[Lots of sweetness, little angst + she pursues him + he ends up with them all + everyone is troubled + yandere cultivation + possessive love + no System, no rebirth]
An older senior student, a down-on-her-luck idol, a gloomy girl, a depressed girl with a volatile streak...
Jiang Yuan’s life had nearly been swallowed up by their heavy, twisted love.
After finally escaping, he wanted to find out what a normal relationship was really like.
So he sought out a tragic heroine with thick bangs and glasses, who was bullied, had an unhappy family, and no friends. In truth, she was fair-skinned, beautiful, and long-legged: a hidden gem with incredible potential.
He would save her and become her whole world.
But normal love had never even begun before he realized she was just as troubled as the others.
And just then, the heroines from before started showing up at his door one after another...
How can he get out of this mess?
After reading it carefully, the character Su Lingyin was written so well. I was thinking that if it were a single female protagonist to save the series, it would be difficult even if the rhythm in the early stage was not popular. Let's stop here and talk about the problems of this book first. First of all, the character Lin Ruomeng appeared too quickly. We should first write more about the daily life and emotional development of Su Lingyin. She fell in love with the male protagonist in just two days, and then the male protagonist turned around and fell in love with Su Lingyin. It is really too scumbag. The character design is also not good. Well, I think even those who like to watch harems will have a stomach ache after watching it, and the author first introduced other female protagonists into the main plot through memories. Of course, there is no problem with this, but the same problem is that the pace is too fast. There are only a few chapters, so there is no need to rush to write a book. There are only so many chapters at the moment and I can only comment on this, so my evaluation of this book is that the first fourteen chapters are excellent and you will experience them later. It is recommended to re-open a book
The boutique front tastes great 666, 5 stars for sliding. Bad Equator Stone, kids, run!
Come on, author, you must persevere! But please don't stop reading. This novel is really well-written and to my liking. If it really stops, well, I will have no choice but to take action.
Tomato yandere area The divine author's few pen and ink The purity is really high 666 is wrong
The old man who has just read a thousand books is here (I made a breakthrough after reading this book 😳) 🤔 It's really well written and of high quality. I finally found a good one in 🍅 😄 (There were a lot of good articles in the past, but Shen He's equipment is so good recently, and he shows up in seconds). If you only like the subject of yandere, the writing is good, the plot is not procrastinating, the emotions are described to the stomach, and the characters are vivid (it really smells like essay correction, I am convinced) It is worth reading (by the way, this is a reminder) It is the emotional dispute between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the gradual "redemption (?)" Between the emotionally pathological and twisted male protagonist and the female protagonist who lacks love and attention. Those who want to see a brainless female protagonist can give it a try. "To be honest, sometimes I feel like I am eating rice when it comes to female protagonists who suddenly become sick." [Read this without reading the book review If you don't like the result or feel it's poisonous, if you get two stars, the two of you won't be able to watch you stay healthy and at home in the sky 😄] After reading the comments from other book friends, I found that the pace is indeed too fast, and the appearance does not need to be too fast. I also borrowed the comments from book friends. Really, the character Su Lingyin, as a permanent character, should be okay, almost a redemption (?) You can count it as a mutual redemption of morbid and morbid satisfaction (?) But the characters appeared too fast. There seem to be only more than 50 pictures so far, and there have been three female protagonists (not saying anything). In your current chapter, you can have more daily life, otherwise the three yandere heroines (?) Will come out and be in the Shura field or something (5.3 May be modified)
Although I haven't read novels for a long time and am still a novice, I feel pretty good, but I still need to improve. Come on.
Hey, why can't I listen to this kind of yandere article? It feels quite strange that the male protagonist is in a relationship but has someone else in mind. Then maybe I should write a story with a single female protagonist. It feels quite strange to see multiple female protagonists like this.
It was really enjoyable to watch. The only thing that didn't suit me was that what I wanted was pure love.
Come on, author!
I was so suffocated when I read it, it's a great book!