Warlord: I Broke Out Troops and Swept Across Japan in the Republic of China

"My gambling father, my sick mother, my broken family, and her new arrival. What I wash is not the feet, but the mud of walking in the world, the edges and misfortunes smoothed by time, the fate of cherishing her, the youthful years of great years, but she is burdened with heavy responsibilities, and she should not have to bear all this." "I still remember her watery eyes and her affectionate gaze that night. She didn't care about my car or my room, but she gave me all the tenderness in the world. At that moment, I was confused. I seemed to see the lost love again, approaching me again." "She put down the box in her hand, picked up the black hair between her lips and teeth, and tied it high. At that moment, the cool light shone on her body and also shone into my heart. At that moment, I could no longer tell whether the throbbing in my heart was because of love. Now that I think about it, it is no longer important." "Today, the bright moon is in the sky, and the beauty is full of thoughts. If I don't go there today, it will seem that I don't understand the charm. Although I have been poor for half my life and have no fame or fortune, I am still willing to add an insignificant touch to her at her best age. Love rises with the bell, but it is difficult to calm down when the bell stops. The origin and fall of the bell, and the fall of the bell is the beauty."

Overall, it's okay. The equipment introduction could use fewer words. The anti-war article only needs one word! "Cool".

Well written and interesting to read!

Does the author's protagonist have a wife and children?

Five-star praise! Encourage encourage

Come on, come on, come on

It's very exciting to watch

I give it five stars because I'm afraid you'll be proud.

Very beautiful. Thank you very much.

The back part is still good, but there are some bad points in the front, which caused the score to be low. I suggest that the author can modify the bad points in the front.

Although this routine is still a bit old, this version can continue to be developed, preferably with one more point. You know the kind that all men love to see.