Lu Fan, a young man from the Eastern Wasteland, held a broken jade pendant in his hand and was humiliated by his family during the spirit testing ceremony. When the dragon pattern on the palm breaks out at the critical moment of life and death, the sealed bloodline of the ancient holy dragon is revealed.
From being a handyman in the outer sect of Xuanyun Sect to being a genius in Zhongzhou Academy, he made elixirs with his left hand to subdue the eight wastelands, and held a sword in his right hand to break through the sky.
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Lu Fan never thought that he would become a waste among everyone because his bloodline was too unnatural and was sealed by his mother; he never thought that his mother, who was usually bullied and dared not resist, was the legendary female sword fairy, the most powerful person, and the powerful immortal emperor!
When he knew that his mother was the top powerhouse in the continent, he didn't understand why all this happened, nor why his mother faked her death to lie to him. He wanted to know what his mother had done... Who was his father, and where was he? What happened to my own family...
Everything is just waiting for the opportunity...
This writing is relatively true and objective, so I give it a thumbs up.
What you wrote is good. I hope you can continue to write better works!
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit...[Face covering]
Lu Fan never thought that he would become a waste among everyone because his bloodline was too unnatural and was sealed by his mother; he never thought that his mother, who was usually bullied and dared not resist, was the legendary female sword fairy, the most powerful person, and the powerful immortal emperor! When he knew that his mother was the top powerhouse in the continent, he didn't understand why all this happened, nor why his mother faked her death to lie to him. He wanted to know what his mother had done... Who was his father, and where was he? What happened to my own family... Everything is just waiting for the opportunity...
This writing is relatively true and objective, so I give it a thumbs up.
What you wrote is good. I hope you can continue to write better works!
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit...[Face covering]