Spiritual qi revival + behind-the-scenes scheming
Chen Xuan was an ordinary wage earner on Blue Star.
But an accident caused him to transmigrate to another world, where he became a lowly horse slave in the Cui family manor.
In this thoroughly ordinary world,
Chen Xuan was miserable, complaining that fate had treated him unfairly.
“Ding... The Super Martial World System is at your service.”
But the super martial arts defined by the System seem rather different from what he expected!
“Low-level martial arts can let you fly through the sky and burrow underground? Are you sure?”
“Of course not!”
The System stubbornly retorted, “Didn’t you see the flying sword beneath that person’s feet?”
…
Chen Xuan seemed to accept the System’s explanation and began focusing on the grand project of reviving spiritual qi and fabricating mythological history.
The world soon ascended to a higher level once more.
“System, explain what’s going on here.”
Chen Xuan was speechless. “That’s as powerful as a nuclear bomb! You’re telling me this is only mid-level martial arts?”
“Stay calm, Host. It’s only a tiny bit stronger.”
“You call this a tiny bit?”
As more and more extraordinary beings emerged, Chen Xuan gradually accepted the truth.
The System’s definitions were simply ridiculous.
But why did it feel so satisfying?
Years later, an against-the-heavens world came into being.
Chen Xuan smiled faintly. “So this is what a super martial world really means!”
Chapter 16 is too poisonous. The general died fighting for the country. Just because there was a spy in the army and the pass was broken, he was deprived of the title and his family was demoted to common people. He did not commit treason or surrender. Who the hell will fight for you again 🤮
I didn't see anything extraordinary about this Qin Emperor. I only saw extreme arrogance and greed. This is not the kind of quality and strength that the protagonists such as Xiao Yan and Ye Fan have. The protagonist is so licky, he feeds everything to him in mouthfuls, and he has a giant baby, and he still screams, it's really funny
Except for Emperor Qin, there is Emperor Qin
It is recommended not to watch Vicious Vicious Vicious, the main character is just a tool and there are still scenes. To be honest, if the protagonist wants to do this, it would be better to directly engage in the way of heaven. It really feels cool. Anyway, I personally feel that it is interesting not to watch it. Author, you, the protagonist, just sit down for me.
The system is not working. You hide behind the scenes, but that doesn't stop you from planting means in the world. And only the strongest person in the world in this system can the protagonist be on par with him. But the protagonist gave him an equal score. It may not necessarily be better than him.
Just put yourself in the role of Emperor Qin, and keep writing about Emperor Qin. Just write (reviving spiritual energy, traveling through time and becoming Emperor Qin and beginning the rise of Emperor Qin). You are writing behind the scenes, and you want all schools of thought to flourish.
The ideas are okay, but they are too messy and I feel like the writing is too detailed and unnecessary. After all, if you write too detailedly, it will easily lead to that person's perspective. It should be viewed from the perspective of the protagonist and should be dominated by several other supporting characters. For example, if the protagonist builds a ruin, what does this person want to do? What does the other person want? And what's the final result? What was the impact? Where has the main plot advanced? Don't include the supporting characters' supporting characters. 🤔
The author is wondering, do you want to follow the path of immortality or the innate path of martial arts, such as the traditional path of cultivating immortals, practicing Qi, building up pills, Yuanying, transforming into a spirit, returning to the void, and completing the tribulation, or taking the third-level warrior, the second-level warrior, the first-level warrior, and the acquired innate grand master. Although Tianren is a bit weak, if you work hard, you can still reach the path of immortality.
Is this protagonist the same person as Emperor Qin? All resources are piled on him. Protagonist, don't involve yourself behind the scenes with others. You might as well give the emperor a system directly. Feed everything to him. One family is the only one. How to balance it?
It feels like there are more poisonous points. Since the protagonist slowly develops the world, it takes a long time span. It can be slowly upgraded over years, decades, thousands of years, and the result is one day. In one day, the emperor will directly become an innate strong man, and then slowly write a balanced stand. Don't bring yourself into that emperor. If necessary, he will die. There is no problem. No one is the protagonist.