insect swarm.

Highly recommended, five-star praise

It's pretty good-looking and can be set up too.

The writing is wonderful, and the three views are also to my liking. Come on

Yes, the setting is indeed novel, and the plot also gradually advances the protagonist's decisive killing, which is good to watch 🙂

It's still very interesting 🍉🙂🙂