Variety Movie: Starting from the Name

It's quite interesting to look at it from another angle. There are not many good people in this drama. Men can be cheated and women can be cheated. Different spaces should also play a role. There are too few scenes.

Okay, very nice. There was a little bit of poison at the beginning, Zhao Dehan's wife knew that Zhao Dehan was not her husband, but later on he got a succubus patch. This little poison can be considered as a remedy.

In name, it looks pretty good.

The first article about recruiting girls is neat and tidy, but the central protagonist is basically mentioned in one stroke. It mainly describes the plot of the characters in the film and television drama, which doesn't seem to be exciting. The second part, Qing Yu Nian, has been written very well so far. It can flirt with girls, make money, and has brotherly love. I feel that the second part is really well written. The author should not abandon the protagonist again and only write about characters in film and television dramas. Let the protagonist be more involved and the plot more exciting. I clicked on the reminder today and watched three free ads. Come on, author.

It's wonderful, I'm very satisfied with the bell, and the subsequent plot is very reasonable.

The writing is fluent, and you don't feel tired when reading. The writing is pleasant and the ink is not stained.

Five stars are for conspicuousness The memory of the original owner of the soul-transporting belt can still be discovered. The key is to admit that in the urban world! If the results are too good, they will be poisoned at the beginning!

Very much to my liking. Come on, plow the land. You have cultivated only a few dozen acres of thousands of acres of land. The task is heavy, Zhao Dehan

The writing is so-so, but it's fun to read

Good, good, good, good

As long as the monkey is punished, we will be good friends

Author, there is a custom in my family that we always like to send some souvenirs to the author. We don't have time to read other authors. After reading your work, we think it is very good. So give me your address and I will send you something. Be sure to accept it [laughter]

The angle is good and feels comfortable

The idea is clear and the overall framework and character settings are quite novel. It's just a good fantasy that makes you write about officialdom. The rules of officialdom are not familiar, so you can make a compromise and write it into an urban romance. I'll give it four stars for the time being. It's better than those without logic. Come on, don't jump ahead. If it collapses, I'll give it two stars. Let's start the third paragraph. The first paragraph is okay, but I won't comment on the second paragraph.

In fact, Zhao Dehan should accept Zhong Xiaoai

Hahahahahahaha

Okay okay. Very possible

Very beautifully written.

Very, very good, very good

Good, good, good

Good work, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's very good, but the harem text is a bit lacking [scrolls]

My favorite fanfic, the plot is deep, Qi Tongwei is a man, I hope he can get out of the quagmire

Still quite innovative

After reading it, I felt it was okay. It was really cool to kill Hou Liangping, but Qi Tongwei was killed by a knife again. It's a pity that Zhao Dehan is the protagonist, otherwise he really didn't want Qi Tongwei to be killed, and the rest is basically the original work (except for the ending)

It's quite interesting, you can take a look.

Know how to take advantage of the situation, Dafeng Factory handled it so well, the author insists on writing

The writing was enjoyable, but it lacked some common sense within the system.

The writing is good, the thinking is clear, and the word count is impeccable.

A really refreshing article, worth reading~~~