Mobile Suit Gundam: You and I Beyond the Universe

Come on! The big brother who writes Gundam, if you give up, the bottom will rot 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

It's great. The plot is more daily. There are not many battle scenes, but a few words can illustrate the intensity of the battle. I like it very much. I feel that Carrot is a bit like an angel pilot in the Celestial Organization who has amnesia.

Give yourself a five-star shamelessly (you should love your own books, seriously). I will write a satisfying story. This book does not write about time travel or system themes, and there is no time traveler protagonist. If you don't like it, read it with caution. The author does not like to write time travel + system themes. Please also comment more. If you want to scold, please be gentle qwq...

Five stars is no longer enough for my personal praise, recognition and love for this work. The writing of words is very good, and the smoothness and depth of the plot are like being immersed in the world of this work. Thank you, the author, for writing this work with all your heart. I personally prefer Gundam SEED fan fiction. I also hope that the author will persevere and not stop updating. Thank you to the author for finishing this work. Sincerely, a regular reader.

Good writing, writing style, setting and plot are all very good. Judging from the development of the plot, the pace is okay, but the slow pace is not suitable for the needs of most readers at present. It's not the kind of refreshing novel that makes people happy with a refreshing explosion. It is not suitable for the current society where people are prone to impetuousness. It is suitable for people who have settled down to savor it carefully.

It's okay. I personally have a good sense of it, but I don't accept dual heroines very much, so I ran away. I feel that the most important thing for the author now is to decide how to write it. I will change it here and ask for opinions there. It will only explode in the end. Accumulate experience. Gundam is still relatively unpopular in China, so there is no need to care too much about the data. Just finish writing. Come on.

Not bad, but it's been a long time since I've read a book that's not about time-travelers, so I'm a little uncomfortable with it, and then there's the use of symbols in dialogues. …

The writing is okay, but the author is the type of person who pretends to be dead from time to time.

Very good, looks and feels very good. The interaction between the demon and the protagonist makes people (at least me) comfortable. Let's see how Captain Ma makes a comeback for himself later.

Is it a single heroine? It's good to write a single line about Lux [thoughts]