Protagonist: Zhou Ye
[Refreshing writing + invincible writing + decisive killing + fast pace]
"Brother Zhou, can you really not cultivate immortality without spiritual roots?"
"This... Should be fine!"
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"Boy, no matter how high your martial arts skills are, you are still a mortal, just an ant!"
"Are you sure?"
Zhou Ye traveled through time and became a 12-year-old boy without a father or mother. Relying on the benefits of time travel: the comprehension bonus, he cultivated to the martial arts realm in five years. But when he first stepped into Jianghu, he found that this was a world of immortal cultivation, and he had no spiritual roots. But fortunately, the true energy of martial arts can be transformed into true essence, and then it can be condensed into elixir, and the Tianling Root can be born.
So it took Zhou Ye one month to condense the liquid into elixir, and he was promoted to the elixir-forming stage.
Unexpectedly, as soon as he stepped into the world of martial arts, he would directly enter the world of immortality.
Reader comments
The subject matter is good, the plot is smooth, and the style of writing is cool ~ I don't use any brainless names like Ye Lin and Su Mofan, which is great: I just don't know where the protagonist comes from so much sentimentality ~ The young man has a helpless smile and keeps saying it, obviously he can do it, but he is not confident and lacks masculinity [smirk] [sneer smile]
This should be a novel with a score of 9.3 Or above! The writing is smooth and the description of the scene makes people feel comfortable. At least it makes people feel that it is not written by a fourteen-year-old or fifteen-year-old boy with blunt and forced details. I hope the author can write more carefully and better later.
The first part feels pretty good, and I hope the later ones will be more exciting. It's so difficult to find a novel that I can read. Either the protagonist is a eunuch, or there are a group of wives and concubines. I like the kind of heroine who meets many times and overcomes difficulties and develops feelings along the way. Of course, there can't be too many heroines, four or five are enough [shy]
Is Liu the heroine? It should be a single heroine. Don't really want to have a harem
It's nice to read. I like the setting of this book.
It's really well written, a bit like an ancient novel. They don't explain their martial arts skills as soon as they come out, and then they slowly advance through the ranks.
Entering Taoism through martial arts, the subject matter is pretty good, so far I think it's OK, there's nothing sinister about it. Don't be too harsh on small details
It's very interesting, the setting is OK, the plot is compact, and there is no sense of procrastination. It is a very interesting book about cultivating immortals. I hope it will be updated soon! [Please update more]
The writing is smooth, the scene descriptions and transitions are natural, the character dynamics and psychological descriptions are vivid, natural and interesting, and there is no rigid plot between the lines. [Bookshelf plus one]
The subject matter is good, the plot is smooth, and the style of writing is cool ~ I don't use any brainless names like Ye Lin and Su Mofan, which is great: I just don't know where the protagonist comes from so much sentimentality ~ The young man has a helpless smile and keeps saying it, obviously he can do it, but he is not confident and lacks masculinity [smirk] [sneer smile]
This should be a novel with a score of 9.3 Or above! The writing is smooth and the description of the scene makes people feel comfortable. At least it makes people feel that it is not written by a fourteen-year-old or fifteen-year-old boy with blunt and forced details. I hope the author can write more carefully and better later.
The first part feels pretty good, and I hope the later ones will be more exciting. It's so difficult to find a novel that I can read. Either the protagonist is a eunuch, or there are a group of wives and concubines. I like the kind of heroine who meets many times and overcomes difficulties and develops feelings along the way. Of course, there can't be too many heroines, four or five are enough [shy]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Is Liu the heroine? It should be a single heroine. Don't really want to have a harem
It's nice to read. I like the setting of this book.
It's really well written, a bit like an ancient novel. They don't explain their martial arts skills as soon as they come out, and then they slowly advance through the ranks.
Entering Taoism through martial arts, the subject matter is pretty good, so far I think it's OK, there's nothing sinister about it. Don't be too harsh on small details
It's very interesting, the setting is OK, the plot is compact, and there is no sense of procrastination. It is a very interesting book about cultivating immortals. I hope it will be updated soon! [Please update more] The writing is smooth, the scene descriptions and transitions are natural, the character dynamics and psychological descriptions are vivid, natural and interesting, and there is no rigid plot between the lines. [Bookshelf plus one]
Okay, let's do it together
Brilliant, 100 points!
A good book