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In fact, I haven't looked back at it since I finished writing it. [Punch hard]

The writing is superb from a fan perspective and a descriptive perspective. It's hard to imagine that the author is so young. To be honest, the writing style surpasses many fan novels and other novels. When I read the whole article, I felt like one word - smooth. It sounds simple, but it is rare to see fan fiction on Persimmon nowadays. Most authors have ideas but the techniques are not enough to express them, resulting in a top-heavy article. However, the narrative of this article is very smooth, with almost no lags. It can also be seen that the author has indeed carefully studied the original work. The character expression is not much different from the original work, and the details of the settings have also been paid attention to. The description of Leander does not stick to the abrupt appearance (I personally think this is the biggest problem of some fans nowadays). What I see more is his inner conflict and love for his younger brother. The character creation is also very three-dimensional. He really makes me feel that he is a very charming person! However, I would like to give a small opinion to the author. In my opinion, the author is fully capable of highlighting the framework of the original work and writing other more interesting things! I hope that the author can challenge himself in the future and not be too restricted by the existing plot of the original work. He can try to write something of his own. Anyway, I'm very grateful to the author for bringing us such an interesting fanfic! Keep up the good work, author! I also hope that the author's real life study and life go well.

This is a high-quality fanfic with delicate emotions and a strong sense of empathy. It almost perfectly shows a child struggling with his destiny. It uses words to show us a better and more tragic world than the original work. The beauty is that more sacrificed people can survive, and the tragedy is that there is one more tragic character who is comparable to Professor Snape. Leander should probably call him Enzo. Fortunately, the author also suffered.

The setting is very novel, the depressing feeling in the later period is really well written, and the sense of immersion is really strong, but my little heart is hurt. I hope the author can make more extra chapters.

Wuwuwuwu🥹2025.10.4 Finished with flowers🎉 Many months have passed, and along the way, the author and Enzou have worked hard, and they will always be happy in the future. [Blowing kiss] It's so beautiful, so easy to cry, and I love it so much! !

It was very, very interesting. In just two hours, I learned about everything a great elder brother did to protect his younger brother. I kept crying while watching, especially in the extras. I felt very emotional that with "if" everything would be beautiful, but the fact is that there is no "if" in the world!

Potter, be happy. I hope your story is not just what is written on paper. It is too painful. I also hope it will be a perfect fairy tale, but life is different. He will never be a fairy tale. The world seemed to have stopped when Leander died. Don't doubt that we all hope you can have a better ending. But at that moment, I knew that it was already the best ending for Enzo.

The writing is very beautiful, especially Leander's detailed changes, which are really vivid [laughs] [laughing] Please keep up the good work and look forward to other works.

Super good-looking, super good-looking.

Dear author. It's not that we don't want to comment, it's just that we can't comment. We really want to review it!

Super beautiful, super beautiful, highly recommended.

Nice! ! ! The latter part is well written😭but I feel like there are some places in the front part, anyway, I skipped a lot (www, don't spray, everyone's audience is different) Love eating knives😋

Great, great, great

It's so beautiful. Is there any extra story? [Crying]

The words written by thoughtful authors are different [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is great, can the author come up with a satisfactory if line?

Oh my god, I couldn't stop crying when I saw the final echo [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's beautiful, very sweet, and very warm, hahahahaha, the art is like Patrick Star…

High-quality fan fiction, either insisting on the feeling of everyone's ending, or seeing the end. Although it is this ending, it feels like he developed in that way and has his own soul.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, super good looking😘😘😘

The characters are well drawn. I haven't calmed down to read a book for a long time. I look forward to the author's next better book (˘ ³˘)❤