Ask God? Cultivation? Practicing martial arts?
In this world where demons sit high in the clouds and humans are reduced to humans and animals. Where is the way out for mankind!
Humans once prayed to gods, but they did not know that gods and demons were one. Human beings set foot on the Immortal Road again, only to find that it is just the same old path that gods and demons once walked. At the end of the Immortal Road are countless ferocious gods and demons. Human beings continue to search for martial arts, but they are stuck in the wrong path and cannot extricate themselves. The saint in martial arts is even worse than a weak demon.
Zhao Yuan opened his eyes from within the living beings and looked at the unrivaled demon that enveloped the world. Create a true martial art, conquer the world, lead the human race to suppress gods and demons and stabilize the world.
He also discovered that the endless heavens in the outside world were all owned by gods and demons. Zhao Yuan once again led the human race to step out of the heavens to conquer the gods and demons from all walks of life, and finally pushed the human race to the top of the universe!
Reader comments
The setting is very good and complete.
There is nothing wrong with the world view, background and development. It's a good source of food.
Personally, I think the only and biggest improvement is not to explain so much, it's too verbose! The setting should be constantly unfolding in the plot, rather than being shoved at the reader all at once. The core of the novel is the story rather than the setting.
This problem not only exists in the description of the training system, the protagonist's abilities, and the world background, but also exists in the story, dialogue, and psychology of the supporting characters. To put it bluntly, it is enough to mention a supporting character's abilities and past history in a few sentences. There is no need to explain it, and there is no need to explain it repeatedly.
Otherwise, tell a story and show your abilities, traits, and settings in the story. Rather than approaching a narrator's statement.
The imagination is okay, the plot is quite attractive, but the analysis and description in the middle are too detailed. The name setting of Jinli involves the existing setting. The author intends to re-explain it but there is no specific new explanation. The setting transition is not smooth and unclear. On the whole, it is food and grass, which can be seen.
It looks good. One person is a group, one person is a country, and one person is a civilization. When encountering difficulties, he is unresolved and lets the protagonist develop in the direction of the insect swarm.
It's still very interesting [eat melon][smile][smile]
It's pretty good-looking and can be set up too.
Highly recommended, five-star praise
The writing is wonderful, and the three views are also to my liking. Come on
Yes, the setting is indeed novel, and the plot also gradually advances the protagonist's decisive killing, which is good to watch [smile]
The setting is very good and complete. There is nothing wrong with the world view, background and development. It's a good source of food. Personally, I think the only and biggest improvement is not to explain so much, it's too verbose! The setting should be constantly unfolding in the plot, rather than being shoved at the reader all at once. The core of the novel is the story rather than the setting. This problem not only exists in the description of the training system, the protagonist's abilities, and the world background, but also exists in the story, dialogue, and psychology of the supporting characters. To put it bluntly, it is enough to mention a supporting character's abilities and past history in a few sentences. There is no need to explain it, and there is no need to explain it repeatedly. Otherwise, tell a story and show your abilities, traits, and settings in the story. Rather than approaching a narrator's statement.
The imagination is okay, the plot is quite attractive, but the analysis and description in the middle are too detailed. The name setting of Jinli involves the existing setting. The author intends to re-explain it but there is no specific new explanation. The setting transition is not smooth and unclear. On the whole, it is food and grass, which can be seen.
It looks good. One person is a group, one person is a country, and one person is a civilization. When encountering difficulties, he is unresolved and lets the protagonist develop in the direction of the insect swarm.
It's still very interesting [eat melon][smile][smile]
It's pretty good-looking and can be set up too.
Highly recommended, five-star praise
The writing is wonderful, and the three views are also to my liking. Come on
Yes, the setting is indeed novel, and the plot also gradually advances the protagonist's decisive killing, which is good to watch [smile]