Mixed Martial Arts Evil Girl Is Immortal

This is my second book. When I wrote the first book, I was very interested in the maternal lineage. I checked a lot of information, bought a lot of books, and wrote an anti-routine article on childbirth, "Even if I am bound to the life and death system, I still have to live with a smile." The idea is: Creating life is the ability of God, and the female gender has been dominant for a hundred thousand years. I want to take everyone to understand the characteristics of the maternal lineage that subvert our cognition. But the writing style is not very good, and coupled with the sloppiness, I fell in love with it. This is the second book. It is about martial arts, but it flows very smoothly. I like both the heroine and the supporting characters, and the writing is very emotional. Although there are many shortcomings, there are many readers who are on the same page as me and can get my pleasure and appreciate the characters I write. This makes me feel that writing novels is a great thing. So lucky to meet you. Congratulations and blessings!

Very interesting! ! ! The female supporting role has many roles, and there is no sexual relationship. The writing is interesting and really great. I like it very much! Unsatisfied Gong Jiu hates this character so much that it makes the protagonist feel weak. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more! !

It looks good. The heroine is a human being, a living person, not a tool to satisfy the author's writing desires.

It's rare to see such martial arts novels about my beloved daughter. I have been loving martial arts novels for a long time. I came across this book and couldn't put it down. I want to spread it among my fellow readers, so read it quickly!

The beginning is a bit slow, but the story behind it is very well written. The heroine has a great personality and her female friends are also very attractive. There are no surprises or sexual relationships. The heroine is very persistent in wanting power.

Rather than readers who simply want to read love stories, it is more suitable for readers who have read the original male-dominated novels/watched the corresponding TV series. The latter will feel more deeply about the rewritten parts. I haven't read it, but I feel that a lot of it is devoted to the introduction of the original characters and the original plot, and the part about the beloved daughter is concentrated in the ending. The problem is that awakened women rarely find the settings of male characters in patriarchal novels to be interesting or the settings of female characters to be logical. It would appear that the heroines revolve around boring and incompetent male characters, and the female-centered ending is very hasty.

Although the author said it was not well written, I liked it very much, but the second story was too rushed. It's a very good love story about women. The heroine, Bao Bao, is both principled and flexible. She is also very interesting. It made me laugh to death while watching it. The sisterly relationship is also very enjoyable.

I think the writing is very unique. Overall it looks pretty good. And since I've seen this, I'll give it five stars. Unlike some other books on the market. Anyway, it has the author's own ideas.

The idea is very good, and it is extremely female-oriented. I actually don't mince words. The author of this book allows women to break out of their own world in the martial arts world where the male protagonist loves men as much as his life.

This book is also very interesting, but the number of views is not very high. Every female character in the book is well-shaped. The author gave them a character subjectivity other than the original work, so that they are no longer the stereotype of "crazy women". I am very happy to see such a plot!

Not bad, but the absorption of Yan Tieshan's memory is a bit messy

It looks good, the characters are very novel, and the plot doesn't revolve around men like most fan fiction, which is about enchanting men. However, it's a bit exaggerated to say she is a villain. Also, the plot is a bit messy at the beginning, but it becomes much smoother at the end.

The whole article about women's pleasure made me feel good after reading it, my breasts were cleared, and my menstruation became regular. It was really good. How could the author finish it?

Very nice! The characters are distinct and three-dimensional. They are neither worldly good guys nor demented bad guys. The setting is very interesting.

The home page recommended the second volume. I thought it was just a common novel. Since I had never read the original works of these martial arts novels, I didn't click in to read the text until I saw a book friend's recommendation on her homepage. I clicked in and read two chapters before deciding to finish the first volume. After reading it in one sitting, I couldn't stop. The only drawback is that the progress of the subsequent stories is too fast. I hope that the second volume can be improved.

Very nice! ! ! ! Although there are multiple perspectives that switch between each other, it is really good to watch. The perspective of Shangguan Feiyan in the middle is a bit awkward, but the plot behind it is very good.

Very beautiful, I like the sisterhood between Zhu Rong and Gongsun Lan

Love it. I felt a little frustrated at first in the first world. But after the founding of the country, it was so exciting. The author stepped up his efforts! [Blowing kiss]

Every evil girl is unwilling to give in. A single spark can start a prairie fire. If this life is also a novel, I hope we will also...

At the beginning, the writing was a bit vague, and the overall writing was not very clear, but the writing got better and better as it went on. By the second world, the protagonist was already very good, with a clear mind and a firm goal. It's a very good book.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The plot of not humiliating women, the dirty words of women, the plot is reasonable, and basically not OOC

This book is really fun and made me laugh. The heroine has a very interesting character.

It's nice to watch, and the heroine's thoughts, actions, and character are always refreshing.

It's very interesting, the author's writing style is very witty, and the most important thing is that his views are absolutely correct! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The female protagonist is the strongest, seeking benefits for women, and people watching feel happy

It's beautiful, I wish the author better and better, don't give up❤️❤️❤️ Good looking (✧∀✧) Good luck to the author

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Very well written, from Mei Nv