The Martial World Is Treacherous, but This Little Taoist Only Knows How to Swindle People

I feel like the story should be interesting, but the main character is a little too good, and the description of the relationship with the general is not smooth enough. I hope to give the main character more skills, so that it won't be too cumbersome. The combination of Taoist priests and generals is quite new. The author will give it a try and update it [making faces]

It's finished, come back to add comments. I feel that there are still many pitfalls that can be filled in or explored further, such as Xiaoying's master and his books, The three-month adventure with the general was brilliant. I really liked the process of them solving puzzles and monsters. I still feel a little regretful that I didn't continue to write about this kind of daily life. The plot tension is very good, and the foreshadowing of the general's disaster is also remarkable for Xiao's ability. The big master grasps this kind of metaphysical scale very well. It's fascinating. I want to read it again (*σ´∀`)σ It's a pity that some cars are blocked, but it's still exciting without a car! Ps: I really like the tense pull in the early stage. Different adventures come one after another. The unknown journey, constant trials and tests, make two people change their views on each other. This kind of thing is really suitable for a long-lasting relationship! Three months is both short and long. I don't know why, even though there are so many ups and downs in the Huo family, I still feel that these three months are not as exciting as the twists and turns. Is this the power of White Moonlight? (No), haha. Maybe it's because it is very tortuous in the first place, and secondly, the emotional foreshadowing is good at the beginning, the twists are appropriate, and it goes deeper bit by bit, making people's hearts surging. In comparison, the later period is slightly inferior. But overall, this is a good book with no flaws, rich and exciting background, and deserves five points!

I was convinced, Dad, why it only had a score of 7, and why I was reading so little. The quality of this book was clearly one of the best on the site, and it was much better looking than those cannon fodder male supporting roles like White Moonlight.

The language of this article has a special ancient style, just like Ge Fengxiaoshen. Of course, it is very practical and feels like writing something about daily life. If you feel that your life is very dull and want to read something dull, this article is a good recommendation, and it combines the daily life of the charlatan general and some wonderful clips. When you read the first paragraph, you feel a little bit unable to stop and push you to continue reading. The author's writing style is very good, and he writes a lot about the casual and free character of the charlatan. Of course, his character is also very real, neither overly dwarfed nor overly exaggerated. He is flexible and capable. He can face the world and society well on his own.

The characters are so novel, the writing is good, and the plot is compact and fast. It would be better if there were more daily routines. I feel that their daily routines should be quite interesting (actually, I secretly want to see their daily routines). Great support.

It's beautiful, sister. JPG. Perfect work. Highly recommended. Anyway, in my mind, it's worth 9+. Let's talk about the plot first. The author's writing is online, especially the foreshadowing is very well laid out. It is much better than some works where the foreshadowing is abrupt and even a fool can see it. Although the foreshadowing in this book cannot be said to be linked to each other, the author is very careful to bury it in the right place. Whether it is the characters or objects that appear, they are in their right places and hidden behind the scenes. He will give me a big surprise when he appears later. Anyway, it is fun to watch. Let's talk about the character creation of the protagonist. It's a rare type of general × Taoist priest. Although Huo is a general, he also has a childish and lively side, which is more in line with his high-spirited and unfaded youthfulness as he climbed from the bottom to the general position step by step at a young age (I guess? It's purely personal feelings). In some aspects, he is traditional and stubborn. In some aspects, he is particularly wild and open-minded (such as pulling Ying to play wild zhan or something) [laughing] Although Ying is a Taoist priest, he is very cute. The author makes him very lovable. Sophisticated but arrogant. Although he has been alone for many years, he still retains precious qualities. He is greedy for money but not stingy. He has a tolerant personality but also has some cute little tempers. It is the kind of years of hard work that has not worn away all the edges and corners of this stone named Ying Youchen, but has polished off his raw jade essence hidden under the surface of the stubborn stone. This feeling is really endearing. I hope more people can read this book because I really think it's very interesting.

Ying Youchen always said that he was not good at academics and looked like a philistine, but he actually had a kind and sincere heart. Huo Zhiheng's emotional transformation from initial wariness and disgust to later trust and dependence was very delicate. The characters are beautifully drawn! [Blowing kiss] I really like Huo Yunshi, he can move freely among the power and intrigues, and his every move shows his grace. I won't write more stories about him. [Sending Hearts]

It's so good [like], it has 400,000 words. I feel like I've read 200,000 words. There's nothing embarrassing about the plot, it's all quite natural, and I didn't feel bored even after watching it later [laughs] (I was originally worried that the little Taoist priest would be embarrassed when he meets the general's mother later, but the author's twist here is quite good, not as thunderous as I thought [hold]

It's a good-looking, very novel work. It's not like the old routine. I didn't expect much when the book was out of stock. I really didn't expect it. Every mission is wonderful, especially Huang Xian, which impressed me a lot. Maybe it's because I've watched too many scary things, so when the author wrote about Huang Xian's smile, it reminded me of a lot of weird smiles, which made my hair stand on end. . . In the end, there was a twist, and he was a good Huang Xian, which also gave him a clean slate. Finally, thank you to the fox demon for your help hahahaha [shy] There are still some parts that I haven't finished yet, so I'm looking forward to the next development. I wish the author better and better.

Nice! After Xiao Huo knew who the person was that night, he began to open up his heart, see his own heart and pursue Xiao Ying bravely. He also really doted on her. Later, the time when the two of them lived together in the Taoist temple was really sweet, and it felt like living a well-off life. There are also quite a lot of meat at the back [shy] and the rice is so fragrant. Please give it a try and update it. I accidentally tied it [please update]