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The writing is good and suitable for children in grades 4-5. It is easy to understand and full of childlike interest, and is in line with children's social experience and fantasies in their own brains.

It's good to watch, it has its own plot, and it doesn't deviate from the original work. Apart from the fact that I don't like Qiuqiu, it's really good. I don't know why I don't like Qiuqiu. I can watch Moe Academy Piayo, but this is a personal problem of mine and has nothing to do with the text, so I will skip the plot about following Qiuqiu. The main reason is that your writing is too baffling. I used to be a classmate, and then just gave in to the dog food. I don't like to add your inexplicable feelings and start to have ambiguity, so really, just skip it.

Very well written, keep up the good work! Don't care what others say. Compared with other ultimate novels, your writing is already very good. At least for me, an ultimate fan, it seems to me to be very good. There have been a lot of ultimate novels published recently, and only yours made me want to continue reading it. I want to write as many as possible while ensuring the quality. I don't want to keep a book [like][like][like]

Okay, it attracts me more than ordinary fan fiction.

Good-looking and good-looking, he is the ultimate person who treats our ultimate world kindly. The villains also love each other very much [love] [love] [love] I hope Baby Qiuqiu will be powerful and return to the end of the world.

It's well written, not brainless or outright invincible. The daily comedy is not inconsistent with the excessive plot.

Not bad, not bad

It looks smooth now

Good luck to the author!

Not bad, for the time being it is clearly organized and logical, and the plot is not procrastinating. I will give it four stars first and then watch the follow-up.