People in the Game World Start from the Young Orion

So far, so good. Let's prepare food! I suggest that the author either has no heroine in the later stage and focuses on martial arts, or has multiple women, but without a heroine, don't suddenly have a single heroine in the game world, and those pure love scenes will be very empty.

I am currently reading Chapter 90. I read that there were a lot of bad reviews in the first few dozen chapters when I was still in Dashan and in the county town, but the writing was pretty good. After entering the big city in Chapter 40 or 50, it was especially good. There were almost no negative reviews in the reviews, and the protagonists and supporting roles were well portrayed. There was nothing brainless. Overall, it was worth reading.

This rating of this work is really a pity, especially for Tomato, whose goodness can only be glimpsed after Chapter 100, but this has a fatal impact on the novel. When I was reading the first 100 chapters, I ridiculed and insulted the various plots, the performance of the protagonist, and the performance of the combat power in the paragraphs. I tried my best to be a stinking keyboard warrior, but I also persisted to the 100th chapter honestly. Here I feel that the author first came up with the inspiration from Chapter 100 to the end of the micro chapter, and then moved forward from there, which led to the current situation of rating the novel. It is really a pity.

Except for some early setting flaws, the overall look and feel is very good. The writing is smooth and the characters are well drawn, unlike the works of newcomers. After reading a hundred chapters, I just felt that the plot was exciting and had almost no moisture. Compared with the beginning of the book, I feel that things are right and people are different, and when I read it again, I feel that the beginning of troubled times has just begun. Come on!

Since I read this book, I feel like I am just like the rest of the book. The writing is very exciting, there are no surprises, and the plot is not sluggish. It seems that the author's seriousness and persistence can be seen between the lines.

Only 7.1 Points? This is the most novel-like novel I've seen on Tomato! The style is similar to that of Daojun. Although it is only 7 points hotter than Daojun, it is like a god to Tomato. It is no exaggeration to say that if the author can maintain this level, Tomato is not worthy of being your platform. Starting point is! It's better to lack than to overdo it, author, come on!

The content and rhythm are very good, but there are a few updates. My suggestion is to seize the author and lock him in a small dark room, and either update him or blow him up. [Smile][smile][laugh]

It's very well written and can be considered a red persimmon masterpiece.

There are currently no obvious flaws, the plot logic is reasonable, the characters are delicately portrayed, and the data is not broken. It is worth looking forward to. There are at least 4 stars and upwards. Anyone who gives one star is either a great god himself or a troll.

It's very good, the story is very attractive, and the male protagonist's character is not bad, but what surprises me the most is the interpretation of many characters in it. The feeling that King Wu and Wen Sheng use the common people as pawns is very shocking. The male protagonist is currently a spoiler or a pawn that should not appear. I look forward to the day when he becomes a real chess player and shakes up the world.

Those with low ratings are basically those who have only watched a little bit. There are some bad points in the front, but they are good in the back.

Good! It is rare to see novels of this quality in Tomato novels. From the end of the micro chapter, the overall look and feel and story background are described very well. The wind rises at the end of Qingping, and the waves form between gentle waves. Five-star recommendation.

A very, very good book, good luck to the author!

The writing is quite good, especially in the later part, it becomes smoother and the writing and plot have improved significantly, but there are fewer people watching it. Come on💪

It's really outstanding, I admire you! 👏👏👏

Good reviews, I like the dotted flow like Deep Blue the most. At least in my opinion, the writing power is not weaker than Get Out The infighting of the Yan family is also well written, a bit like Chu Xuan in Infinite Horror, very cruel and calculating. You can either be good at martial arts or fight for hegemony. You can't have both. The later stages of Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty are a bit broken. I suggest the author not to try it. There are other layouts and black hands, which are very boring. Personally, I feel that if you can get a good start, isn't it better to go for weird and high martial arts?

The author's writing style is good and he is very careful. You can also feel that he hopes to write a classic work without any perfunctory coding. But the detail processing is not very natural, you can try to "describe" more, it may be smoother. Come on!

This book is really perfect. Anyway, I didn't find any faults. Many novels have no world view at all. This book's power system, world view, and character relationships are all perfect. It kills decisively and mobilizes human hormones. The people who read it will also get excited. It's your loss if you don't read it.

This article is very good. The plot and writing are very smooth. The author is very good. The potential of the article is delayed by the name. The outline is very good. In fact, the outline is normal for thousands of chapters, but the pace is too fast. If the plot can be refined and slowed down, the cheating can be more reasonable and more real. The potential of the masterpiece is fully realized. I hope the author can further accumulate it. I look forward to writing a masterpiece in the next part.

As an old bookworm, I personally feel that this book is quite good. There are no flaws that make people uncomfortable. Don't focus on minor flaws. After all, reading novels is a relaxing and enjoyable thing.

A very nice book with a good layout. On Tomato, it is definitely a high-quality book. There is no such thing as The Killer, Not the Holy Mother, Not Selfish. Ninety-nine percent of the books I give on Tomato are negative reviews. This one deserves a good review from me. Keep up the good work and write faster [punch out]

Although you rated it, I saw the writing in the first volume, which is very good, and the plot is very reversal. In fact, it is one of the few good articles on Tomato. After reading the first volume, I gave it 5 points, which is very good.

@ Eat Durian Don't Spit Durian Skin The writing is really good. It's rare for me to calm down and read it. It's just that I have a regret that I didn't let Yan Kailan live. At the end of the second chapter, the colorful light should be given to him. After all, he is also one of the Emperor Stars. I quite like this character. It would be great if he could live. The whole book is very good. I highly recommend it!

It's okay, there are some minor flaws but they're not major problems. It's much better than the four-to-five-page novel I read yesterday that had a punch of psychological activities and watery dialogue. I've read Chapter 70. The protagonist has just found his feet and hasn't taken off yet. I'll watch it after he's fattened up.

I saw a lot of people saying that the author's writing skills are too good, but I think the author's writing skills are good and have never collapsed. I hope it will continue to be [grievance]

A good book, although some details are not rigorous. But the grudges and grudges are heart-wrenching. Comfortable to watch. The author must not be a eunuch. Also, who made the rating so low?

The plot of the author's novel has ups and downs, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the language is as fluent as flowing clouds and flowing water. It is addictive to read. Especially the delicate description of details seems to bring readers into the world of the story, with a strong sense of immersion. Such works are rare, and I look forward to the author continuing to create more masterpieces!

A book that the more you read, the more you want to read it, is really rare on Tomato. The reason for the low rating is because there are few people who review it. One bad review is enough to bring the whole book down, and you can see what the few with one star are saying.

This book is a masterpiece Five-star reviews here

Not bad. It's fun to watch but not mindless. It's one of the few excellent products from Tomato.