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After reading more than 60 chapters, basically every character is quite restored, and it seems quite comfortable. I don't know if some female protagonists will feel that it is not possible, but it is quite good. I am looking forward to what Demon Slayer will be like in the future. I don't know when it will start. But with the protagonist's current strength, I can directly grab it with telekinesis, and it will be finished in the sun. I'm sorry, family

It's pretty good. I read it after the author revised it, so I didn't see any bad points. As for the blade fangs that were written too much, I think it's okay. The author's writing is quite exciting. The main author's combat power in the main world is too high, which makes it difficult to write. In fact, it's best to write one world at a time. Go to other worlds with low martial arts, and the combat power of the world gradually increases. Another thing is, don't do too many bells and whistles. I like the power to be attributed to myself. The protagonist is like a weirdo with a steel armor. Well, why not just write about other worlds to improve yourself?

It's pretty cool, but I always make an egg-high sound in my head [face covering]

Fortunately, I changed it to not joining, otherwise I wouldn't be able to hold on. To be honest, the length of the Blade Fang chapter is only forty or fifty chapters, and it doesn't have many words in the early 100s. Why do people in the comment area say it is too long?

The writing is okay, but you have to pay attention to the length and grasp the rhythm. Write less if you can omit some things. Currently, some parts of the Blade Ya chapter are a bit bloated because they have not grasped the rhythm well. Come on, the author hopes to write better.

So far it looks very good. It can be said that this novel is very good among Yi Yi fan. If you like one punch, I recommend you to read it. Come on, author! It can be said that this is the best book I have read in a while. It looks good, but it's too short. [Wronged]

Like very much "I am Bear Grylls. I have served in the British Special Forces. I have climbed to the top of Mount Everest and crossed the freezing Arctic Ocean. My mission is simple, to show you how to survive longer here." "Boy, my adventure is over, your adventure has just begun!"

It's okay. Remember to write more about the main world and less about the sub-world.

I've only seen 78 chapters so far, so I won't comment if there are too many. At present, there are few negative points. That is, the title of the work should focus on the world of One Punch. Some people may not be able to accept it. The first few chapters are about One Punch Man and the long chapters at the end are all about the World of Blades. I personally can accept it. The combat descriptions in Saberya World are quite good, and these descriptions are quite detailed. I just feel that the pace is a bit too fast, and the protagonist's combat power has increased a bit too much. I personally prefer slow-burn stories. I feel like vomiting after reading too many of Invincible Cool Stories, but it's okay to accept it. It's okay to read it once in a while, but when I say this, don't deliberately suppress the combat power, otherwise it will be more uncomfortable [Thoughts]

I feel that the writing in the early stage is pretty good, except for (the speed is good, but the strength is not enough [pinch]) the early stage should be given five stars! ! ! ! ! ! But I don't know why after 150, the protagonist has no sense of humanity. Invincible's writing is very good, there is no pretense, but Invincible is very natural and not aggrieved. I hope the author will go to other worlds and bring the tornado with him in the future, otherwise it will look like there is no sense of humanity, only divinity [OK] Finally, thank you to the author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this that writes about Blade Ya and makes me feel a little bit happy to read it. If the world doesn't bother me later, I'll support giving a wave of rewards. The author [Start][Start]

When I first watched it, the specific plot seemed to have been changed, but the changes were good. I recommend the author to change the tornado picture of AI to something else (AI always feels a bit unsatisfactory). Personally, I think the title should be longer if possible. Compared with other tomato novels, this one is still a bit short (not so eye-catching)

It's pretty good. It combines the plot of the Blade Ya world and creates a good atmosphere. It's full of excitement. I'm looking forward to the plot of the next world.

I like your book very much. Please be sure to write it down! (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

The logic is okay, you can see, but one of the more sinister things is that since you have copied Saitama's ability, you don't have the limiter to copy his core ability.

Compared to many books, this book is well-paced and interesting. It's just that the title of the book can easily lead to misunderstanding.

The writing feels pretty good, but is the sub-world too long?

The author's writing skills are not good enough, so he is considered a potential author. Why do you say the author has potential? Because there are almost no changes to his original characters and settings, it is very good and surpasses half of the fan authors.

It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? No, it won't look good when we return to the battle with spells.

It's really good. I felt a little dizzy when I saw Basuga in the front, but I felt really good watching Demon Slayer.

It is true that there are too many blades, and there is basically no One Punch Man. But when I saw this, I felt that the author's writing of blades was pretty good. I just don't know what will happen next, so I will give you a five-star encouragement first.

It's good-looking and refreshing, and it's not deliberately trying to suppress the power.

It's really good to read. It's been a while since I saw an article about the left brain fighting the right brain. Let's read it together [laughter]

The battle details are well described.

Each world I traveled through was relatively long, so now I feel I have suffered from the short number of words.

Okay. (σ°∀°)σ..:*☆ Oops, not bad. Later, I ended up pulling it out for no apparent reason. It was originally quite good.

The book is good. Good luck to the author. I hope the author will write better and better!

It's very interesting, and there is a lot to write about in this genre, so I recommend the author to update it ten times a day.

The writing is very good. If you look carefully, many of the sentences have been mentioned before. You can't be so perfunctory. Just copy the previous ones. [Like]

I really like you so much, I can't control my feelings for you. I'm afraid that delaying you will have a negative impact on you. I don't want to play for so long and end up saying that we are not meant to be together. I have too many obsessions and too many thoughts. It is difficult for me to get rid of you. I love you so much that I can't say anything to compare myself to my neighbor