[Pirates + cool writing + ups and downs of the plot + passion + ship-following + charity rewards + jokes + sensationalism (if you play well)]
Su Hang traveled through the world of pirates and awakened the charity system. You can get rewards by doing good deeds.
On the day I awakened the system, the entire sea style changed!
Warring States: "This pirate Su Hang has done all the good things! He doesn't look like a pirate at all!"
Garp: "Why is it that Su Hang is obviously a pirate, but every time he does something, he slaps our navy in the face?"
Punch Mengka, kick Crowe, and roast Aaron.
After entering the Grand Line...
Go to Cigu Island to build a public hospital.
Go to Alabasta...
Lao Sha: "I am the most popular person in Alabasta."
So Su Hang built water conservancy projects in Alabasta and became a public hero of the country. "No one knows charity better than me."
War on top...
Su Hang: "Ace cannot be killed. After what I have said, who agrees? Who opposes?"
Reader comments
① It is recommended that each chapter be longer and two chapters can be combined into one.
② It is recommended to add more elements of your own. If it is well written, it will be like Bai Yueguang. If it is poorly written, no one will want to read it. (Of course, I personally don't like joining groups, and I will most likely give up. This is a purely personal opinion.)
③Can you determine the main theme? What is the goal of the protagonist? What does the protagonist want to do in the future? What is the character of the protagonist? What about the protagonist's relatives, friends or opponents? (What I can see is that the protagonist's system presence is not strong, and he should be just a tool man. What should be highlighted should be the protagonist himself, his ideas, and what kind of impact his beliefs have on the people around him and the world? There are also things like the improvement of his own strength. He is also a person who needs to grow, so you can focus on this.)
④In fact, the setting is relatively good, and it is a very attractive point (that is, I was attracted by the setting), but I did not see the advantages of this setting, or it is not very perfect (?)
Note: This is purely my personal opinion, please correct me if I am wrong. (But if it doesn't convince me, I still think I'm right.)
① It is recommended that each chapter be longer and two chapters can be combined into one. ② It is recommended to add more elements of your own. If it is well written, it will be like Bai Yueguang. If it is poorly written, no one will want to read it. (Of course, I personally don't like joining groups, and I will most likely give up. This is a purely personal opinion.) ③Can you determine the main theme? What is the goal of the protagonist? What does the protagonist want to do in the future? What is the character of the protagonist? What about the protagonist's relatives, friends or opponents? (What I can see is that the protagonist's system presence is not strong, and he should be just a tool man. What should be highlighted should be the protagonist himself, his ideas, and what kind of impact his beliefs have on the people around him and the world? There are also things like the improvement of his own strength. He is also a person who needs to grow, so you can focus on this.) ④In fact, the setting is relatively good, and it is a very attractive point (that is, I was attracted by the setting), but I did not see the advantages of this setting, or it is not very perfect (?) Note: This is purely my personal opinion, please correct me if I am wrong. (But if it doesn't convince me, I still think I'm right.)