A Martial Dao Master from the Start, Yet I Have a Heavenly Spiritual Root

The subject matter is good, the plot is smooth, and the style of writing is cool ~ I don't use any brainless names like Ye Lin and Su Mofan, which is great: I just don't know where the protagonist comes from so much sentimentality ~ The young man has a helpless smile and keeps saying it, obviously he can do it, but he is not confident and lacks masculinity [smirk] [sneer smile]

This should be a novel with a score of 9.3 Or above! The writing is smooth and the description of the scene makes people feel comfortable. At least it makes people feel that it is not written by a fourteen-year-old or fifteen-year-old boy with blunt and forced details. I hope the author can write more carefully and better later.

The first part feels pretty good, and I hope the later ones will be more exciting. It's so difficult to find a novel that I can read. Either the protagonist is a eunuch, or there are a group of wives and concubines. I like the kind of heroine who meets many times and overcomes difficulties and develops feelings along the way. Of course, there can't be too many heroines, four or five are enough [shy]

It's really well written, a bit like an ancient novel. They don't explain their martial arts skills as soon as they come out, and then they slowly advance through the ranks.

Is Liu the heroine? It should be a single heroine. Don't really want to have a harem

It's nice to read. I like the setting of this book.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's very interesting, the setting is OK, the plot is compact, and there is no sense of procrastination. It is a very interesting book about cultivating immortals. I hope it will be updated soon! [Please update more] The writing is smooth, the scene descriptions and transitions are natural, the character dynamics and psychological descriptions are vivid, natural and interesting, and there is no rigid plot between the lines. [Bookshelf plus one]

Entering Taoism through martial arts, the subject matter is pretty good, so far I think it's OK, there's nothing sinister about it. Don't be too harsh on small details

Brilliant, 100 points!