Survival in the Dormitory, My Home Has Become a Nest of Beauties

The plot is okay for now, just keep the theme and characters unchanged

This type of novel is quite rare, and the writing is quite good. The first point is that the protagonist has some kidney deficiency at the beginning, and the second point is currency. It can be described more clearly. The author has written it very well.

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In harem stories, not all heroines are useful. This is the most enjoyable post-apocalyptic story I have ever read. It is mainly about fighting and killing. It contains a lot of daily life, and it is non-toxic. The protagonist kills decisively, not the Virgin, which is really good.

This novel is like eating hotpot at a night market stall, feeling something on your head, reaching out and touching it, bird poop, you laugh loudly, and eat more! Throw it into the hot pot. After a while, with the help of hot pot seasoning and high temperature, the bird droppings become fragrant and lumpy. You smiled evilly, picked it up and put it in your mouth, saying, "This is the most delicious thing in the world! Happy, happy!" This novel is like eating hotpot at a night market stall, feeling something on your head, reaching out and touching it, bird poop, you laugh loudly, and eat more! Throw it into the hot pot. After a while, with the help of hot pot seasoning and high temperature, the bird droppings become fragrant and lumpy. You smiled evilly, picked it up and put it in your mouth, saying, "This is the most delicious thing in the world! So happy, so happy!" [Smile] The protagonist's character is as good as that of Tang San.

The subject matter is novel, and it's the same as the games I play. It has a sense of immersion, but it's a bit lacking.

I actually finished reading it in one sitting. This author is quite good. No one will read daily chat articles. A novel I just read that involved chatting with beauties has been discontinued. It dropped from 4,000 readers a month to 432 today.

Seeing Chapter 252, 7 female protagonists, it was so exciting to slash and kill. Rule the whole building, that's what an alpha male should do, kill, kill, kill, feel good. Don't engage in useless battles of wits, use your strength to overcome all the tricks. The refreshment level is higher than that of Samsara Paradise. This is how tomatoes should be. Don't worry about so much, just enjoy it and that's it! ! ! Come in and see them all, it's so cool!

Old Biao, your book cover is worth full marks.

The plot is very good so far, and the pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. However, there are still problems. For example, the most important setting is about newcomers. The healthy growth of a building definitely requires many tenants. If the starting subsidies for newcomers are not enough, how can a level 1 door and level 1 cannon defeat a level 5 monster? Moreover, it does not have the rich experience of veteran players, nor its own combat effectiveness, nor does it have resources. Even the teammates are newcomers, with a last-place elimination mechanism. How can a newcomer survive? It is recommended to give newcomers at least the T1 level configuration as a subsidy to give them time to develop, otherwise the settings for newcomers will not make much sense.

This book is of the type that the more you write, the better it gets. At first glance, this is a debut novel. There are still a lot of bad points at the beginning, but they will become less and less later on. I suggest the author read more book reviews to get more readers' pleasure. In the middle and later stages, it should be able to reach a level of about nine points. Unfortunately, some people may have been poisoned in the early stages, so they will suffer more.

The first recommendation and the first number of views are enough to prove the gold content of this book. Apart from the temporary word count being too few and not enough to read, it has no flaws and the gameplay is stable. Anyone who has played Lying Down will understand that many times the situation depends on the situation. If you really want to play Yakuza style, you can either take off quickly and land quickly. Only those who are steady can survive for a long time. They are invincible to those who cheat.

When the dormitory becomes the only safe zone in the apocalypse, you can earn "Nightmare Coins" while sleeping to strengthen everything. This book "Survival in the Dormitory, My Home Became a Beauty Nest" makes the mixed gameplay of "Tower Defense + Apocalypse + Survival" uniquely interesting. The world view constructed by the author San Yun Zhenren is very eye-catching: when human beings wake up, they fall into a "dormitory survival game", the blood mist is full of crises, and only their own dormitory is a pure land. The "Nightmare Master Sequence" in which the protagonist Xu Lang awakens is a highlight of the imagination - you can earn resources while sleeping, and the goddess can also buff sleep efficiency, turning "lying flat and developing" into a hard-core upgrade strategy. From the "shabby wooden door" to the "immortal star gate", from the "electromagnetic turret" to the "stellar cannon", the iteration of equipment is not only a growth line for combat power, but also a line for readers to enjoy the excitement. Every upgrade is like unlocking new technology in a tower defense game, and people can't help but look forward to what surprises the next "after-sleep earnings" will bring. The "beauty den" setting in the book is not just for its name. The female characters are not vases. They are either responsible for combat power or auxiliary experts. Their interaction with the protagonist has ambiguous tension and serves the core setting of "increasing the conversion rate of nightmare coins", making the emotional line and the plot line become one. The label of suspenseful imagination is not in vain. The monsters in the blood mist, the unknown outside the dormitory, and the truth behind the game, all the layers of suspense are like hooks to attract people to read on. If you like the tension of survival in the apocalypse, the exhilaration of tower defense upgrades, and are interested in suspenseful imaginary stories, this 830,000-word serial novel is worth pursuing. Watching the protagonist in the dormitory use "sleep development" as the strongest survival rule in the apocalypse, it really takes lay-down literature and hard-core survival to a new level.

, The author sometimes makes some seemingly stupid decisions, but there will be better choices later. However, the author does not use nonsense to explain, so many people are too impatient to understand. For example, if the author upgrades a practice method to increase physical attributes without an upper limit to other damage skills, some people feel that the practice method is a waste, but in fact, a more efficient practice method will be synthesized later. Whether it's data, plot or character development, this is the best choice. Even in the era of gods fighting, this is still a masterpiece. I thought everything was good until the battle in the building. The author needs to figure out whether there is something wrong with the outline. From the beginning of the blood rain, the crazy number dropped from thousands to hundreds. There was a big problem with the rhythm. I was also ready to leave. There was no sign of filling the gap between the underworld and the real world in the early stage. Now a new setting is opened. The scene of cleaning up the dormitory building of the survival game is a conflict between the left and right brains. This plot directly trampled the survival game's big feet, and the half-immortal body has become a weakling. Survival games, dormitories, mad kings and other taboos, the subordinate relationship between the four players suddenly turned into a struggle relationship, and the player's growth suddenly became a joke. In the previous survival game, killing Bigger, the messenger of the underworld, was like a farce, and Blood Rain obtained the power of earthquakes. This is the power of a god. I thought I was going to open a new map and see advanced people. The dormitory building, but it turns out that the promotion setting of the building battle is to suppress the dormitory building and the players. The other dormitory buildings are too long, smelly and long. The Crazy King Building has 1.3 Million words and has not been upgraded to level 10. Previously, it was said that there will be a level 30 dormitory building and a level 60 boss monster at level 4 and 5. It is obvious that the writing is broken. The plot is infinitely stretched, the main line cannot be advanced, and it is no longer attractive. It slipped away, but it does not affect the early stage. It is indeed a good source of food. Those who are short of books can read 1.2 Million words.

The writing is so good, Shuang Wen has fun with beautiful women every day, and the battle is resolved in a few minutes. There is an upgrade that can only be upgraded every time when shit hits the head. It almost made my left and right brains fight each other. It was so good! 5 Star praise! ! !

It is a pretty good survival novel in Tomato, but its shortcomings are more obvious: it is not exciting enough; most people mentioned the combat power, and occasionally there are a few minor flaws such as: data errors, detailed introduction, and then I can't afford it... Objectively speaking, if you don't pay attention to the minor points, you can read it. You can save some and read it again. It's not good to just follow up.

A relatively good seedling 🌱. In the basic setting, you will get "Nightmare Coins" when you sleep. If you have a girl that the protagonist has a crush on, Baka Baka will have a percentage increase in "Nightmare Coins". Then there is the matter of killing monsters and exploding equipment, which is similar to a tower defense game, and you can also go out as a team to kill them. Check it out for yourself. What's more common is that Tomato's author doesn't update too many words. What's going on?

Red LV8, 40.75 Points/50 points Start+Follow-up 150%: 5+4 Writing + Creativity 125%: 4+4 Plug-in + Setting 75%: 5+5 Rhythm + Main Line 75%: 4+3 Detail + Logic 75%: 3+3 Extra points: none Feelings: There is a fine novel, highly recommended. Score calculation: 1.5×9+1.25×8+0.75×23=40.75 Points Difficulty score: 139 (above 100) Since the clipboard is blocked, the number of typing by hand is reduced. ─────────────────── Red LV10, 50.75 (Full score) Start + follow-up: 5+5 Writing + Creativity: 5+4 Plug-in + setting: 4+5 Rhythm + main line: 5+4 Details + Logic: 4+4 Extra: Red 1×5 Feel: Tested, 80% Worth (15th Edition) Calculation: 15+9×1.25+26×0.75+5=50.75 Points Seventeenth Edition Added (Test)

Okay, finally there is a book that truly talks about lying down and developing. The previous books were all just trying to sell people off. Come on, look forward to it.

I have seen the latest 268 chapters so far. I have a few comments from a 30+ year old bookworm. They are purely personal opinions. Discussions are welcome. There are two main purposes: First, it is rare to see a good book, and I hope the author will not write it wrong later - if the author can see it. Second, if book friends have similar good books, please recommend them. Thanks in advance! Advantages: The first one is the smoothness of the storyline and the control of the rhythm! At this point, I am not sure whether the author has mastered the exact technique or whether he achieved this effect by chance (actually I prefer the latter), which will be discussed in detail later. Multiple female protagonists, no vase, no kneeling and licking, no holy mother, decisive killing, online IQ, clear management, appropriate difficulty and combat power settings, enjoyable enough but not invincible. Judging from the current information, the "map" that will not be opened later is still very large and worth looking forward to. Disadvantages: There are too many skills, props, facilities, etc., Too detailed and complicated, and they are beginning to encroach on the plot, or even interfere with the plot. With this as the source, the protagonist's behavior has become unclear, and the often-said collapse of the combat power system has begun to show signs. For example, the protagonist's main idea is to seek stability, but sometimes he is inexplicably reckless. In the previous analysis, the dormitory building wanted to target itself, but it often provoked confrontation without fear, added blood and hatred to attract monsters, and refused to hand over the knife. Since it is so strong, why spend precious resources upgrading defensive facilities? Isn't it better to take the initiative? If you have the confidence to guard the goal, why not upgrade your bed quickly? Obviously, the sooner you upgrade, the bigger the snowball will become. Summary: Despite its shortcomings, I still give it 5 stars and highly recommend it. Among the survival novels I have read, this one ranks first. Suggestion: I hope the author can focus on plot advancement and rhythm control, and not spend too much time writing about skills and props. As a street writer who has written books and earned some electricity bills, I know how much effort it takes to set up these data (props, skills, etc.). It can't be too high or too low, and we have to pay attention to the problem of conflict and coordination, etc... Why bother? In almost all novels that focus on props and skills, I no longer look at their data after the middle and late stages, because they are boring. Moreover, it is easy for the author to forcibly distort the protagonist's behavior and plot in order to write this part well. For example, the newly released simulation is really powerful and avoids many "pitfalls". The question is, why didn't the protagonist step into the trap before? Does this count as the author forcibly giving weight to "simulation"? Skip the skills and facilities and focus on the advancement of the plot. There are still a lot of building battles, blood mist world, invitations, etc. Waiting to be written. This is the main course. The author builds a virtual world, and it is impossible to cover everything and make every place reasonable. You shouldn't force yourself in this aspect, and you should put your energy into what "shuangwen" should focus on, that is, in the direction of "shuang". The plot is the main course of enjoyment. The props, skills, combat power, pretense, women, etc. Are all just sweet and bitter seasonings. There was no seasoning and the main dish was bland. But there are only seasonings... You can't fill your stomach with this. I hope the author can seriously consider it. Finally, look for books of the same type: dormitory books are preferred, but other survival books are also acceptable. The first important point is that the plot is smooth and the rhythm is tight (this may be a bit false). Then, it must be fun. You can be a steady person who plays the role of a pig and eats the tiger, you can be a behind-the-scenes type who is good at planning and planning, or you can be an invincible person who can conquer ten things with one effort and have no brains. No heroine or multiple heroines are fine, but licking is not allowed. You can make a vase, but you can't cause trouble without thinking. That's it for now, I wonder if I can add content later?

I can see it, but there are a lot of small problems, such as data and names. Also, sometimes the IQ of the sidekick is a problem The author probably thinks that the score is a bit high. He has to jump like this repeatedly every time without moving up the bed. In other cases, it can be understood that it is to cope with emergencies, but when there is still time and safety, he does not hurry up and upgrade the bed first [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's really okay, Liangcao. There are no bad points in the front, but the writing is not very good. As long as the author doesn't make trouble, it's basically fine. The cheats won't be too big, and it won't affect the balance. There's nothing to say about the character. Come on.

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Except for a little bit of pressure on combat power, it's not bad. Others are spraying pressure on combat power, which is actually not bad. Anyone who has played the Ghost Dormitory knows that the ghost will come to you at the beginning. If you can't develop at all, you will die suddenly. If you want to kill the ghost, unless the ghost doesn't come to you in the early stage, you have to open the blind box to get good things. If you don't open the blind box, it will be hard to get a deal. If it were me, I would also plan to upgrade the bed or door. You have to make sure that the ghosts are not knocking on your door like crazy so that you have time to develop. The protagonist is a normal person who upgrades the bed and door, unlike some guys who have no brains to upgrade the bed. If it is a game, it doesn't matter whether you win or lose, but now you are more stupid than the protagonist [smile]

I've read about 40 chapters, which is okay, but a lot of the data written by the author is a bit abstract, but I can still read it if I don't care about this.

Halfway through, I realized it wasn't finished [crying] This is the best novel about dormitory upgrades I've ever read. It's logical, compact, and humorous. The author knows exactly what's cool. It's not easy to read a good novel these days. Come on, author [like] [like]

It's very, very good to read. I started reading it last night. The next afternoon, I read more than 200 chapters from the first page. To be honest, this novel is very good. I feel a little tired after reading more than 100 chapters in other novels. But I don't feel that way when I read this novel. The author's writing is excellent [ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Author, please update quickly. I have eight novels now, and they are not enough to read. I beg you, author, please update quickly, but the quality will not drop. I follow you, author, and I hope you will have better works in the future. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

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The author read this solemn oath after me: I swear: From today on, I will voluntarily update five times a day and never stop updating. I will not watch TV series, travel, or get sick. I will no longer play games or write about literature. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. I firmly believe that I am a good writer. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day and night.

I have finished chasing the latest chapter, and I would like to share my thoughts. First of all, regarding the female protagonists, there are definitely multiple female protagonists (I came here for this too). I have collected about six or seven of the more than 250 pieces. In fact, each female protagonist is not homogeneous, and her personality has her own characteristics, so it is okay to accept them. It's not a vase, but it can still help the protagonist, but in the presence of the protagonist, the description of the heroine is less, and there are not many emotional scenes. But I like the fact that the protagonist recommends girls without procrastination, and there is no pretense (to be honest, this kind of bothers me). As for the combat, I actually won't comment on the combat. I personally think it's okay. I also saw that a few authors might mess with the settings later on, and the reviews also pointed it out. Finally, I took a look at the comment area, and there were many people talking about the problem of poisonous points. I don't quite understand what everyone's definition of poisonous points is. My own views on poisonous points are basically related to the female protagonist. For example, the female protagonist has a good relationship with other men, or the protagonist gives girls to others, or the protagonist creates a clone to flirt with the female protagonist. I have not seen any of these situations happen. As for the poisonous points in the combat, I don't think they are poisonous points. In my opinion, it is just that the author has a headache and did not deal with it well.