Beast Girl Tribe, My Mall Can Buy Everything

It's the kind of time-travel development + harem story where the author has a good grasp of the plot and the cool points. He probably wrote an outline. I'm not exaggerating. It's much better than those headline-grabbing ones with poor quality content. Also, cheers for the author

It is relatively novel in terms of subject matter. It puts the polar regions and cute orcs together, and the loneliness of the environment is in sharp contrast with the enthusiasm of the beast-eared girl. I personally suggest that the author's writing style needs to be improved to describe the environment, create a feeling of loneliness and shock, and then enhance the warm feeling given by the beast-eared girl. But in reality, I have reason to suspect that the author lacks some life experience. For example, snakes are cold-blooded and generally do not live in cold places, and snakes are hibernating creatures. Even if they do not hibernate in caves, they at least hibernate in some places with a thermal insulation foundation. It is almost impossible to be in a tree. However, considering that there are witches, I can understand it, but I feel a little uncomfortable when I see it. You can review it after writing to combine it with the facts to increase the sense of reality and make readers feel more involved.

It's the tribal life I like, with wine, beast girls, tribal conflicts, hunting, delicious food, and systems [laughing] It's best to write more about exploration.

Primitive tribe, starting from being picked up by the beast girl in the snow field Written by Chiyuan Immortal It's a primitive tribe type, the plot is relatively simple, and it feels like a two-dimensional fairy tale. I can't go into the small details, but overall it seems very refreshing. Coupled with some crimson fantasy elements, it's pretty good. About four and a half stars, New Book Seedlings, rounded up.

Good-looking, relaxing beast-girl harem plus exploration map Even a bunch of props are not used... The author did not grasp the golden finger well, which makes people feel that the system provides very little help. It is recommended to read this book by default without a system [face covering]

The writing technique is very good, the writing style is smooth, and there is no messy content. It is relaxed and enjoyable with a little external pressure. After reading the novel, the repressed migrant workers in the city can imagine the primitive environment to release the pressure of city life, which is very good.

The plot flow is very good in a step-by-step manner. There is no climax and no underestimation of the passages, but I am still interested in reading. Come on! Three chapters in one day are not enough, hehe!

I think the topic of this novel is very good, and the writing aspect is also relatively relaxed. It is a light novel with a different world theme that mainly revolves around development and construction. At present, I think it is a better book. Fight when there is a fight, and farm when there is development. It is very relaxing, and some daily life makes me happy to read it. This novel should not have such a low rating. I highly recommend this novel.

There are bright spots but also many shortcomings, such as problems with the setting of combat power and the development planning of the territory... But despite the flaws, I can still write the harem and the latest chapter these days. The author who has not made any mistakes must give five-star support. [Think]

After reading three chapters, I found that this author's writing style is very good and the plot is also very rounded. I hope he can maintain it in the future!

Overall it's pretty good, very routine, with occasional ups and downs in the plot. It's pretty okay and I like it a lot. However, the pace suddenly picks up at the end and it's a bit sloppy. Everything else is pretty good.

It's true that the time I listened to the book may be wrong. The growth flow is very stable and there are no poisonous points. The only possibility is that I need to remember the name carefully. The plot is very solid. Oh, I can't make it up anymore. Come and watch. Come and chop me down. Although it's a development trend, it's too slow. It's really nice and beautiful, but don't overwhelm the combat power, okay? [I'm about to cry]

Recommended reading, except for the rushed ending, there are no shortcomings. Compared with books of the same type, in my opinion, this book is better than them in avoiding lightning. Let me talk about it: 1. Is it a primitive society? There are few clothes, and everyone can understand them. Compared to other books, there are no men in this setting, and the beast-eared girls are only women. This is better than the others, because if there are few men in clothes, everyone can understand them, which is depressing. 2. The relationship between the orc and the beast-eared girl is that of mortal enemies. If caught, they will either die or exchange for material. Unlike other novels, they can be regarded as nothing more than lightning protection. 3. The setting, from the primitive society at the beginning, to magical fantasy and then to technology, is not a pure primitive society, but it is still worth watching.

It's quite good to watch, because there are no male demi-humans, so it's more comfortable, and the male protagonist doesn't have any danger and is slowly getting stronger.

This is the best primitive blog I have ever seen. It's great. It would be great if there was no limit on the number of uploads. It would be a great start. By the way, I also want to help Mao Ye wash his tail [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Overall, it's pretty good. Some comments complain about the combat power. But if you stick to it, it's actually pretty good. It's a little stressful in the early stage, but that's normal. There are also patches, but it's still pretty cool later on. It's just that the progress in the later stages feels a little faster, and it might be almost finished.

It's a pretty good book, much better than other books on Tomato. I read a lot of comments about its combat effectiveness, but I don't think it's very combat effectiveness. The faster you advance, the less you can write about (and the feel is not good). I personally think this book is between 8.5 And 9.2. The ratings are relatively objective, and there are no poisonous points (except for the so-called combat power that some people think). It is much better than other games that are invincible for a few days and then upgrade to fight monsters (or they are so stupid that they ask the system for everything and then write a lot of psychological descriptions that are completely bad). The author updates steadily. I personally recommend reading this book (if you don't have a knife, you can read it as food or listen to it before going to bed)

Reading this novel, I felt uneasy for a long time. It's not just a story, it's more like a real life. The author's writing is restrained and powerful, without deliberately sensationalizing, but the most touching warmth is hidden in the details. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, and every turning point is natural and shocking, making people laugh, worry, and remain silent. When I close the book, I feel as if I have experienced a growth and redemption with the people in the book. Good novels are generally like this: they make people immersed, think, and see themselves in the story. It's worth reading, and it's worth revisiting again and again.

It's not bad, but it has to abandon many logical flaws and some "whimsical ideas" caused by the author's knowledge blind spots. Xiao Qiao thought about this part, but then it was too big. I don't know if the author can insist on finishing it.

The plot is relatively relaxed, and the writing is flawless, not pretentious, and quite fluent. It surpasses 90% of Tomato writers who write about Western fantasy, and 95% of those who write about systems and upgrades. Personally, I think the score should be around 9.3, Which is not too flashy and exciting (no) 😊

I think the subject matter of this book is novel and the daily interactions are quite interesting. It can be considered a good book. Except for the combat power, I think everything else is very good, and I look forward to the author's continued updates. P. S.: There are only two chapters per day, which is not enough! ! !

Tribe, Farming, Beast Ear Girl, Wu Knife, these are pretty good books in this genre.

It was very smooth from beginning to end, and there was no point that I didn't understand. Because of the harem, it is more suitable for 16 plus. There is a gag in this book: "No seats~" You can read the barrage and communicate with book friends while watching. This gag is not in the original text.

The plot is good, and the characters of each orc girl are also very distinct. The real people are very immersed in listening to the book, and there are some "other" aspects that are very immersive. It is simply every man's fantasy utopia. I personally think it is good.

Overall this book is okay. The first part is relatively boring, but once you slowly get into the rhythm of farming, it becomes good again. If it is written at the current pace, there is a high probability that it will become a western fantasy farming novel with a score of 9 or above.

It looks good. The growth of this kind of tribe is still very interesting. Different props and novel knowledge can be unlocked. The author also laid down the foreshadowing of magic and immortality. It has been praised by 5 stars. I must continue writing.

It's just that this novel is too short, there aren't many chapters and there are too few words, but everything else is wonderful.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, the plot is also very good, not boring

It looks good, come on, the current rhythm is fine, there is no need to write about the knife or anything, it is nice to be warm and cozy

Okay, okay, harem plus sweet story, it can be regarded as an excellent cool story with a male protagonist.