Collapse of Iron: Jun and Fu Qing

At first I thought the name was very interesting, but the cover at the end really attracted me to it, it's really beautiful! (Big praise), and then there is the plot, which is sweet and sweet, and the male protagonist is also very good. Anyway, I found it right, and what attracts me is the male protagonist's concept and high emotional intelligence. I just don't like to see the male protagonist being dull (I personally think that kind of sugar is a bit low, and there is no point in thinking). So far, it seems to be a very good love story, but I don't know how to write it later. Can you write the main plot? Or is the main plot just a side story, and this book is about love? Looking forward to the next one, the author said cheers [blowing kiss] [like]

There is no need to put too much emphasis on the protagonist's behavior and appearance. To make the character image three-dimensional and full, it is necessary to rely on detailed descriptions and side descriptions. Too much emphasis will consume the reader's patience and make the article seem draggy. It is an improvement compared to the previous book, but it is still lacking. It can be Learn more about the control of details in other excellent works and feel the process of establishing and vividly characterizing the characters step by step. Don't be too anxious about plot arrangements. The development of emotions is a slow process. Use less narration and more psychological activities.

To be honest, I would have a problem if you don't accept all the girls you've written so far (including the protagonist's two younger sisters). So I hope the author can consider collecting them all [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I was very touched when I saw the male and female protagonists together, because I was pursued by three girls at the same time in high school. Now that I think about it, I felt sorry for them, but there was no other way. I rejected them all. Looking back now, it turned out that they were crying that night.

There's not much to say, sweet, don't be too demanding, it's pretty good for a tomato, and the author will actively listen to suggestions. You can still watch Fu Xuan Qing Que without saying much, you'll know by yourself after watching it.

The book is still good, it is about the single heroine Fu Xuan, but I was deceived by my family. I thought that Qing Que could turn around after reading the title, but I got a big deal out of it. Qing Que lost in the end, and it was still the single heroine Qing Que who suffered from Fu Xuan.

Sweet, the main character is a bit similar to a succubus

Author, don't you have other heroines besides these two?

Can you take in the two sisters? If you are afraid of review, you can patch it later.

It's perfect without any flaws, but how do you deal with the two sisters?

I'm very curious about what is written after Qingque I feel like Qingque's role is a bit lacking.

Yes, but I came here for Qingque. Now I feel like it's Fu Xuan's single female lead. I'll watch it later if Qingque is taken away and kicked.

Super pretty! The protagonist has a high emotional intelligence and looks very comfortable. The key is my favorite Fu Qing! Come on, baby!

It's beautiful, full marks. I must write it to the end [crying] [crying] This is my lifelong request [cool] [cool]

Looks good, no need to say more

Five stars! Very sweet and awesome!

It's so beautiful, I'm stunned! [Praise]

Pretty good, just too sweet

It looks good, but is this the end? [Crying] It's a bit sudden, I feel so sorry [I'm about to cry]

Beautiful, so sweet [love]

The author's writing is so good. Please recommend it to me and everyone will come over to read it.

It's funny, why should the latecomers come first? Because the former does not fight or grab

Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, very sweet, so was Fu Xuan the first one to confirm their relationship?

It's quite sweet, please give it a try, author, but it would be more comfortable for the heroine to have less of it.

Sweet, sweet, meow, more meow, kneel down and beg you, meow

It's pretty cool, I just hope the protagonist doesn't end up being a tangled monster.

It looks good, the characters are well-written, and the plot is engaging.

It's a very good article. The characters' emotions can drive readers' emotions, but I wouldn't recommend it if you don't like multiple female protagonists.

It's very interesting. It's the best daily novel I've ever read. The characters are well set up, the plot is not boring, and the story of human nature is simple, but few people will use it in daily life.

Kick me again when the green bird scene comes (￣-￣)