Combination of System➕Slave Girl
In this world of swords and magic.
The original human Fang Yu was reincarnated into a cute and cute system. He spent three months bored in the stone monument and met a slave girl by chance!
[Hahahaha, let me save this poor girl! ]
Love the cute system for role playing.
A slave girl who escaped from her master.
Forced into a desperate situation, he reincarnated into a system and led the host to find his own way of survival!
Generally speaking, it is to help the host grow up, and to raise a daughter... (Don't watch it with your brain! Don't watch it with your brain! Don't watch it with your brain!!!) You can just watch it for fun. This is my first time writing, so please forgive me if the writing is not good.
Reader comments
Radio articles for newcomers to entertain themselves, suitable for those who want to become writers on radio waves.
The writing has no foreshadowing, the twists are abrupt, the plot is abrupt, and the protagonist (referring to the system) is abstract. When newcomers write novels, they first draw the target and then shoot the arrow, but how to describe the trajectory of the arrow is where the level of skill is reflected.
If you don't expect it to make money, the most important thing about your hobby is to make yourself happy.
If you want to improve, I suggest: less XP, more logic, polish the outline, strictly implement it, don't let yourself go unless necessary, actually substitute the plot scenes you imagined, make more dumplings and be less jealous.
Two to three stars, four stars are encouraged.
Radio articles for newcomers to entertain themselves, suitable for those who want to become writers on radio waves. The writing has no foreshadowing, the twists are abrupt, the plot is abrupt, and the protagonist (referring to the system) is abstract. When newcomers write novels, they first draw the target and then shoot the arrow, but how to describe the trajectory of the arrow is where the level of skill is reflected. If you don't expect it to make money, the most important thing about your hobby is to make yourself happy. If you want to improve, I suggest: less XP, more logic, polish the outline, strictly implement it, don't let yourself go unless necessary, actually substitute the plot scenes you imagined, make more dumplings and be less jealous. Two to three stars, four stars are encouraged.