The Simulation Is Over, the Goddesses Formed a Group to Block My Door

The writing is very good, much better than those that only simulate the first five and ten chapters, and the writing is very immersive. Among the more than 100 types of simulation novels I have read, you are the best [Like]

It's very interesting to watch. It can be seen that the author has written something of his own. Especially the protagonist's performance to the end for his senior sister is really interesting. In my opinion, there is no turning back from the moment the protagonist massacres the city. No one will believe a guy who can massacre the city. No matter how many grievances there are, it is not that Everyone can think of it, so the protagonist can only go one way to the end. The comment section said that the protagonist is mute. My evaluation is that I have never been in the protagonist's environment. From the senior sister, it can be seen that the emotional scenes are not good enough (I feel it is not as good as Bai Xiaosheng). Keep up the good work and look forward to the second simulation.

This is my first time simulating the whole process of playing the protagonist, The Riddler. The first half is okay, but the later part is very serious, and there is also an amnesia plot (just for explanation), so please proceed with caution if you mind. Overall, the beginning is quite good, but there are some unnecessary plots (in my opinion). The first simulation will have a perspective on the protagonist's younger brother (to be honest, I feel that this younger brother is also dispensable. I personally don't like it. It seems to exist to make the protagonist do more wrong things. The key is that the protagonist has only met him once and has a very strong feeling for him) I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I can't stand it any longer. If you are used to watching Immortal Lord or protagonists who speak straightforwardly and clearly, then I suggest you get vaccinated first. [Eat melon]

Okay, okay, this is a depressing, slow-burning novel. It's so fucking tear-jerking. It has so much stamina. It feels like a group portrait. The entanglement and entanglement of everyone is so enjoyable to read. This is the first simulation, what do you want to do? However, it was really fun to watch, and the sense of immersion is so strong. Don't stop updating the author~ I will find you if you stop updating, I will kill you

The male protagonist is a "mute". As a child, I asked him why he slaughtered more than 300 people in the village? The protagonist has no mouth, and Erya hates the protagonist for slaughtering the village, but without the protagonist at the beginning, their entire village would have been dead. Brother, if you feel you can still accept it after what I said, then you can come in and take a look [OK] Later, my brother lost his memory, and Tongzi disappeared. Hahahahahahahaha

The book is a good book, with smooth plot and three-dimensional characters. The knife is also a sharp knife, and you cannot recover from one blow. That's it... Can the author send you his address? I want to send you some specialties. Don't get me wrong. They are edible specialties, not specialties like blades.

Why is the score so low? It has even reached 700,000 words. I think there is nothing wrong with it. The first copy seems to be a little confusing. Some book friends think that the realm system is very unreasonable. I used to think so too. This may be a commonality among book friends whose first book is a mortal's biography of immortality or other traditional cultivation of immortality. The system of immortality has long been ingrained in novels with more than 10 million words. As far as I am concerned. The Legend of Immortality from the Human World to the Immortal Realm is 14 million words and I have finished it. I have also finished Wangyu's other two books, Ferris Sky Chronicles and The Gate of Mysterious Realm. I am also reading The Dream Master. But with all due respect, this is a romance novel. Immortality cultivation is just the background. When reading a fairy tale novel, you think about whether the logic, realm system, and world view are reasonable. This is normal, but in romance novels, the portrayal of the emotional inner world of the characters, the relationship between the characters, and whether the plot can break the rules and be attractive are what we should read. Half a year ago, there was a book called The Female Sword Immortal Breaks the World to Find Me. It was also a simulation novel. At that time, many book friends felt that the realm system in the first plot collapsed. I was one of them at the time. I hope more people can realize that this is a love novel. Do not read this book with the world view of a fairy tale. The love, hatred and hatred of the characters are the key. I just looked through other comments. Many book friends think that the plot contains too many unnecessary and strong sensational plots. I can't comment on the first simulation because I watched it a month ago and I have almost forgotten the details. But for the second simulation, I dare say that the overall plot logic of the story background is no problem. For me, who only looks at pull and logic, I give it a full score of 9 points. It's just that I have some doubts about the plot where the witch wakes up at the wedding. The protagonist does not remember this. But doesn't Daianna's mother know about this? Shouldn't he remind his husband in advance? Maybe there are many places in this book that cannot stand up to scrutiny (I would like to add here that I have not read every Zhang Ping book. The author has something to say and I am not clear about it. Maybe the author has added plot logic but I have not read it), but you cannot deny the excitement of this book. Everyone has different views on novels. Maybe I will see more exciting simulation novels in the future. I feel that this book is nothing more than that. But for me now, this book is already well written.

Let's talk about the conclusion first. If you want to read enjoyable articles, go ahead. If you want to taste sad articles, read them carefully. I only watched the first simulation because I like cultivating immortals and it's very sad. The author really knows how to write about making people cry. I felt that it was too boring to read a cool article. It was so good that it felt unreal. This article made me so sad that I wanted to quit several times but came back again. No. The M attribute exploded, but I wanted to know how wronged the male protagonist could be. I must not take the role of myself, I can only watch it from the perspective of a bystander. The last scene where the Red Dust Sword chopped down countless immortals, to be honest, was really satisfying, and I didn't think there was any violation. I also feel that the writing is good, but the plot is very controversial. I personally feel that it can make sense if the previous details are linked.

The book itself is actually good. Although it has a few minor flaws, it has basically been rounded out in the later stages. The second simulation is much better than the first one. Also, part of the emotional line between the senior sister and Xiaoyu is too tangerine. Although I know the author didn't mean it that way, but look at it. It looks weird. The knotted wings are the most poisonous point. One very important point is that the cover makes people have no desire to click on it. If I didn't really know what to read, I would never click on it in my life. Also, the title of the book is a bit too ordinary, but it is much better than the cover. Come on, author, try to be as less toxic as possible. The story itself is actually very exciting, and the second simulated male 2 is actually well-characterized, but the position is too awkward, and he and the male protagonist are half love rivals. Even the previous relationship with the female protagonist was more real, but it can be seen that he is a good person, and it is neither disliked nor liked by readers.

I feel like the author could expand the first paragraph of the simulation in detail into a separate book [Flying Kiss]. The content and depth are still very interesting. It is much more comfortable than other brainless novels I have read, especially the emotional creation of the characters. The characters can feel more distinctive, that is, the descriptions are more independent. You know, and the author has updated it very quickly. The update is not enough. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] (The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize me if you don't like it) Thank you. Anyway, I support the author greatly, I still want to read it! [Adoration]

I read it very quickly, maybe not even thirty minutes, but it was still chapter sixty or seventy. Like. I saw a comment in the comment area saying that stage plays should not have too many supporting characters, but I don't understand. "There is no road in this world. When there are more people walking, it becomes a road." Every character has flesh and blood, so why can't it be said to be a group photo essay? It cannot be said that everyone's descriptions are for the protagonist, but I can say that they are for the readers. As long as you like it, as long as you are happy with it, that's fine with me. (Never mind the logic; I give five stars to [shy][making faces]) I bought some beans and watched them for an hour

It's so good-looking, it's not boring at all, it's very good-looking, the plot has ups and downs, and the real emotions make it easier for people to get involved. After reading this book, I felt that other books I read were a bit boring. Of course, after reading this book, I want to see the comparison A more relaxing book, it feels similar to reading this book. Those with strong empathy can read it, but those with weak empathy feel no need to read it. This type of reincarnation plus simulation is very well written, because simulation and reincarnation are different. Simulation is mainly to simulate something. A different life, or a simulation of a plot that will happen in the future, and reincarnation is about a person being reborn from one place to another to start a new life, but his book can combine reincarnation and simulation, simulating another life, and then reincarnation.

I give five stars for the writing style. Whether it is scene description or psychological description, it is very vivid and vivid. The pace is relatively slow. If you only read the first fifty chapters, "I don't feel it" is my evaluation. But if you look at the back, the plot is very coherent and fascinating. The foreshadowing in the front is basically taken care of repeatedly in the back. At the beginning, I thought there were no highlights. At one time, I thought "Does a simulation need to be so long?" Of course, there are also shortcomings. The portrayal of the female lead is not that profound, or there is a lack of detailed description. But there are still flaws.

Not bad, the simulation is long. Those who like immersive simulation are in luck, how can I put it? It's a bit poisonous. Even if four geniuses come out of a small mortal village, I don't know what to say. The couple is actually a double supreme. I go, they are so powerful. Some people are a little bit poisonous. I only watched the first simulation. I think he and his main simulation are right in the first simulation. It's almost like the heroine (I'm talking about the first heroine in this kind of novels, most of which have multiple women). There's no emotional foreshadowing. I think it's not as good as Hu Zi (the protagonist's friend). In short, it's okay, not bad. You can listen to it when playing games. I suggest you give up your brain.

It's so beautiful. Every simulation is flesh-and-blood. Unlike other simulators, it's just like playing a game. I can't get involved at all. It's like eating pre-made dishes. But this book is different. It's like a state banquet! !

Although some parts of the plot are unreasonable and not too detailed, there are many poisonous points compared to other plots. As long as you don't think too much about the details, this is a good novel [like]

I think Lin Miaoshan's portrayal and behavioral description are good. The two concepts of Lao Fang and Lin Miaoshan are not big problems. Lin Miaoshan liked Lao Fang in high school. She pursued him in college but Lao Fang did not dare because of her low self-esteem. After graduation, she also tried hard to match her. Then there was a simulation system that sent her consciousness to other worlds for simulation (except for the first simulation, there was no memory before the simulation). At the end of the simulation, the concepts of other worlds and the original concepts were blended or covered. Otherwise, she should be more convinced of monogamy, otherwise she would not have a second wife later. Lin Miaoshan was more conservative. Lao Fang told Lin Miaoshan that he wanted to see Lao Fang have a girlfriend when he came back, which was like asking her to be a mistress. This impact on his concept made her feel disappointed and disgusted. Lin Miaoshan's ending: 1. Alone, 2. Entering the post-official position. After reading these chapters of hers, I feel that the ending is more suitable for her, unless Lin Miaoshan likes Lao Fang very, very, very much (no, she does like it very much). Well, that's all bullshit. I forgot that Lin Miaoshan was the Erya whom I simulated for the first time. [Cover face]

How should I put it? I looked at some of them, but I didn't expect that this simulation was a simulation of the soul in person, without leaving the body, and it was a new theme. The author's writing style is good, and the writing looks comfortable. Emotionally speaking, emmm, I can only say that the writing style is very good, so it is very sad. It was so sad that I didn't dare to read it carefully after reading the introduction and mentally preparing myself. At first, I thought that the protagonist was still in the original world and did not use the system to deliberately achieve the illusion of great luck. There was only a system panel simulation. Unexpectedly, the system panel was interspersed with the protagonist's life. It was very novel. I guess the panel was to reduce waste of time and promote the development of the main line. I went to find the reward part only to find that the protagonist had not finished eating the instant noodles. Hahaha, I really didn't expect that there would be rewards for cultivation. In the future, the spiritual energy will be revived and it will directly affect the entire ancestors of the earth. Hahaha. My favorite sentence is that as long as the opponent does not give priority to releasing nuclear bombs, we will not give priority to Fang Shijie. Hahahaha. It's so fun for the protagonist to make a joke on himself. The system is really stupid and secretly turns off the indifference switch to break the defense. Hahahaha. The writing is really good, but I don't dare to watch it completely. But if it is a real person who travels through time, it would be really good to experience life this time, and I can predict the future world. But people are old and can't watch so many sad dramas. As the system said, it is a refreshing article, but the protagonist's voice is too loud, and we burst into tears. I slipped away, only secretly leaving a five-star review without reading it, in order to secretly trick other people into killing it, and leave a review, hehehehe.

Five stars, respect for the writing. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but the flaws are not outweighed. Anyway, in terms of perception, I think it's okay. I'm also looking forward to the plot that will happen next. The characters are also very vivid and the plot is novel. Good luck, author! (Although the first simulation is relatively long, it is the first time after all, and everything is difficult at the beginning)

Okay, okay, it's well written. I feel like this simulation can be read as a new book, although I don't know why the protagonist has such deep feelings for his younger brother. According to the timeline, the protagonist just returned to the village to see his younger brother at that time. Is it because of guilt towards my parents or something else? The writing is very good, I hope Bai Xiaosheng can reveal the truth in the end. In this way I think there will be a small sublimation I also felt that there were a bit too many chapters about the main character's younger brother. It feels like a broken feeling

How should I put it? I have just finished reading the second simulation. My evaluation is that the first simulation was very good. Although it has a few minor flaws, it is already very good compared to other novels. But my evaluation of the second simulation is that you can skip it directly [smile]

I think the author should have more than 70 chapters, for a small story point, it should be slow-paced, which is pretty good. Slow work yields fine work (but I want to ask, after the male protagonist was hit by luck in the first or second chapter, where is his main world, or does he travel to another world after finishing this world?)

I think that since the author wants to write a simulation novel, the plot should not be delayed. When I read it now, I have updated about 100 chapters, but more than half of the plot is about the first simulation. I admit that the author's writing style is good, and some plot twists are indeed enough to arouse people's interest, and the unclear links that seem to be explained clearly and still secretly want me to know the follow-up. But also because of this, it made me feel that the plot was even more lengthy. I don't think many people have a lot of free time to read novels. Besides, if you write every simulation in such detail, how much work will it be? It's not like I just wrote a few simulations and then just finished it. Then there are high requirements for the author's own update efficiency. . . I even doubt that the end of the plot will directly create a ninja alliance for me, right? [Hang face] (After thinking about it for a long time, I finally decided to give it a four-star rating. What I said above are all what I want to say after reading nearly half of the content. It's not that I want to complain, but I really don't have much personal time. Reading novels is just to kill time, not to let it dominate my time.)

Objectively speaking, I can still give it an 8. The first copy is very well written. The text is very rich and at the same time delicate, including literary quality and characterization of the characters. The first copy is not just about the heroine, but more like a group portrait. To be honest, I give it a solid rating. It made me feel one ten thousandth of the pain that the male protagonist went through, and I couldn't help crying. It's really great. The second copy is also very well written. The text is softer but equally heavy. The story is more detailed and the plot arrangement is more reasonable. The three female protagonists are all very well portrayed. Later, there is a little more improvement in the agility of each female protagonist. The male protagonist keeps making mistakes, which makes me feel the entanglement and regret of every choice. To be honest, it is top-notch. The follow-up processing at the end of each copy is very good and gives me a refreshing feeling. The details of this processing have not appeared in other simulation articles. Objectively it is great. Subjectively, I don't really like the heroine who has been added to reality for the second time. I feel that the character is not full enough and there is no description to slow down the progress. (Don't give up reading this novel just because of this subjectivity. It's really worth reading. Simulation writing is a very high mountain. And the subjectivity I'm talking about only accounts for about 5%. If you don't like it, just skip it.)

I jumped to read it, I jumped directly to Chapter 102, and I was watching the section about the witch. I just watched it for a while, and it was a poisonous point. The sentence "good boy" when recruiting knights was directly like the protagonist crying. Why didn't he cry after his mother died, what happened, and he didn't cry at all. Just the sentence "good boy sheds tears" was forced to be sensational. It really felt like oh, it made me feel uncomfortable. I came here to comment. The writing style is still a little immature. I need to understand what the readers really need. Where is the excitement and sensational point? Come on. I can only say that after all, the software on Tomato Free can find such a theme. It is quite novel. I have already updated all the simulations that I could see before, and the author does not update this type of stuff anymore, so this book is very rare.

Yes, it is quite prominent among simulation articles. There have been a lot of suppressed articles on Tomato recently. It was very interesting to see this suddenly. I watched a simulation at once and haven't updated it since. But from the daily connection between the simulation and the protagonist himself, it feels very good. Come on.

After a brief look at the simulation plot, it's good. The chapters are solid and not superficial. I hope to write more plots in the future about the heroine's arrival in the city. I can also write about the high martial arts field in the city where the blue star's spiritual energy revives. I've seen many similar pure simulations. The author is of a good level, and the writing from the perspective of the male protagonist has personality. Many simulations of cultivating immortals have been interrupted a lot. Maybe there are too many characters, the simulations are not well connected with reality, or maybe the male cultivators have grown too chaotically. Looking forward to the author's follow-up That's great. Many readers said that the story in the first chapter was a bit poor. Don't worry about the Sims and the real world. The work is very integrated. Xiu Xian west Huan's spiritual energy is revived. It's just that giving the male protagonist this position was a bit high at the beginning. Realistically, I am worried that it will collapse later. How do you change the position of the male protagonist? Otherwise you will be completely similar to S. H. I. E. L. D. The male protagonist trains a few people to organize a real-life fight against international disputes, otherwise it would be too chaotic if the male protagonist is in a high position.

After watching it, I feel good and the plot is very interesting. That's right, author, your simulation time is long, but if you don't update it more, people will change books as soon as they stop reading it. You update a few chapters a day, but it's not enough. No one even watched it. Update it quickly, what are you waiting for? One simulation is updated every day. Upload a few hundred chapters first.

This refreshing article is like a sudden drizzle that moistens the dry land. The words of this novel flow smoothly into my heart. Every page exudes a fresh breath and profound connotation. It is like a beautiful melody, which makes me feel unprecedented pleasure and satisfaction during the reading process. (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و✧*｡

Book reviews don't mean everything, you'll know after reading it. I have read two volumes. The first volume was very touching and made me cry at one point. The second volume is okay, but it is too long, which affects the viewing experience. Although this book is not as good as "Life Simulation, a Lifetime Regret for the Female Sword Fairy" that I read before, it can be regarded as a good simulation work. ̋(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑) I hope the author will insist on updating, and I will insist on seeing the ending.