Evolving into the Ultimate Lifeform, Starting with One-Punch Man

After reading more than 60 chapters, basically every character is quite restored, and it seems quite comfortable. I don't know if some female protagonists will feel that it is not possible, but it is quite good. I am looking forward to what Demon Slayer will be like in the future. I don't know when it will start. But with the protagonist's current strength, I can directly grab it with telekinesis, and it will be finished in the sun. I'm sorry, family

It's pretty good. I read it after the author revised it, so I didn't see any bad points. As for the blade fangs that were written too much, I think it's okay. The author's writing is quite exciting. The main author's combat power in the main world is too high, which makes it difficult to write. In fact, it's best to write one world at a time. Go to other worlds with low martial arts, and the combat power of the world gradually increases. Another thing is, don't do too many bells and whistles. I like the power to be attributed to myself. The protagonist is like a weirdo with a steel armor. Well, why not just write about other worlds to improve yourself?

It's pretty cool, but I always make an egg-high sound in my head [face covering]

Fortunately, I changed it to not joining, otherwise I wouldn't be able to hold on. To be honest, the length of the Blade Fang chapter is only forty or fifty chapters, and it doesn't have many words in the early 100s. Why do people in the comment area say it is too long?

So far it looks very good. It can be said that this novel is very good among Yi Yi fan. If you like one punch, I recommend you to read it. Come on, author! It can be said that this is the best book I have read in a while. It looks good, but it's too short. [Wronged]

The writing is okay, but you have to pay attention to the length and grasp the rhythm. Write less if you can omit some things. Currently, some parts of the Blade Ya chapter are a bit bloated because they have not grasped the rhythm well. Come on, the author hopes to write better.

Like very much "I am Bear Grylls. I have served in the British Special Forces. I have climbed to the top of Mount Everest and crossed the freezing Arctic Ocean. My mission is simple, to show you how to survive longer here." "Boy, my adventure is over, your adventure has just begun!"

It's okay. Remember to write more about the main world and less about the sub-world.

I've only seen 78 chapters so far, so I won't comment if there are too many. At present, there are few negative points. That is, the title of the work should focus on the world of One Punch. Some people may not be able to accept it. The first few chapters are about One Punch Man and the long chapters at the end are all about the World of Blades. I personally can accept it. The combat descriptions in Saberya World are quite good, and these descriptions are quite detailed. I just feel that the pace is a bit too fast, and the protagonist's combat power has increased a bit too much. I personally prefer slow-burn stories. I feel like vomiting after reading too many of Invincible Cool Stories, but it's okay to accept it. It's okay to read it once in a while, but when I say this, don't deliberately suppress the combat power, otherwise it will be more uncomfortable [Thoughts]

I feel that the writing in the early stage is pretty good, except for (the speed is good, but the strength is not enough [pinch]) the early stage should be given five stars! ! ! ! ! ! But I don't know why after 150, the protagonist has no sense of humanity. Invincible's writing is very good, there is no pretense, but Invincible is very natural and not aggrieved. I hope the author will go to other worlds and bring the tornado with him in the future, otherwise it will look like there is no sense of humanity, only divinity [OK] Finally, thank you to the author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧